SamAina OS : Tum Khoobsurat Ho... - Page 5

Originally posted by: TheGirlWhoLived

Wow! It was a wow OS Hash.

Dil le lo for this. De do.😆

How do you do this everytime? You leave us spellbound by your writing. And you have done commendable job in writing this one. Hats off . Umm, I guess I'm still bad at it. 😆

The theme of this OS is itself worth appreciation. Not everyone writes about such topics and that too so beautifully. Sameer is really a life partner that every girl would want. The way he took care of Naina, did not let her lose her self-confidence and loved her for what she was has my heart. Hearing the song, I just knew I had to write something on it because in the show too Naina was belittled for her looks by Tayiji so I just wanted to say it out loud, she is beautiful.❤️

And Naina really is the most beautiful girl in the world for Sameer. She has a heart of gold and a pure innocent soul. True!

I loved Sameer's reply to that lady in the market. I hate these kind of people who dare to day such disgusting things. And Sameer was absolutely right, what will the children learn from that lady? Such disgusting people do exist and are major threat to the society.😡

Naina was so happy on the fay of her wedding. I could really imagine her dressed beautifully as a bride for Sameer. Aww, I'm glad to hear that.😳

And in the last para of the OS, I thought that why are you taking this OS in Not-Octofriendly zone, but you kept the OS Octo-friendly. Munna ka achcha bahana mil gaya, nahi? I'm a total Sanskari Kanya 😳

This OS proved why you are one of my favourite writers. Thank you so much for this and keep giving us more One Shots. awwie, Sending you big bear hug 🤗

Prachi 🤗 Thank you so much for this beautiful and detailed comment. Means a lot. 🤗

Originally posted by: Saji79

Hi Octo

Cant write much a bit emotional now. A very dreadful situation for any girl who goes through this. People like sharad should be given the same treatment so that none other can think of such crime. Defintely love and support is the most needed thing and Sameer is such a gentleman and his love for Naina is unconditional. Beautiful and emotional.

Love

Sajida

I'm glad it clicked with the readers and you guys felt the emotions. Thank you so much. Means a lot😃

Originally posted by: ana0806

Res😊Unres ka ataa pata nahi😆

Take your time Ananya. I understand🤗

Originally posted by: Veenapain

Beautiful story, loved it very much.

Thank you so much for reading😃

Originally posted by: MANSHITA

I am totally speechless. No word to explain the beauty of thisstory.

Aww, means a lot. Thank you😃

Originally posted by: Paridhi28

Amazing yaar...just loved it

Thank you so much for dropping by😃

Originally posted by: Mayashika

A really beautiful work, Twinnie. I am proud of you for writing this. At the end of the story, my eyes were wet and my heart was filled with happiness at seeing Naina happy. ❤️ I feel so accomplished right now😭 (happy tears). Twinnie, 🤗

I had expected to read a bit more on Naina's insecurities and expected mental breakdown. But, for a one-shot, it was justified. Last month only, I had watched 'Uyare' on this social evil. It was good to read something from you on this. Yeah! I wanted to give more of Naina's feelings but since it was a one shot I couldn't😒.

The title is perfect and has an in-depth meaning which you get to know only after reading the story. I like those kind of titles the best! 😳 Aww, I'm glad you liked the title🤗

Good job!

Twinnie, you make me feel so good about what I right. You definitely make my writing worth it. Thank you so much. Means the world to me🤗

Originally posted by: shwta16

Res ❤️😃

UnRes 🤗

Octo Octo Octo 🤗 Shweta Shweta Shweta 🤗😛

I just loved it. I have to say it you are a wonderful writer. I mean how did you get this idea if writing such a khoobsoorat OS. ❤️❤️❤️ Dil le lo is baat par. I listened to the song and I knew what I was to write next. That's how I function🤣. I got so many Dil now. I gotta buy a big bag now to keep em all😳

I loved the concept, the story, the emotions, Sameer being with Naina all the time, the social message "Tum Khoobsoorat ho" and it was so beautifully written. It made me emotional and my eyes were moist while reading it. Lots of hugs to you for coming up with this story. 🤗🤗🤗 Aww, I'm glad you liked it. 🤗

And thank you so much for adding such a beautiful song in my playlist. ❤️ I just loved the song and it's message. I know you'll love the song🤗

A few lines for you

"Kya hunar hai ye jo hum sab ko har baar bha Jata hai

Ab Maan bhi lo tum ho ek fankarah jiska likha hm sb k Dil Ko chhu Jata hai" Aww, I'm gonna cry now. Thank you Shweta🤗

Lots of love,

Shweta 🤗

Thank you so much Shweta for dropping by such a beautiful Comment jiska main besabri se wait kar rahi thi. Means a lot ya!❤️

Originally posted by: Anjali33

This touched my heart❤️

Beautiful one.

Aww, thank you so much. 😃

Originally posted by: Pooja1973

What an emotional piece of work...loved it..a sensitive subject handled so beautifully by u...touched my heart..title is so apt..

Regards

Pooja

Aww, thank you so much. Means a lot😃