AkshAn SS: Yeh kya ho gaya(Last Part Pg 4)

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Everything was back to normal, Antara was out of Akshat & Guddan's life, Saraswati realized her mistake, Akshat, Durga, Saraswati & Dadi after lots of efforts won Guddan's trust back & soon Angad & Revati's marriage was fixed. It was a normal day Guddan was getting ready when Akshat came & hugged Guddan from behind.

G:Kya baat hai aaj bada pyar araha hai humpe

AJ:Pyar toh har roz aata hai tumhi karne nehi deti

G:Kya aap bhi Jindal Saab

Guddan bows her head in embarrassment, Akshat nuzzles her neck.

AJ:Kitne muskil se tumhe paya hai Guddan khone ka dar laga rehta hai

Guddan turns towards him & holds his face.

G:Hum kahin jane se rahe aur agar kisidin apko bhul gaye toh aap itne khadus hai ki yaad ajayega

AJ:Haan mein hi hun khadus

Guddan brings her mouth near his ear.

G:Romantic bhi hai.. waise sham ko jaldi ayiga surprise hai

Akshat was amused at her statement, he kiss her forehead. She pushed him & ran towards door but turn towards him.

G:Jaldi niche ayi nasta lagati hub

Saying this she left & Akshat scratched his neck smiling.

All were having breakfast when all of a sudden Akshat remembers something & was about to get up but Guddan stops him.

G:Kya hua

AJ:Woh kamre mein file bhul gaya

G:Aap bathiye mera hogaya hai mein leke ati hun

Akshat nodded & Guddan went to room & takes the file with her. As she was descending the stairs her step slipped & she falls rolling down the stairs. Kishore saw the incident & shouted.

K:Guddan ji

All turned towards the stairs & saw Guddan fainted near the stairs. All rushed towards her & Akshat takes her in his arm, lots of blood was coming out from her forehead.

AJ:Guddan.. Guddan.. Jaldi car nikal

And Akshat picks Guddan up & rushes towards car.

Hospital

Guddan was treated & all family members were waiting outside the ward. Just then the doctor comes out, Akshat went near him.

AJ:Guddan kaisi hai

Doc:She is perfectly fine darne koi baat nehi hai mamuli chot hai.. unhe hosh anake baat ghar le jaa sakte hai

AJ:Thank you doctor

Doctor left, Akshat turned towards his family.

AJ:Maa aap sab log ghar jayiye mein Guddan ko leke aata hun

A:Are you sure bhai?

AJ:Haan

All family members left & Akshat went inside the ward & sat on stool near Guddan's bed & holds her hand. After sometime Guddan opens her eyes & looks at Akshat confused.

G:Jindal Saab hum ahan

AJ:Ji madam aap siriyo se gir gayi aur apke saar peh chot ayihai thank god kuch nehi hua kitni baar kahan hai sambhal ke chala karo phir bhi baat nehi sunti ho agar phirse khodiya hota toh

G(whispers):Khadus kahike

AJ:Maine sun liya

Guddan bows her head in embarrassment.

AJ:Tum rest karo main discharge ki formalities puri karke aata hun

Saying this Akshat left from there. Guddan stractched her neck & realized she was wearing her mangalsutra.

G(in mind):Yeh Jindal Saab ne kab pehnaya aur hum siriyon se kaise gir gaye hum toh Goa mein just panchen the aur hume phirse khodena ka kya matlab hai.. Arey bapre ho kya raha hai

Jindal House

Akshat & Guddan reached home, he was holding her hand throughout the way & she was giving him confused looks. As they entered the house all rushed to them.

A:Bhabhi aap thik toh haina?

G:Haan Angad ji

Laxmi came forward & hugs her, Guddan was shocked at her behavior. Laxmi breaks the hug & holds her hand.

