SamAina OS : Tum Khoobsurat Ho...

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Heard this song and I couldn't help but write this. Dedicating this to all the beautiful ladies out here. @Labhya, you requested it and it's here. Forgive grammatical and spelling errors. Not Proofread. Understand my emotions.😳 Enjoy!



Tum Khoobsurat Ho...



"Naina. Where are you? I can't wait any longer for you to see my surprise." Sameer was being impatient on the phone making Naina blush a little more. She exactly knew what his surprise was and hence she was teasing him. "Main aa toh rahi hoon Sameer. Aur surprise mere liye hai toh tum kyun itne nervous ho?" She blushed a bit more when she said that and teased him. She knew he was going to propose her for marriage and she couldn't be more excited. She was still on phone when she saw Sharad coming. Naina grew conscious and alert. She thought to ignore him and started to walk faster while still chatting in bits and pieces. "Naina, main aakhri baar puch raha hoon. Tum mujhse shaadi karogi ya nahi?" Sharad was visibly angry. Sameer heard him speak and grew angry. He quickly took his keys and tracked Naina's number and drove towards it while still being on call. "Maine tumhein hazaar baar mana kiya hai aur aaj bhi mera jawab wahi hoga. Nahi!" Naina said in fury. "Tumhein bahut guroor hai na iss chehre pe. Abhi batata hoon." Saying so he opened the cap of a bottle and threw the content on her. Everything blanked out for her and she fell on the road. Sharad flew away from there and a crowd gathered around her.



"Mr. Maheshwari, the acid melted her lower left side of face and neck. Thankfully she got the medical care on time and her internal organs are safe. But I'm afraid, even after all the surgeries, few scars will remain so but we're trying our best to save every bit of her skin." Doctor informed. "Thank you for saving her doctor. Can I meet her?" Sameer asked. "In some time, yes Sameer." Doctor said and kept his hand on Sameer's shoulder and left. Sameer quickly sent a thanking prayer and stood in front of the ICU and looked at Naina who laid in between wires and pipes. He punched his hand on the wall and promised to not spare Sharad at all.



"Welcome home meri Jaan." Sameer helped Naina entire his house. "Sameer hum tumhare ghar kyun aaye hain? Aur meri family kidhar hai?" Naina barely managed to speak. Sameer just shaked his head in a no leaving Naina disheartened. He helped her reach her room and lay on bed. Her skin was still burning but it was bearable. "You relax for a while, I'll get Something for you to eat." Sameer said and left. The ride back home and weakness exhausted her and she slept only to be awake in some 20 minutes due to unbreakable burning sensation. "Sameer!!!" She shouted. Sameer came running and saw her shaking with fear seeing herself in the mirror. This was for the first time in the past one month that she saw herself in the mirror. "Naina. Naina look at me. It's fine." Sammer held her hand and said. "No Sameer. I look so ugly." Naina cried. Sameer calmed her and made her sit on the bed and pulled a chair and a guitar.



"Your music is my solace Sameer." Naina said and sat between his legs. Sameer closed his eyes and remembered that beautiful memory from their life and struck the guitar and smiled looking at Naina.



Zulf jo bikhri hai rehne do

Koyi jo kuch kahe, kehne do

Dil mein hai uth rahi jo leher

Roko na ab use behne do



He saw Naina already calming down. The medicines and his music were already working on her and she laid back on the bed. He got up, kept the guitar aside and covered her with the duvet. He sat back and started to play the guitar again.



Khud ko dekho zara Meri nazron se tum

Kitna jadoo bhara Tum mein samjho yeh tum

Tum si hi tum raho Tum khoobsurat ho

khud se bhi yeh kaho tum khoobsurat ho

Baat dil ki suno tum khoobsurat ho

tum si hi tum raho tum khoobsurat ho



He saw her smile a bit in her sleep. He pecked on her forehead and closed the door behind. After about an hour or so, he checked on her and saw her staring at the blank wall. "Naina, utho. Mera surprise toh itna delay ho gaya. Come here." He said. "Sameer. I know tum mujhe propose karne wale the." Naina said sadly. "What! Huh. You just ruined my surprise Naina." Sameer said pouting like a kid. "Haan Sameer. Maine sab barbaad kar diya. Look at me. I'm not good enough for you anymore Sameer." Saying so, she started to crying miserably. Sameer rushed to her and carefully engulfed her in a long and warm hug.



"Naina, ek pal ke liye main tumhare laayak nahi ho sakta but meri life mein agar kisi ne mere sabse bure waqt mein mera saath diya tha toh woh tum thi. Naina, you have built me up from the remains of my past. Aur inn sab choti moti cheezon se Sameer Maheshwari ko kabhi farq nahi pada. I love your soul you fool. Now come with me." Sameer entwined her hand in his and supported her till the dining area.




