SamAina TS : Humsafar [Shot 3 (Finale) : PG 12] - Page 10

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Posted: 6 years ago
#91

What happen to sameer

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Posted: 6 years ago
#92

Res 🤗

UnRes -- Before you chase me I am leaving my review 😃🤗

I just loved the final chapter. It's not easy to write in this style without any narration but you did it beautifully. ❤️ And I loved this style.

Divorce has been granted. Naina has become independent and Sameer has gone into miserable zone. I loved how Naina refused to take Chacha Ji's help because she wanted to be independent. And the most beautiful part was Pandit's Dialogue - "Usne kaha aur tune maan liye" It worked as an eye opener for Sameer. And then "Use dekh rha hu jo tujhse duniya me sabse zyada pyaar krti hai" ❤️ Octo, how do you manage to write such beautiful and emotional dialogues. 🤗

Naina and Sameer are not together now but still, Naina cares for him. She asked Munna to take care of him and be with him. It was so emotional. And I liked Naina's decision not to go back to Sameer when Sameer asked for forgiveness. "Aaj Sharad tha kal koi aur hoga" ... This line is so true and has my heart. Trust is an important factor of a successful factor. and Sameer mistrusted Naina and questioned her character. That was the point when their relationship fell apart.

And the ending -- It was an open ending. So you want us to imagine the ending. Either Naina and Sameer might reunite in the wedding or they will not be together again.

Overall, I loved your writing style, thought process and the moral of this story which is importance of trust in a relationship. Thank you Octo for giving us such a beautiful story.

Lots of hugs and Love to you 🤗🤗🤗

Shweta

Edited by shwta16 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#93

Unreserved on page 9 finally.😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: TheGirlWhoLived

Firstly sorry for the delay in my review. Maafi please. It's okay Prachi🤗

Suspense wala chapter tha ye to! Was it?😳

So all this is happening because of Sharad. I swear ye Sharad ki jaan le leni hai mujhe. 😡 Tum Sab milke murder karo uska🤣

I liked Sunaina's character in your story. She is helping Naina. At least in your story, Sunaina kisi kaam aayi. 😆 yes! She's a good friend. 😃

And Sameer was drinking to forget Naina. Kya din aa gaye. 😭 Bechara😛

Preeti is really the bestest sister in the world. I just love her character. She's my personal Favourite😳

Loved this chapter.


Thank you so much for reading Prachi. Means a lot🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
#95

Wow to it was a good bye for ever 😕

But after the whole thing and divorce it was bound t o end 😐

Very nice and simple story

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Posted: 6 years ago
#96

You do this to me how can you

I don't know Hash but running away is not a solution

and that has always been my perspective

maana sameer ne galti ki

and kafi badi

lekin I strongly believe that tali ek haath se nhi bajti

baki maybe I might come for a detailed review or not I am not sure

but this had me in tears

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Posted: 6 years ago
#97

Well TBH I'm not satisfied by the way it ended☹️

But that's not your mistake at all coz I am laalchi wanting to see samaina together always😛

But coming to the chapter it was truly amazing and realistic..

Any girl would not tolerate this whatever Sameer did to Naina and it is almost impossible to forgive someone like this so whatever she said to Sameer when he came back was perfect and truly correct👍🏼

So ya I'm sad it's ending here but always looking forward to more of your writing❤️❤️

Love ~ pm

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Posted: 6 years ago
#98

Incomplete end left for our imagination, is it?

Chachaji ne to kaha hi tha, jis rishte mein vishwas nhi us me shwas bhi nhi. Sameer ne Sharad ko trust kiya Naina ko nhi🥺

But I must say it was a really good story.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#99

Res..

Unres😲

SamAina.... Humsafar?🥺

Ye sharad...🤬lekin galti sameer ki bhi to hai..!! Lekin taali ek haat se bhi to nahi bajti...!! Kisi bhi relationship mein trust hona bahot zaroori hai.. bahot pyaar to hai lekin trust issues ... upar se assumptions😳!!

Divorce done!!! I just admire Naina... she is such a strong girl❤️!! Sunaina helps naina throughout the situation.... teri story sunaina bade hi acchi hai...!!!

I can't decide for whom should I write, for naina or sameer? You nailed it girl...👏, bas aise hi chaa jaa...🤗🤪!!! Aisi narration wali story kabhi kabhi bahot confusion create karti hai... but this time your narration style👏, you just nailed it, long way to go girl❤🤗!!! Proud of you🤗!!

I would think sameer is reliable for naina's trust once again...!!! And beyond every issues, they supported eachother and chose eachother again...❤️!! Kamya ki marriage ceremony shayad jo distance tha wo mita di SamAina ke beech...☺!! Kyunki.... the story's title itself Humsafar ❤❤!!

Tune open end rakhdi readers ke liye...!! Lekin epilogue to chal hi sakta hai.. what stores for them in future? Obviously, I am happy with these three shots❤️!!

Eager to read more such stuffs from you🤗!!! Enough of bakbak... jaldi kuch interesting os wagerah dede... *laalchi me🤣!!!


With love ,Suparna

Edited by Suparna13 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Smartly you have left the end open. Jisko saath mein rakhna hai rakho aur jisko juda karna hai karo. 😋.

Sharad ko pata nahi kitne forum wale maarne ko taiyaar hai 😃.

Trust is key I understand.

My take is sometimes in anger or in some influence we say or do things we wouldnt do either. But is one mistake enough to kill a relationship , I dont think so. Yes there will be a wound which has to be heeled with lots and lots of love. I think both have immense love for eachother.

Ek saal dur rehkar shayad they felt the importance of the other person. So I will say they will unite during Kamya's marriage.

Woh kya hai ki mujhe hamesha happy ending acchi lagti hai😊. Rone wali movies bhi nahi dekti romantic or comedy bas.

Ab Haqeekat mein hamesha happy ending ho zaroori nahi par kahani mein to atleast dil ko khush rakh sakte hai.

Samaina ko juda dekh hi nahi sakti ab kya karo bolo.❤️

Love

Sajida

Edited by Saji79 - 6 years ago

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