Forgiveness-Ss ( Chapter 10 updated on page 18 ) 10/02/2020 - Page 3

Nice update

Waiting for next part

Are bahut jyada mazedar tha main raat ko iska wait krte krte hi so gyi thi😆

Isliye uth kr hi parhne lagi

Mjhe to bhaut maza aya bt bs next part ka wait nhi ho rha plz jaldi krdena update 😛

Lekin guddiya itni jaldi Aj ko maaf na kre bahut mehnat krwana jindal sahab se😈

Nice story

Wating for next part

Originally posted by: Mrihika

Awesome one ❤

Jindal parivaar deserves this

Itni jaldi gaddan maaf nhi karegi sabko

Durga saru ko abhi bhi akkal nhi aayi 😠😠

And it's not a torture u really write so well 😉😉

U penned every emotions very well

hi-fi

let's see as I wanna keep this story to minimalistic parts.

Kutte ki pooch tedhi ki tedhi.

Really,but it is as we all had to bear all this in show and here too,hence I said.

Which emotions and whose?

I mean which part you liked?

Sorry but uttawli me

Originally posted by: Akshananju

Chudial ke band baje diya Guddan ne🤣

Hay😔?

And now payback time Mr Akshat Jindal 👏

So obviously jo boya wahi kaatna padta hai

Guddan sahi ke leaving Jindal house 👏👏👏 I don't want her to forgive anyone so easily espdvjk Akshat he should have tough time getting her back 🥳

Let's see I hope it will be worth of your expectations.

Durga dayan ka band bajede AJ 🤪

Let's keep Durga away from this story

Originally posted by: Akshananju

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

He he Thankyou! glad u liked it.

hi-fi

let's see as I wanna keep this story to minimalistic parts.

Kutte ki pooch tedhi ki tedhi.

Really,but it is as we all had to bear all this in show and here too,hence I said.

Which emotions and whose?

I mean which part you liked?

Sorry but uttawli me

No sorry 🤗🤗

Guddan's emotions

I really liked the last part where guddan was leaving the jindal bhawan

I really want ki guddan aise coldly behave krke jindal bhawan chod kr jaye

Originally posted by: Mrihika

No sorry 🤗🤗

Guddan's emotions

I really liked the last part where guddan was leaving the jindal bhawan

I really want ki guddan aise coldly behave krke jindal bhawan chod kr jaye

Ohh mujhe laga baaki sab ke.

he he

again hi-fi

Originally posted by: sweetcherry95

Nice update

Waiting for next part

Thankyou!

I hope the next one too will be worth of your expectations

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

No yahaan itna drama nahi hoga,sorry but itna drama yahaan likha toh this story will get stretched too long.