SamAina OS : Tum Khoobsurat Ho... - Page 2

OMG SO BEAUTIFUL

DIL LE LO OS

Glad to see another os of your again🤗. When Sharad poured that acid.. the way you wrote it.. I actually turned numb for a moment.. Sameer nursing her back to health and actually marrying her, standing for her despite societal pressures was indeed commendable.. Enjoyed reading the story❤️ to the fullest.

Wow! It was a wow OS Hash.

Dil le lo for this.

How do you do this everytime? You leave us spellbound by your writing. And you have done commendable job in writing this one. Hats off .

The theme of this OS is itself worth appreciation. Not everyone writes about such topics and that too so beautifully. Sameer is really a life partner that every girl would want. The way he took care of Naina, did not let her lose her self-confidence and loved her for what she was has my heart.

And Naina really is the most beautiful girl in the world for Sameer. She has a heart of gold and a pure innocent soul.

I loved Sameer's reply to that lady in the market. I hate these kind of people who dare to day such disgusting things. And Sameer was absolutely right, what will the children learn from that lady?

Naina was so happy on the fay of her wedding. I could really imagine her dressed beautifully as a bride for Sameer.

And in the last para of the OS, I thought that why are you taking this OS in Not-Octofriendly zone, but you kept the OS Octo-friendly. Munna ka achcha bahana mil gaya, nahi?

This OS proved why you are one of my favourite writers. Thank you so much for this and keep giving us more One Shots.

Hi Octo

Cant write much a bit emotional now. A very dreadful situation for any girl who goes through this. People like sharad should be given the same treatment so that none other can think of such crime. Defintely love and support is the most needed thing and Sameer is such a gentleman and his love for Naina is unconditional. Beautiful and emotional.

Love

Sajida

Res😊Unres ka ataa pata nahi😆

Beautiful story, loved it very much.

I am totally speechless. No word to explain the beauty of thisstory.

Amazing yaar...just loved it

A really beautiful work, Twinnie. I am proud of you for writing this. At the end of the story, my eyes were wet and my heart was filled with happiness at seeing Naina happy. ❤️

I had expected to read a bit more on Naina's insecurities and expected mental breakdown. But, for a one-shot, it was justified. Last month only, I had watched 'Uyare' on this social evil. It was good to read something from you on this.

The title is perfect and has an in-depth meaning which you get to know only after reading the story. I like those kind of titles the best! 😳

Good job!

Res ❤️😃

UnRes 🤗

Octo Octo Octo 🤗

I just loved it. I have to say it you are a wonderful writer. I mean how did you get this idea if writing such a khoobsoorat OS. ❤️❤️❤️ Dil le lo is baat par.

I loved the concept, the story, the emotions, Sameer being with Naina all the time, the social message "Tum Khoobsoorat ho" and it was so beautifully written. It made me emotional and my eyes were moist while reading it. Lots of hugs to you for coming up with this story. 🤗🤗🤗

And thank you so much for adding such a beautiful song in my playlist. ❤️ I just loved the song and it's message.

A few lines for you

"Kya hunar hai ye jo hum sab ko har baar bha Jata hai

Ab Maan bhi lo tum ho ek fankarah jiska likha hm sb k Dil Ko chhu Jata hai"

Lots of love,

Shweta 🤗