The Shield - PreRish One Shot - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

18

Views

8.5k

Users

8

Likes

82

Frequent Posters

IAdoreYou thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 5 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Can everything unfold just the way you described it in the show as well? This is just so perfect that I want to watch Karan portray that concern on screen

But alas. All we’d get is wacky editing and sounds and smug smiles 😭

But I seriously loved how she has accepted him and his relief on finding his family is safe was beautiful!! 👏

This is such a sweet comment. Thank you so much for taking out time to read the shot and also to write this feedback. It absolutely mean a lot.

❤️

IAdoreYou thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 5 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: dumas

Wow that was so emotional ,I love how she worried forhim.

loved that she did not leave him alone awesome update .

So cute he was trying to resure her he was ok ,and him telling

her that he hated tears .

Thank you so much. ❤ I am glad to know that you had a nice read.

IAdoreYou thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 5 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: ShumiM

I do t know why I cried during reading specially when he said he don't like someone to cry for him. Thanks.do write more.

I take it as a compliment that you felt the shot enough to cry. Thank you. ❤

mitras thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#14
This is emotional and heart felt
Gurmeet4Drashti thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 5 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: IAdoreYou

This is such a sweet comment. Thank you so much for taking out time to read the shot and also to write this feedback. It absolutely mean a lot.

❤️

You’re welcome ♥️

I adore you and your one shots!

MR21 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#16

The Shield, what an apt name for this one. Bajaj saving his family without thinking about himself🥺. Kukki😭😭😭. Prerna thinking that he should be fine for kukki and for her even though she didn't voiced it. I liked how she refused Anurag's help in looking after kukki, but too Shivi's help. The last part is feels❤️. The way he takes his daughters name, then hers immediately after coming to consciousness❤️. His way of assuring her that he is fine by trying to smile.

I loved this one.

IAdoreYou thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 5 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: mitras

This is emotional and heart felt

Thank you. 🤗

IAdoreYou thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 5 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

You’re welcome ♥️

I adore you and your one shots!

How sweet. ❤️

IAdoreYou thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 5 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: MR21

The Shield, what an apt name for this one. Bajaj saving his family without thinking about himself🥺. Kukki😭😭😭. Prerna thinking that he should be fine for kukki and for her even though she didn't voiced it. I liked how she refused Anurag's help in looking after kukki, but too Shivi's help. The last part is feels❤️. The way he takes his daughters name, then hers immediately after coming to consciousness❤️. His way of assuring her that he is fine by trying to smile.

I loved this one.

I am terrible when it comes to naming tales. I couldn't come up with any for this one so quickly went through this again and named it as The Shield' so it makes me real happy if you say you liked it.

Thank you so much. Such a pleasure to know that you had a nice read. 🤗🤗

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".