Taarey Short Story - Khamma Ghani [Completed and Migrated] - Page 11

Chapter 5:

Finally the bubble burst! God that was so needed!

That closed room analogy👏 #chummeshwari

You're fricking amazing with analogies!

Okay I have to disagree here. The breakup had a logic, it was for the greater good, bla-bla.. but it was never the right thing to do. Toh usko sahi bolna, umm🤔 ..... 👎🏼

The end was cute😳

Chapter 6:

Oh my God, that flirting! Shit you not, I was like thiswhile reading it. And that saala-jeeju was just the icing on the cake! Wait I should say cherry, as apparently her favorite cake is black forest which has a cherry on top. But I personally am no so fond of cherries, so icing is superior. Get it?

I don't know what I'm saying. It's almost 12 in the night. Sorry.🤪

The second part of the update felt very real in some way. Like that simple understanding that she is busy and her simply stating what she felt felt so real. Any relation is based on communication and I'm looking forward to where this will so as the foundation being laid is strong this time around. Hopefully nothing comes and fricks it up!

Originally posted by: 2111_shweta

Chapter 3:

It's never about what you want. Its always about what you really really want!

What?

Please ignore!😆

Those pep talks were amazing. Loved how both of them are still on the same page.

Rey's reaction on finding the truth about engagement felt so genuine❤️

That last paragraph is heavy man. Those lines were beautiful. "They didn't need to ignore themselves to focus on the other!" ❤️

I'm really glad that she agreed to give love a try one more time.

I was so damn nervous about your review aahhh!!

Haye philosophy! Yaad rakhenge hum, I love how some things go so much deeper than words💓💓

I'm so glad tumko genuine laga, that part was crucial for me yaarr

Haha I'm tired of all these pop culture couples acting so unhealthily dependant and sacrificing, had to show that!

Thankyou babe 💓💓💓

Originally posted by: 2111_shweta

Chapter 4:

Swayam's reaction reminded me of Ross for some reason, maybe the hug, not sure. But glad that he isn't annoyed like last time. Though that was fun to watch🤪

Taani felt really ruthless here. I mean yeah she has gone over it a million times in her head but to say it out loud, it's a little harsh. Rey clearly is still stuck in time. Feel so sorry for him.

Jaan!🤣 God I miss that jealousy!

Rey, poor bebe! He's so damn conflicted and not want to upset her in any way possible. Kya se kya hogaya..😛

Sharon's taunt😆 Why is she warning them? Technically, she gave rey the idea for a zor ka jhatka, jo bohot zor se laga😆

I'm not sure if my comments are making sense, but I've already read till chap six so just re-reading and commenting as I'm reading. So it's just observations. I swear chap seven se atchese comment karungi.

Aww, arey is Baar toh bhai ki wish thi ki saath hojaye

I get you! Like breakups are a big deal, she should know! Ye unconscious taunting hogayi hai. In my head, it's just that waapas saath hona reminds her of the break-up quite often isliye she keeps bringing it up... Chapter 6 me she realises ki wo uske liye kyu itna zyaada bada thaa..

Rey and his balancing acts are never ending, poor guy sab kuch kitna sabhalega 😂😂

Well, the only explanation is Siren, usne bol diya bas😂😂😂 wo idea permanent tha nahi aur ab na ho toh better lol! Abhi tak she's playing my man ki ranting awaaz for Taarey here😂😂😂

They do make a lot of sense, thankyou so much for your genuine responses luv💓💓

Originally posted by: 2111_shweta

Chapter 5:

Finally the bubble burst! God that was so needed!

That closed room analogy👏 #chummeshwari

You're fricking amazing with analogies!

Okay I have to disagree here. The breakup had a logic, it was for the greater good, bla-bla.. but it was never the right thing to do. Toh usko sahi bolna, umm🤔 ..... 👎🏼

The end was cute😳

Yasss, dan kitna man me band rakhenge ye log..

Thankyou so much, I was actually quite doubtful about that but I love analogies.. one reason I wanted to put it in was history me China ka open door policy 😂😂😂 reminds me of school and a wonderful teacher🥀🥀

Wasn't right yaar, just that they're seeing it from the motives point of view and the fact that aim toh achieve hua, Taani did gain a lot of confidence and bad move but mistakes hogayi ab kitna us hi Ko.. and as said there, in this story Taani specifically called Rey for the engagement because she wanted him to move on, literally the same thing on their part where they both crossed some limits..

Thankyouu, well dance😍😍😍

Originally posted by: 2111_shweta

Chapter 6:

Oh my God, that flirting! Shit you not, I was like thiswhile reading it. And that saala-jeeju was just the icing on the cake! Wait I should say cherry, as apparently her favorite cake is black forest which has a cherry on top. But I personally am no so fond of cherries, so icing is superior. Get it?

