You belongs to only me Mishbeer os part 2 updated - Page 2

Originally posted by: Zainabnaz

Beautiful story,amazing songs . I appreciate your writing skills. Plz do write in future also. As the track moves forward u will get different scenarios to write about. The show is unpredictable to say the least u can't predict it. Since it's a sanskari show they won't show in ur face romantic scenes. It will be classy and never seen before scenes . Performed to perfection by our Mishbir. Next time write something about angsty Abir. Thank u.

Awww thank u soo much dear.... I m glad you guys like my efforts... Ofcourse i will write again... Now a days i m writting mishbeer ff... Its not related to show but yes its about abeer angsty😊

Originally posted by: meen123

Thank you for giving the track, the ending we all want.

Show me to Acha vala torture karenge ye log..

One tiny suggestion if you don't mind- keep paragraphs short and separate.. That way they are easy to read.

Thanks dear for liking my story... Lols yeah show mn itni asani s thori mishbeer milain gaye...

Nai nai mind ki kia bat hai i will surely take care of this next time... 😊

Originally posted by: bs123

Nice Story!! I really like how you brought the kidnap element back from the initial episodes. If push comes to shove, Abir should actually do this on the show to get Mishti to spill the beans, if she doesn't open up on her own. I just hope she doesn't do something like agreeing to marry Saurav on the show though.

Thanks alot dear...😊 Yeah abeer will surely do this he always wants mishti to share each n everything with him... As he said to nanu i love u s zyada mn yeh chahta hn k wo yeh janay k mn hamesha us k sath hn... Mishti should focus on abeer rather then manu r us ka muna 😆

Originally posted by: vssdp

Beautiful dear

It's really really beautiful

Totally loved it

Thanks for writing this

Abir pe kidnap karne waali habit suit karti hai 😆

Hehehehe thank u sooo much dear... I was waiting of ur comment.... Actually not sure guys like it r not... Bt as i get up n check n fot surprise... Yeah... Abeer ki personality hi ase hai... N i totally love his nature 😆❤️

Originally posted by: Mii5

Thank you for this beautiful story. Something which is very much needed at this hour. Loved it. Please write more

Thanks alot... Yeah... I know thats y i write it... Ofcurse i am writing a ff for mishbeer.... 😊

I really liked this kidnap idea.

Very very well written. I must say this forum has some amazing writers.Happy writing.

If possible try to participate in discussion also. We would love to know your pov.

Originally posted by: aimmyangle

Thanks dear for liking my story... Lols yeah show mn itni asani s thori mishbeer milain gaye...

Nai nai mind ki kia bat hai i will surely take care of this next time... 😊

I'm looking forward to your next piece

Originally posted by: aimmyangle

Hehehehe thank u sooo much dear... I was waiting of ur comment.... Actually not sure guys like it r not... Bt as i get up n check n fot surprise... Yeah... Abeer ki personality hi ase hai... N i totally love his nature 😆❤️

You wrote so beautiful that everyone will for sure like it

Sorry for commenting late 😆

Abir to hai hi awesome

Originally posted by: Jayati321

I really liked this kidnap idea.

Very very well written. I must say this forum has some amazing writers.Happy writing.

If possible try to participate in discussion also. We would love to know your pov.

Thank u sooo much... I will surely try to be more active on fourm... N participate in discussions... 😊

Originally posted by: meen123

tabhi hum apni stories bana rahe

I'm looking forward to your next piece

Hahahha yeah.... I will try to upload tomorrow my ff next epi 😃