SamAina TS : Humsafar [Shot 3 (Finale) : PG 12] - Page 11

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Posted: 6 years ago

Amazing update

Trust is first in love

But this is not finale I think..Why u ended at this point ?..I am confused..

Where is Sameer?

What happened to Sameer?

Have Sameer Naina United?

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Posted: 6 years ago

Hash nice update loved the story

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Posted: 6 years ago

Shockingupdate...jstwant toknw is ittheend of tje storyorany sequence left.?

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Posted: 6 years ago

I liked this story! Enjoyed reading a story where you tried a different style of writing. Though it was confusing at times with the 'no narration' but you handled it well. Good job, twinnie! smiley31

There are many things that can kill a relationship which depends from person to person, imo. But, there are some factors which is same for every relationship we make- trust issues, lack of communication and assumptions. I can feel Naina, on why didn't she go back to Sameer when he came to here. He allowed a third person to enter their relationship and spoil it so easily and took it to a such an extent of filing divorce.

You left it and left the end open to our imagination! I think, that was a great move. As I am a sucker for happy endings, I would really like to imagine SamAina reuniting at Kamya's marriage and Sameer maturing into a man who can trust and is worthy to be trusted. I won't think practically here because then, I wouldn't want Naina to go back to him. 😛

Great story! ❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago

Hi

Very beautiful update.

Where there is no trust between samaina they cannot be together. Once trust broken its difficult again to trust the same way.

That is the reason she didn't go back.

Great dear


Suma 💕

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Posted: 6 years ago

Oh man what happened after that

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Posted: 6 years ago

Yeh kya sameer ka kya hua nahi bataya😡Will they meet at the wedding or they are already together?! Trust is the pillar of any relation. Agar trust nahi hai toh chahe kitna bhi pyar kar lo woh kam hai😊

I really want to know what happened. Aise tadpana thik nahi.😭

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Posted: 6 years ago


He continued to live alone 😛

Thank you so much.😃

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: shwta16

Res 🤗

UnRes -- Before you chase me I am leaving my review 😃🤗 You're totally being a good girl🤗

I just loved the final chapter. It's not easy to write in this style without any narration but you did it beautifully. ❤️ And I loved this style. Aww, thank you so much Shweta😳

Divorce has been granted. Naina has become independent and Sameer has gone into miserable zone. I loved how Naina refused to take Chacha Ji's help because she wanted to be independent. And the most beautiful part was Pandit's Dialogue - "Usne kaha aur tune maan liye" It worked as an eye opener for Sameer. And then "Use dekh rha hu jo tujhse duniya me sabse zyada pyaar krti hai" ❤️ Octo, how do you manage to write such beautiful and emotional dialogues. 🤗 I don't know. Perhaps I have so much in me that I have to say but being an introvert I can't and thus it all goes in my writing. At least I think that's the reason.😛

Naina and Sameer are not together now but still, Naina cares for him. She asked Munna to take care of him and be with him. It was so emotional. And I liked Naina's decision not to go back to Sameer when Sameer asked for forgiveness. "Aaj Sharad tha kal koi aur hoga" ... This line is so true and has my heart. Trust is an important factor of a successful factor. and Sameer mistrusted Naina and questioned her character. That was the point when their relationship fell apart. Yes! I'm glad you got it. I glad you saw that a relationship doesn't only needs love to keep going. It has a lot of ingredients and trust is an important one.😃

And the ending -- It was an open ending. So you want us to imagine the ending. Either Naina and Sameer might reunite in the wedding or they will not be together again. Yes! I didn't want to give out and out sad ending. It was kinda in between and you guys are free to imagine what would have transpired in the wedding.😳

Overall, I loved your writing style, thought process and the moral of this story which is importance of trust in a relationship. Thank you Octo for giving us such a beautiful story. Aww, Shweta.🤗

Lots of hugs and Love to you 🤗🤗🤗

Shweta


You girl know how to bring the biggest smile on my face. Thank you so much Shweta. Means a lot.❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: myprimechicago

Wow to it was a good bye for ever 😕

But after the whole thing and divorce it was bound t o end 😐

Very nice and simple story


Yes! Thought to keep it realistic. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you😃

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