L:Kya sasuma dekh ke nehi chal sakti thi aap dekhiye agar aisa kuch hua na toh hum apki bahu ke hasiyat se nehi apki best friend ke hasiyat se apko dante gen aur bhool jayengen aap humari saas hai

G(in mind):Yeh humari dost kab bani

D:Laxmi bilkul sahi kehrahi hai Sasuma aap dhayan rakha kijiye apna

S:Haan sasumaji

Guddan eyes widens hearing Durga & Saraswati's words.

G(in mind):Yeh Durga ji hume kabse sasuma bulane lagi aur Saru bahu kabse sasumaji bulane lagi yeh ho kya raha hai

Guddan looked at Akshat confused. Akshat just shrugs.

AJ:Mujhe aise dekh ke koi faida nehi hai agar teeno bahuyen tumpe gussa hoti hai toh tumhara yeh dost bhi tumhe nehi bachapayega

Guddan opens her mouth in shock.

G(in mind):Jindal Saab ne humse pyar se baat kiyi aur yeh kab humare dost bangaye

Da:Arey meri bachi ko satayo maat.. lalla ja ise room mein leh jaa ise aram ki zaroorat hai

Akshat & Guddan started going towards the stairs but as Guddan was weak she couldn't walk properly. Akshat picks her up & carries her to bedroom. This whole time Guddan just stare at him shock as if she has seen a ghost. They entered the bedroom & Akshat lays her down in bed then he noticed her expression.

AJ:Kya hua aise kyun dekh rahi ho jaise koi bhoot dekhliya ho

G:Nehi aisi baat nehi hai

AJ:Toh phir sojao thodi der dinner se pehle utha dunga Revati bhi ani wali hai

He puts the blanket on her & caresses her head & leaves the room. She looked at him & leaving & the next thing she saw which shook her totally. She realized that Antara's picture was removed & her picture was on wall.

G(in mind):Humari tasveer yahan kya kar rahi hai sab humare saath aise kyun behave kar rahe aur hum Goa se wapas kab aye.. hey lord Krishna ho kya raha hai

With all these thoughts she drifted to sleep.

Hope you guys like it. Sorry for grammatical mistakes.


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow! 🤗❤️

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Interesting

Guddu ko goa incident se kuch v yaad nhi hai amazing

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Part - 2


Night

All family member were at dinning table including Revati.

R:Jiju di

AJ:Sorahi hai abhi bulake lata hun

Just then Guddan came & hugs Revati.

G:Arey Chutki kitne din baat

R:Kya di aap bhi kal hi toh mila the aise time pe bhi mazak

Guddan again gets shock, Akshat pulls chair for her. She sat & rest of them also takes their seat. Guddan was looking at the surroundings, she realized that wherever Antara picture was present all were removed.

G(in mind):Yeh Chutki aisa kyun kehrahi hai ki kal mile hai aur Antaraji sari tasveer kahan hai

Guddan confused started eating her food.

Da:Durga bahu kal Pandit ji ko bula lena

D:Ji Dadi

G:Kisliye dadi

Guddan at that time started drinking water.

S:Revati sasuma aur Angad ji shaadi ki date ke liye

Hearing this Guddan chokes. Akshat rubs Guddan's back.

AJ:Guddan sambhal key

Guddan controls herself & stands up.

G:Yeh aap kya keh rahi hai

AJ:Sahi toh kehrahi hai waise inki shaadi mein humari wajah se bohat delay hua hai

G:Chutki tu Angad ji se shaadi

All becomes confused at Guddan's behavior & stands up.

R:Haan Di kitne time se main aur Angad ji ek dusre pyar karte hai apko toh patayi hai

G(shocks):Kab se

AJ:Kya behki behki baat kar rahi ho

G:Hum behki behki baat kar rahe hai ya yeh kar rahi hai.. itni din se yeh Parv se pyar karti thi aur aaj yeh Angad ji se pyar karti hai woh bhi kitne time se balki main khud inse do din pehle mili hun yeh kab se Angad ji ko janti hai

All gets shocks hearing her words. Durga went towards her.

