Originally posted by: sc2.o
Hi May
Update to acha tha but i felt something missing or incomplete in the bedroom conversation bw naina sameer. I felt he wasnt feeling that sorry or regretful of his behaviour while talking to naina as much as he was feeling right after exiting nanu s room. The convo felt like a normal convo to me. Also there was no pre or post bidai talk in terms of naina s pain. Naina ddnt share anything. May be she will later, dont know. I personally feel the chapter where naina had shared her own fears and insecurities with sameer was more heart to heart and reflected the pain.
I am so sorry if i have sounded rude or hurt you or fellow readers, not my intention. I really love your ff and read and re read all chapters on wattpad too.
Just sharing my view. Not accusing or complaining in any way. Already waiting for the next update.
Lots of love !
Hey, pls dont feel like you need to apologise for just sharing your perspective.
I am very happy to receive input from all my readers. Not every update comes out very good, and it's good to know when something falls short, that's the only way I can try to get better. As much as the positive input helps a writer with the feel good factor, any shortcomings highlighted help with the introspection and learning 😊
In my head, the pain around the bidai was far too great for her to verbalize it so easily. He did ask her why she had not mentioned it in her list of things that hurt her.. and she replied, Woh batane ki toh koi jarurat ho hi nahi sakti! Maybe I should have touched on it a bit.. will try to in the future updates.
Thanks for your heartfelt comment and hope you enjoy the coming updates.
Love, May