Akshan SS : Jeene ka tu zariya hai updated pg 20

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Part 1.

A house was decorated like a bride and a couple was taking blessing of elders, they were declared as married for next seven life, on one hand the bride was happy whereas her best friend was having mixed feeling she was clutching a locket in her hand and groom had no expression at all.

All the family member were happy atlast their wish was granted seeing the couple happily married.

Guddan went to kitchen to check food arrangements when suddenly someone pulled her in the corner she was about to shout when she was shushed as a hand covered her mouth " relax guddan main hun " " ap yahan kya kr rahe hain, apko apni patni k saath hona chahye" " main apni patni k saath hi hun" " yeh ap kya keh rahe hain apki patni antara hai aur hum apki saali hain" " acha aisi baat hai toh phr" he said bending down he pulled out the chain that she was clutching earlier with his teeth " phr yeh kyun pehna hai, isey mujhe wapis de do " " nahi , yeh main apko nhi dun gi" she refused clutxhing it tightly " jab tum is chain ko utarne ko tayar nhi ho toh main antra ka pati kaise hoskta hun jab hamari shaadi hochuki hai" " nahi ap aisa mat kahe, main antara ki khushi nhi cheen sakti" " aur mujhe roz marta dekh sakti ho" she become quite guddan na is rishtey ko torna chahti na woh antara k dukh ka reason bna chahti thi , akshat was about to break the chain " nhi please" tears were flowing from her eyes " kya itna mushkil hai tumhare liye hamari shaadi accept krna , kya tum nhi maanti ho" " maante hain, aur har haal main isey nibhaana chahte hain" she said defeating, he wiped her tears and kissed her forehead " tum antara ki fikar mat karo main khud usey samjha dun ga, uske aek bachkani harkat ne sabki zindagi badal di hai".

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice start👍🏼

waiting for next update...

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Originally posted by: kavya1994

Nice start👍🏼

waiting for next update...

Thanks update will be slow

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice start 🍒

Guddan Akshat married secretly I think??

And yaha b antra haddi ban gayi...

Let's see age Kya hota he.....

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Guddan aur Antara best friends 😳

Next part keliye waiting

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome start

Love it

Cont soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice start

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice start

Akshan are friends 👍🏼

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shona1991

Nice start 🍒

Guddan Akshat married secretly I think??

And yaha b antra haddi ban gayi...

Let's see age Kya hota he.....

Antara k bagair toh story hi nhi

Plz update kaun tu kya meri , jo bhi title hai samjh jao

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chit15

Nice start

Akshan are friends 👍🏼

All three of them are friends

Will give little background in next update

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