D:Sasuma kya mazak hai yeh

G:Aur Durga ji aap kab se mujhe sasuma bulane lagi kuch din pehle tak toh aap mujhe issh ghar mein dekhna bhi nehi chahti thi

Durga steps back hearing this. Akshat holds Guddan by her shoulders.

AJ:Guddan kya mazak kar rahi ho

G:Hum kyun mazak karengen.. aur ek baat batayi apne toh yeh mangalsutra humare gale se utar ke tod diya tha na toh yeh apne aap jud kaise gaya aur humare galen main kaise aaya

Akshat was shocked hearing her words & he leaves her & try to think what is going on.

G:Aur sabse badi baat humlog toh just Goa pauhche the Indore kaise ayen

All becomes shock hearing this. Angad if realizing what was going on comes forward.

A:Bhabhi aaj ka date kya hai?

G:Arey yeh kaunsi baat hai aaj 21st March hai aur kal holi hai

All becomes shock hearing this, Akshat steps back a little.

AJ:Iska matlab

G:Kya aap date bhi bhulgayen kya hum apko dikhate hai

She takes her phone & on it.

G:Yeh dekhi..

She stops mid-way & becomes shock after checking the date.

G:Aaj 20 September hai yeh kaise..

And she holds her head & she faints. Akshat holds her just in time & pats her face.

AJ:Guddan.. Angad jaldi doctor ko bulayo

A:Haan bhai

Akshat picks her up & takes her to room. Soon the doctor arrives & Akshat tells him what had happened, doctor checks Guddan & turns towards family members.

Doc:Mrs. Jindal ki 7 months ki memory chaligayi hai

All were shocked hearing this, Akshat felt like his whole world stopped.

AJ:Par kaise

Doc:Sayad saar peh chot lagne ki wajah se koi ghabrane wali baat nehi hai bash try kijiyega koi shocking news na dey

AJ:Thank you doctor

The doctor left. All family members looked at each other.

D:Isliye woh aise baat kar rahi thi

S:Iska matlab unhe Goa tak jana yaad hai

V:Unhe yeh yaad nehi Goa mein kya hua

A:Bhabhi ko yeh bhi yaad nehi ki maine kya kiya

L:unhe buaji wali baat bhi yaad nehi

K:Unhe yeh bhi yaad nehi Parv ne kya kiya

R:Unhe yeh bhi yaad nehi ki Antara ne sabke saath kya kiya

D:Rawat ji ke maut ke baren mein bhi nehi pata aur nahi

S:Aur humne unhe saas kaise accept kiya woh bhi nehi

Dadi went towards Akshat & keeps her hand on his shoulder.

Da:Lalla iska matlab

AJ:Iska matlab maa Guddan ko yeh bhi yaad nehi hai ki hum dono kitne ache dost hai aur hum ekdusre se kitna pyar karte hai

Da:Lalla sab thik hojayega thoda waqt dey

AJ:Maa mujhe issh baat ki fikar nehi hai ki woh mujhe aur mera pyar bhool chuki hai

Da:Toh phir

Akshat looks at Guddan & gulps down.

AJ:Issh baat ki fikar hai ki Guddan ko jab hosh ayega aur jab sawal puchegi ki inn saat mahino mein aisa kya hogaya ki itna sab kuch badal gaya toh humsab kitna had tak Guddan ko bina hurt kiya sach bata payega kyuki doctor ne jhatka dene se mana kiya hai aur inn saat mahino jo kuch bhi hua hai usmein sab se zyada dard, dukh aur taqleef Guddan ko hi pauhchi hai

All of them realized what was going to happen.

D,L,S,AJ,Da:Yeh kya hogaya.. ab sach batana na ho payega


Hope you guys like it. Sorry for grammatical mistakes.


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awsome .bechare jindal family qa bolenge guddu ko

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Superb update

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Wow

Amazing , interesting

Kya kare kya na kare yeh kaisi m uskil hay

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The plot is superb

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