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Posted: 5 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: ArShiFever.

Beautiful OS...Loved it...The way Mr Bajaj was concerned about Prerna & their child...The room scene...Her apology even thought it wasn't her fault well not totally...l'm hating both Maasi & Tanvi...I can't believe I'm saying this but I prefer Mohini Basu over Maasi...Maasi makes her look like a saint...Hopefully CVS won't drag Masi & Tanvi track...Plus I'm kinda waiting for Mr Bajaj ex-wife entry.

Thank you so much👍🏼

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneha_17

OS is beautiful and story is amazing..

You are an excellent writer and scene description is marvelous.

Glad that you liked it 😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It was beautiful.

Buri nazar wale tera moonh kala for Maasi n Tanvi.

Prerna ordering the staff to do the decorations and Bajaj admiring her haye she should have turned and told him Aap kya dekh rahe hain ye balloons lagaiye. The pregnancy and stool pe chadna n girna n the catch classic hai. When she climbed on the stool he should have held her by the waist and help her hoga future mein hoga.

Always a treat the three {four} members Bajaj family, they look so good together. Bajaj hesitant but then the beti wants what the beti wants and it is her mom. Basus can do is only watch and become tandoori Basus.

I hope one day Tanvi or maasi fall and break all the bones in their body. Anu wants to take care of her but she wants Bajaj. He moved back because he thought there is a line he should not cross. At the hospital also Cookie consoling her dad, at these times bacche bade ban jaate hain and bade bacche. He was so worried about his wife and their child not all is ok. Maasi and Tanvi should be exposed in a big way.

Aankh mein kuch gir gaya hai, he does not want to show her his weak side because then he could be taken advantage of using her just like she made the deal for Anu.

Mr. Bajaj marble is porous and gentle she knows your gentle side and also that her love will seep through you.

Just amazing.

The dori tying, when it happens in such couples I always write it's just like tying shoe laces.

So Bajaj should say it's like tying shoe laces i can do it too, she will think inko meri blouse ki dori aur shoe laces mein fark nahi lagta.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wowww tani it is amazing .. and love the way how you use my fav zgh dialogue

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Posted: 5 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Chahat_A_Doshi

It was beautiful.

Buri nazar wale tera moonh kala for Maasi n Tanvi.

Prerna ordering the staff to do the decorations and Bajaj admiring her haye she should have turned and told him Aap kya dekh rahe hain ye balloons lagaiye. The pregnancy and stool pe chadna n girna n the catch classic hai. When she climbed on the stool he should have held her by the waist and help her hoga future mein hoga.

Always a treat the three {four} members Bajaj family, they look so good together. Bajaj hesitant but then the beti wants what the beti wants and it is her mom. Basus can do is only watch and become tandoori Basus.

I hope one day Tanvi or maasi fall and break all the bones in their body. Anu wants to take care of her but she wants Bajaj. He moved back because he thought there is a line he should not cross. At the hospital also Cookie consoling her dad, at these times bacche bade ban jaate hain and bade bacche. He was so worried about his wife and their child not all is ok. Maasi and Tanvi should be exposed in a big way.

Aankh mein kuch gir gaya hai, he does not want to show her his weak side because then he could be taken advantage of using her just like she made the deal for Anu.

Mr. Bajaj marble is porous and gentle she knows your gentle side and also that her love will seep through you.

Just amazing.

The dori tying, when it happens in such couples I always write it's just like tying shoe laces.

So Bajaj should say it's like tying shoe laces i can do it too, she will think inko meri blouse ki dori aur shoe laces mein fark nahi lagta.

Glad that you liked it 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: opsora2090

Wowww tani it is amazing .. and love the way how you use my fav zgh dialogue

Thank you so much oppo 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

Kashaf's dialouge❤️

This was so sweet and adorable. What a beautiful piece of writing.

Thanks so much for this.

Glad that you liked it 😳

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank you so much everyone👍🏼

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