I don't know what I'm saying. It's almost 12 in the night. Sorry.

The second part of the update felt very real in some way. Like that simple understanding that she is busy and her simply stating what she felt felt so real. Any relation is based on communication and I'm looking forward to where this will so as the foundation being laid is strong this time around. Hopefully nothing comes and fricks it up!

I lovvveeeddd the hello assistant, yes boss waala phone call unka, and I know everybodyyy loves jealous Rey lol! Uske chakkar me Mai shayad Shivam Ko cameo dedu yaha😂😂😂

Yaar black forest is so bleh, never liked it but ok whatever, Rey knowing her fav cake was cute so chala lenge.. haha mujhe toh icing bhi nahi pasand or even cake🤦‍♀️ I'm losing my sweet tooth, is this what adulthood looks like😂😭

Please sleep on time girll, I'm worried about you

Haha censoring 😂😂

Thankyou for actually doing this, trust me your honest feedback means a lot you are one majorrr inspiration for me to write and I was genuinely scared to be able to meet your expectations.. thanks luv💓 thanks for the honesty🥀🥀🥀

Originally posted by: Trisha49

Yasss, dan kitna man me band rakhenge ye log..

Thankyou so much, I was actually quite doubtful about that but I love analogies.. one reason I wanted to put it in was history me China ka open door policy 😂😂😂 reminds me of school and a wonderful teacher🥀🥀

Wasn't right yaar, just that they're seeing it from the motives point of view and the fact that aim toh achieve hua, Taani did gain a lot of confidence and bad move but mistakes hogayi ab kitna us hi Ko.. and as said there, in this story Taani specifically called Rey for the engagement because she wanted him to move on, literally the same thing on their part where they both crossed some limits..

Thankyouu, well dance😍😍😍

I guess I forgot to add there ki the breakup was a mistake. They have accepted it and now are moving ahead. Also yes a lot of growth happened but it was a choice which turned out fruitful but the choice was not right.

While reading I just felt that they didn't address it as a mistake and instead tried to justify it.

Originally posted by: Trisha49

I lovvveeeddd the hello assistant, yes boss waala phone call unka, and I know everybodyyy loves jealous Rey lol! Uske chakkar me Mai shayad Shivam Ko cameo dedu yaha😂😂😂

Yaar black forest is so bleh, never liked it but ok whatever, Rey knowing her fav cake was cute so chala lenge.. haha mujhe toh icing bhi nahi pasand or even cake🤦‍♀️ I'm losing my sweet tooth, is this what adulthood looks like😂😭

Please sleep on time girll, I'm worried about you

Haha censoring 😂😂

Thankyou for actually doing this, trust me your honest feedback means a lot you are one majorrr inspiration for me to write and I was genuinely scared to be able to meet your expectations.. thanks luv💓 thanks for the honesty🥀🥀🥀

Me too girl, that phone call was the cutest!

Shivam as a cameo is always welcome

Definitely feels like you hit adulthood. But never let the sweet tooth disappear, it can be the only good thing in this adulthood!

I don't want to censor but IF is making me, so I thought ki instead of f**k why not write frick🤪

I wish I had gotten them when I started, I wouldn't have been all in my head. I may sound a little criticizing at some times, but I just want to let you know that no hard feelings.

Luv! Hayyeee You know for some reason in my head I read the luv in his accent. Baki pura sentence will be normal but luv suddenly turns British😆

Originally posted by: 2111_shweta

I guess I forgot to add there ki the breakup was a mistake. They have accepted it and now are moving ahead. Also yes a lot of growth happened but it was a choice which turned out fruitful but the choice was not right.

While reading I just felt that they didn't address it as a mistake and instead tried to justify it.

Hmm, will keep it mind💓

Originally posted by: 2111_shweta

Me too girl, that phone call was the cutest!

Shivam as a cameo is always welcome

Definitely feels like you hit adulthood. But never let the sweet tooth disappear, it can be the only good thing in this adulthood!

I don't want to censor but IF is making me, so I thought ki instead of f**k why not write frick🤪

I wish I had gotten them when I started, I wouldn't have been all in my head. I may sound a little criticizing at some times, but I just want to let you know that no hard feelings.

Luv! Hayyeee You know for some reason in my head I read the luv in his accent. Baki pura sentence will be normal but luv suddenly turns British😆

Aye aye captainn, wise words! Let's focus on rabdi😍😍😍

Haha I know, genuinely jo laga wo hi bolo, hume acha lagta hai jaanke, and I know you're already sugar coating 😂😂 like bohot jyaada hi sweetly batati ho

Continue that! British accent makes a lot of things sexier😂😍