Bin tere zindagi aadhi hai

Din woh kya jo na tu saathi hai

Tune jo haath ye thaama hai

Raah mein roshni laa di hai



"What are you trying to do Naina? Baaher itni dhoop nahi hai that you're covering so much. It's pretty nice and cloudy outside." Sameer said. "Naina removed her scarf and reminded him of her scar and bit of the deformity. Sameer understood her insecurities and hugged her. "Meri Jaan, you don't have to do any of these. You'll always be the shining star I love the most. I know people will be jealous to see this beauty with me but it's okay. I'll handle it." He mumbled in a naughty tone leaving Naina smile a bit and hit his arm playfully.



Badlo na tum kabhi yun hi poori ho tum

mere hone ko pura zaroori ho tum



"Beta don't mind but aisi shakl leke aise public mein mat aaya karo. Yahan chote bacche kelte hain. They'll be scared." A lady in her late 40s said to Naina who was looking at Sameer trying to bargain for an ice cream. Naina's eyes moistened listening to it and she tried covering her face but Sameer held her hand and looked furiously at the lady. "Aunty ji. Meri maaniye toh aisi ghatiya soch leke aise public mein mat aaya kijiye. Yahan chote bacche kelte hain, what they'll learn." Sameer smiled through his anger and said.



Tum si hi tum raho Tum khoobsurat ho

Khud se bhi yeh kaho tum khoobsurat ho

Baat dil ki suno tum khoobsurat ho

Tum si hi tum raho tum khoobsurat ho



Almost seven months passed by to that incident. Sameer made sure that Sharad was behind the bars. Naina braced her imperfections in the most perfect way. Sitting by the dressing table, she blushed seeing her reflection in the mirror. "You make the most beautiful bride Naina. Kahin tujhe meri hi nazar na lag jaaye." Swati said putting a black mark behind her ears making Naina blush a little more.



Standing on the aisle, Sameer was restless until he saw Naina in her white wedding gown looking so much more beautiful than he imagined. His eyes twinkled seeing the most beautiful smile on her face. He forwarded his hand and held hers. They looked in each others' eyes and they knew it, it was their dream moment. The priest made them vow and declared them husband and wife.



Tum hi nazaqat ho

aur tum hi taaqat ho

hai tumse hi zindagi

tum hi mohabbat ho




Tum si hi tum raho Tum khoobsurat ho

khud se bhi yeh kaho tum khoobsurat ho

Baat dil ki suno tum khoobsurat ho

tum si hi tum raho tum khoobsurat ho





"You may kiss the bride." Priest said. The naughty glint in Sameer's eyes didn't go unnoticed by Naina and she blushed. Sameer neared her. "Ek minute. Before tum log ye sab karo, cake kaat lein?" Munna said with his eyes closed making the duo blush more. "Tu hamesha galat time pe hi bolna. Mere dost nahi ho tum sab." Sameer said frustrated, not being able to kiss his tempting wife leaving everyone laugh.



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Putting down the link of the song here, you really gotta listen to it.


https://youtu.be/fNYRBsV1eyk

Edited by Octothorpe - 6 years ago

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Reserved🤗

Unreserved finally😊

Octo ji

First take a grand salute in Mithun Dada's style kya baat kya baat kya baat.....like all your different works this is one spellbound , dhamakedaar shaandaar dharti phàaaaaad aasmaan phàaaaaad one shot from you. I bet hardly there will be anyone who'll not be speechless after reading this beautiful piece of yours.....

The characters, the scenes, the plot , the subject the introduction, body and the ending Everything was perfect ❤️ no mistakes at all.... You know naa that acid attack is one of the most sensitive and heart wrenching topic and the way in which you've described this is simply amazing! Gosh I am literally out of words after reading it. And I've read it twice no no no thrice and Everytime I read the ending I was like baba iske liye kya hi kahu mai ? Itna gazab hai ki kuch kehne layak hi nahi chhoda hai mohtarma ne....

This is what life is naa you expect something else and some very unpredictable and unexpected thing or situation you come across with. Some become fearful and hide away. But some do keep the spirit alive in themselves to fight back!

I loved it how sameer was with naina even after she has suffered from such a tragic incident. Indeed he loves her soul and no one can love a girl like sameer does. Sharad ka to naam naa hi le to better hai....

And special mention to the song .... Haaye bohot accha song choose kiya tumne.... Ese suprised dete rahe hame....

And thankyou sooooooooo much for fulfilling my wish . I am very very happyyyyy 💃🏻💃🏻💃🏻💃🏻

Keep smiling

Labhya

Edited by Labhya - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wowwwwwww i am the first

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Oh my !! I'm speechless

Right now I'm in a emotional mess reading this wonderful piece of work by you .. First of all take bow for attempting this 👏what I loved the most about the update that you portrayed such a sensitive issue in a very simple manner without going over board which is very much expected in this kind of a story ..

