Tender Encounters (A PreRish FF) [Author's note on Pg 1] - Page 6

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

This piece of fiction is so engaging and beautiful. I must admit I'm a big admirer of you writing. It's been just two chapters and your brilliance has already transformed me into a voracious reader. The vivid imageries employed by you painted alluring pictures in my psyche.

Rishabh Bajaj continues being an enigma. I'm in love with his characterization. Prerna, I'd like to repeat, is so likeable in our fictions, unlike the one are required to bear in the show.

The equation between PreRish is adorable. I liked RB's joke and her reaction to it.

The conversation between Prerna and her future-ex was loaded with not-so-subtle hints of a future death. I like how you kept it dignified with both being in limits.

"Prerna, the weather is too good to not go out for a walk. Will you join me?"

Saying no to him is impossible when he is looking at her with such warmth. His smile displays the deep dimples under his cheekbones. His smile is enchanting. Infectious.

She nods.

^ Cannot wait for the next part.

This is so sweet. Thank you so much. I'm so glad you're liking this story.

Originally posted by: SanzBarbie

What an engrossing story..

Absolutely loved the equation between Prerna and Rishabh.. They both exude such natural warmth.. Really want to know their detailed back story related to divorce.. Did the evil Bua orchestrate their divorce?!? And I am guessing in this story Prerna is not pregnant and that's what I am liking more.. Here she is self dependent and confident and has a ntuaral charm to her personality which is very likable..

Rishabh's infatuation towards her and the sexual tension between them is very palpable and enjoyable to read.. Their sarcasm, Rishabh's joke with a poker face about shiv and her reaction was awesome..

The character I am totally disliking here is Anurag.. He is behaving like a typical MCP here..

I really want to see Prerna's intelligence and competence helped her to get the job under Shiv not some kind of favor Anurag is insinuating here..

Overall an amazing update.. Waiting eagerly for the next one.. Very much hooked to your awesome Prerna and Rishabh here 😍😍

Thank you. I'm so happy you like this story. It gives me the motivation to write more.

Originally posted by: max_thakker

The flow of the story line is so smooth and it seems to be maturely handles , would waitin for the next updates and also if a possibility of a more mature intimate story line cuz none of the other story lines are inclined

Thank you so much. This story is both the easiest and the most difficult thing I have done. There are some parts that I struggle with for hours and some parts write themselves. Let's see if it'll take a different turn. But that is far, far away.

Originally posted by: MOnamy11

Your writing is so smooth and addicting and the way you're building up the characters are marvelous. Honestly for a moment,I think you've got all of us thinking if its a thriller fiction with Rishab"s joke.

Absolutely love Prerna with her strong independent nature . The conversation between Bajaj and Prerna is wonderfully easy and beautiful. Prerna's daydream about waking up Mr Bajaj's arm is so beautiful. I wonder if during the walk Mr Bajaj will finally realize that he needs to get his addiction back.

Eagerly waiting for next part.

Thank you so much. I'm so happy that you like this story. This is the validation that makes me go on, especially when I am struggling to put words on paper.

Are you updating pls say yes 😭

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Are you updating pls say yes 😭

Soon. I promise.

This was so beautiful that I think I was right there witnessing the scenic view from the window.

The intensity of Bajaj was almost palpable and I can’t wait to read further

Arya🤗

I am finally caught up with this brilliant piece of work.

I love how childish RB was with the whole breakfast situation. He was stringing P along was just pure love❤️

I like how these two have a comfort level where they can just talk to eachother about anything. They are divorced but both claim a right on the eachother in a silent way.

I can not wait for the confrontation.

Update soon.

PS: I edited my reply on first page.

Awesome. I am loving Rishabh character more and disliking insecure Anu

Update next chapter soon

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

Edited

I was first here

I am in love with you and your writing. And dare I say that I kind of love Shiv more than RB in your ff.

Loved sulking RB. I also like how independent and individual your P is. Thanks to the time she spent with RB, he gave her a personality😆

Love ya 🤗

Shiv is fun to write. But so is RB. I'm glad you liked Prerna too. Thanks for reading it