Ke Raaste Abhi Badal Se Jayenge // A HanMiTa Story - Completed - Page 3

Originally posted by: minamma

After all the messed up drama going on this work of fiction made my day

It was indeed beautiful

The way you portrayed hanuman Minnie and babita's relationship is worth reading

Please write some more in this forum

Thank you! I'll definitely try to write more. ❤️

Chori baaki toh theek hai.. ab yeh bata.. tanne kya legi iss kahani ko complete karne ka.. 😂

Loved reading it.. the kind of scene you had written for Hanuman and Mini wish maker do the same.. I so want to see Hs happy again..

Babita is as usual the bridge between the two and you explained everything like she will do in the show.. wonderfully written.. can’t wait to read more 👏🏼👏🏼

Originally posted by: Nishtha

Chori baaki toh theek hai.. ab yeh bata.. tanne kya legi iss kahani ko complete karne ka.. 😂

Loved reading it.. the kind of scene you had written for Hanuman and Mini wish maker do the same.. I so want to see Hs happy again..

Babita is as usual the bridge between the two and you explained everything like she will do in the show.. wonderfully written.. can’t wait to read more 👏🏼👏🏼

Thank you! I'm so glad you loved it! ❤️

I'll probably not do a confession story, there's no way I could do justice to that delicate conversation. May be an off-spin short story of what comes a few months or years later? 🤔

Originally posted by: Manasi_MD

Thank you! I'm so glad you loved it! ❤️

I'll probably not do a confession story, there's no way I could do justice to that delicate conversation. May be an off-spin short story of what comes a few months or years later? 🤔

Oh your most welcome and it’s wonderful and you can totally do the justice with the confession as well., as you have written HS dialogues masterly 👏🏼👏🏼

However your idea of how things would be a year after sounds equally exciting and wonderful too.. actually I want HS to be spoiled rotten by mother daughter so write something on these lines too if you could please 🤗🤗🤗

This is an excellent piece of work.....great job.....please write more!!!

I liked the kpen end

I liked how bab took the initiative to explain what she feels so openly

Originally posted by: Jan98

This is an excellent piece of work.....great job.....please write more!!!

Thank you for your kind words! 💞

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

I liked the kpen end

I liked how bab took the initiative to explain what she feels so openly

Glad you liked it, thank you! ❤️

This was sooo heartwarming.

Geezzzzz I loved it to bits! Straight like the typical PB script and the last part just touched my heart. The way she'd described her fight with his father. Awwwwww.

Great great work.

Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi

This was sooo heartwarming.

Geezzzzz I loved it to bits! Straight like the typical PB script and the last part just touched my heart. The way she'd described her fight with his father. Awwwwww.

Great great work.

Haayee! Thank you thank you! ❤️ Bas issi appreciation ke liye toh likhte hai 😆🤗

Btw, I'm gonna do a shameless plug and say that one more fic, and then you'll have completed commenting on all my fics 😆