I can't explain how I'm feeling right now .. The way you highlighted the sick mentality of the society made me go mad thinking in what kind of hell we ate living .. Judgmental at it's best .. Slow claps for them

Sameer's comeback to the sick lady at the market made me fall in love with him .. It was perfect .. The whole update have Left me craving for more and praying to make note people like him

The power of love is stronger then any other power and sameer's love proovrd it he once again made Naina believe in herself .. " tum khubsurat ho " this story couldn't have got a better title than this

Love

Laalchi reader

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Posted: 6 years ago
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res

unres

Hash you know why I am soo late in unresing this one because I don't have words

this made me numb and my ability to express myself has actually taken a backstand

I don't know what should I say what should I write

This was like soo beautifully written.

Naina was soo excited that he will propose to her finally

but That devil comes and takes all her life away.

If you have seen jolly llb 2

I love Akshay Kumar's dialogue in that ki kis vahiyat insan ne kha hain ki pyar aur nafrat main sb jayaz hain

aise toh pyar main acid fekne wale bhi jayaz aur border pr marne wale sipahio ki kurbani bhi jayaz

that statement really hit me hard.

Sharad threw acid on her because he could not take no for as an answer

why man why

who gave you the right to do this

to play with a girl for your selfish motives.

people like you should be burned alive because no punishment is justified for such people.

Okay now coming to the OS

Sameer the man himself is perfection out there

he is the man one should be

He took Naina in his shelter when even her family abandoned her

he gave her the support as a friend to lean on him and accept the beauty of that scar

each girl who have survived this trauma is a survivor out there is my inspiration that whatever happens never give up because you ought to live.

He was there and stood for her when she was falling

he made her stand on her feet again

and then their marriage

a white wedding wow that is soo lovely

and as usual you won't go non octo friendly

but at the end I would just say a thank you for coming up with this

dil se jo khoobsurat hain vohi asli khobsoorat hain

iss chehre ki khobsurti ka kya yeh toh wqt ke saath dhal jayegi pr andar ki khobsurti toh wqt ke saath nikhar jayegi

Edited by munchkinland - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautiful story... only Samaina can love each other such unconditional way fighting the whole world... ♥️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Res...❤️

Unres...👍🏼

Ye os likhne ke baad tu kabhi bhi boli na ki tu talented nahi hai... bahot maar padegi kasam se...😲!! I am speechless... you again nailed it,hash,you again did it🤗!!!

The title is just perfect❤❤ it has in-depth meaning!! And the song❤️.... ash and gaurav's voice... thanks to you for suggesting us this soothing song...🤗!!!

Teri narration ki style,writing style,drawing the apt character dynamics.... tu bas chha ja yaar...🤗!! Applause to you for writing such topic👏!!! And the song and its lyrics has its own beauty... I am just too overwhelmed to read it...😭!! And want more and more...!!!

Bapre,pehle hi kitni bakbak karli... abhi to os ka kuch bola hi nahi...!

How a acid victim feels,we can't imagine..! When sharad poured acid in naina's face... that paragraph.. heartwrenching ..💔!! Sameer's unconditional love towards naina give her the strength to fight back❤! Kaash sab Sameer jaisa hota...!! Music is always the solace for anyone❤️!!! Naina's that insecurities are pretty normal in such case. And how sameer sarcastically answered that lady,I just love to love it❤!!

And the marriage day...!! Naina in white gown.. Sameer ki kahaani ki pari❤ !! Aur wo kiss... munna ko disturb karna hi tha .. tu thodi hi na kiss karayegi sanskari...😆... lekin hum soch lenge... koi nahi❤️!!!

I am just proud of you... and in love with this line.. "Baat dil ki sunoon tum khoobsurat ho!" 🤗 tu bhi bas aise hi humein speechless karti raha kar!!!!


With love,Suparna

Edited by Suparna13 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very nice OS

Reminds me of Vivah scene and with a social theme it was so good to read something like this..

One thing I wasn't sure is

Naina's family left her ?

Edited by suhaaana - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Most Lovable OS yaar beautiful written

Srilatha

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hash🤗🤗

My eyes are moist right now. Actually i've no word! We can't imagine how the acid victim feels! Only someone's love & care bring their confidence back. Sameer was in love with her soul. Toh phir chehre se kya farq padhta! Kash sab aisa sochte! Beauty is in the eyes of beholder❤️

I looooooveeeeeed how he replied back to that aunty! It was 👏Aur last mein jaan bujhke kiss nahi di😆Koi nahi hum imagine kar lenge😉

Thank you for writing this🤗The song was heart touching! Especially the line khud ko meri nazro se dekho tum khubsurat ho❤️

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