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Posted: 6 years ago
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Okay, So this is my first post in this forum. And I liked how Pearl portrays the emotions and the fluctuations so nicely. I also like Pragati, her confusion and her efforts to help Raghbir, so here is a short poem for both of them.

Raghbir:

Zindagi ko rang thi who,

Har kasam ki haqdaar thi who,

Saath Janam chalne ke vaade kiye the,

Lekin yeh Janam Saath na chal paye,

Magar vaade ko todne ka iraade nahi,

Bepannah Pyaare ki kasam mauth se agar pura hota,

Toh Mauth ko gale laga ne se darta nahi.


Pragati:

Sapne toh dekhe the ek shaadi ke,

Jeevan Sathi jo Bharosa hone ka haqdaar ho,

Lekin Zindagi ke daage ne us insaan ke saath jod diya,

Jo Bepanah Pyaarr kisi aur se karta hai,

Usski Bepanah Pyaarr se koi gham nahi,

Lekin ek vaade mere liye bhi zaroori hai,

Jo Saath phere liye the mere saath,

voh thodega nahi

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice lines....👏

I like it...!!

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