Sweet Nothings - #12 - Pink & Blue - MishBir - Page 23 - Page 11

Originally posted by: anuleo09

I love this song! And this scenario, finally they are moving from friendzone to something more! Thank you for keeping us in hope that they will be one soon! ❤️😉

Thank you Anu! Have you seen the recent episodes? They are waaaaaaaayyy Outta the friendzone, but they might not be one so soon. That will take time.

Originally posted by: Jayati321

I loved this new OS...

Very very well written Mridhu. It's like i just saw a actual Mishbir scene.👏

Thank you Jayati! :) :) I imagined MishBir all the while when I wrote it. :)

Originally posted by: Itsflora

Read all those os

They are lovely dear...i could visualise our misbir doing those stuffs.

Do continue writing.

Thank you so much! How should I call you? Flora?

Originally posted by: Aanchal15

Hello!!! Thank you for the beautifully penned stories ... awaiting to read more

Hey Aanchal! Thank you! :) Yes, coming up soonish! :)

Originally posted by: Believer09

Such beautiful and well written stories...bookmarking for future reference 🙈

Thank you so much! :) Can I know your name?

Originally posted by: mridhu

Thank you asmi!!! You can call me anything - mridhu, mridz, di kuch bhi chalega. Your wish. :)

How was your exam?

You have sent me to a lala land with the first one.

#1 Love me tender! Well the title was apt, because unknowingly Abir was igniting the sparks that were far from tender. This reminded me of how intimate one could get while practicing or performing any form of art. I am taken back to sculpting with that.

The entire piece held a different level of ease to it. And I know, it is quite tricky to crack that. You have done flawlessly.

PS: I will comment as and when I read each One Shot.

Originally posted by: mridhu

Thank you so much! :) Can I know your name?

Hi...this is Ritu...btw i just read your analysis for car scene👏👏👏...it was so beautiful that it made me watch the scene again...trust me everything was even more soothing afterwards...you are a gem....keep up the amazing work...😊😊😊

#2 The morning after

Surprisingly, it reminds me of a write up, I attempted. The title, I meant.

This is the kind of write up that brings a smile on the face and brings that slight tinge of blush on the cheeks throughout the reading time span. It gave the right hints but in such a subtle manner that I was floored. It was absolutely a marvelous read. Especially on a rainy day (more like evening) cuddled up post work. Perfect getaway.

Originally posted by: ShenzK

You have sent me to a lala land with the first one.

#1 Love me tender! Well the title was apt, because unknowingly Abir was igniting the sparks that were far from tender. This reminded me of how intimate one could get while practicing or performing any form of art. I am taken back to sculpting with that.

The entire piece held a different level of ease to it. And I know, it is quite tricky to crack that. You have done flawlessly.

PS: I will comment as and when I read each One Shot.

Thank you so so much! Always nice to read reviews from a fellow writer. :) Thank you! Eager to know your views on the remaining

Originally posted by: Believer09

Hi...this is Ritu...btw i just read your analysis for car scene👏👏👏...it was so beautiful that it made me watch the scene again...trust me everything was even more soothing afterwards...you are a gem....keep up the amazing work...😊😊😊

Hi Ritu! Thank you againn :) it's just MishBir magic. The words just flow! :)

Originally posted by: ShenzK

#2 The morning after

Surprisingly, it reminds me of a write up, I attempted. The title, I meant.

This is the kind of write up that brings a smile on the face and brings that slight tinge of blush on the cheeks throughout the reading time span. It gave the right hints but in such a subtle manner that I was floored. It was absolutely a marvelous read. Especially on a rainy day (more like evening) cuddled up post work. Perfect getaway.

Thank you! :) :)