Karvi (Karn + urvi). ( Chapter 2 is updated)

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Vinay

@Karnfan999

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Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Guys I know you want to find out what the Brahmin is predicted but please bear with me for some more hours

It will be revealed in next chapter.

I promise it

Read and review as it gives hope for first writters like me

Edited by Karnfan999 - 6 years ago

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

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Posted: 6 years ago

#12

Wonderful prologues Vinay😃

Eagerly waiting for the next update⭐️

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Vinay

@Karnfan999

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Posted: 6 years ago

#13

Guys sorry for the delay.

I have my exams at that time and after the exams there is a technical fest in my college so I had no time to update.

I am going to update the fic within 2 or 3 days

Thank you for your patience

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

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Posted: 6 years ago

#14

Eagerly waiting for it😊

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Vinay

@Karnfan999

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#15

Chapter 1

A lone boy is standing on the bank of river ,hi h eyes unfocused and a frown on his face.his face is like mini sun,he is having kavach and kundal in a metal that not had been seen in many eons.

He is none other than karn,the (adopted) son of Radha and adhiradh.The reason he is standing there is because he just have been rejected to practice Archery because of his caste

He vowed then and there to become the best archer in the world. As he going to his house a bramhin stepped into his way and asked"whet troubles you child?"

He don't know why but karn has told all his worries and his ambitions.the bramhin is thinking very deeply after some time he told karn that he will teach him what he know about all the fields of studies.

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Vinay

@Karnfan999

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Nice chapter 😊

Thank you DIDI😊

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Vinay

@Karnfan999

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#17

Chapter 2

As promised to Karn the bramhin has reached him about vedas, rules,ithihasaas and many more.

He also taught Karn to fight with the help of one of his friend.

After he the tutallage is over Karn asked him about gurudakshin

Bramhin: Karn ,in future there will comes a time to break your silence and also to break your word and at that time you will know what my gurudakshin is.

Karn : yes,guruvarya.

After some months....

Karn has decided to wander around the forest where the bramhin has taught him.

As he is wandering he stumbled upon someone.when he gets up to see who is it he receives shock because he stumbled on a little girl may be 5 or 6 years younger his age.

He knows it wrong not to apologise for a girl so he apologize to her and leave her near the campsite of her parents and goes on his way.

But he can not understand why his heart is saying that she is a very important person for him.

Edited by Karnfan999 - 6 years ago

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#18

It seems interesting. Am I not a Karn and Urvi fan but I like how the way the story is progressing. Continue soon and with longer updates.

Sam

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Vinay

@Karnfan999

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: MsChanadlerBong
It seems interesting. Am I not a Karn and Urvi fan but I like how the way the story is progressing. Continue soon and with longer updates.
Sam

Thank you

I will try to update long chapters.