Love flourished in college{Akshan FF- Chapter 17 Pg 35 01/07/2019) - Page 20

Originally posted by: Sobiya153

Will be waiting

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Wow ..it was nice

Guddu capturing akshu was highlight...

Love there horse riding..

And last duet was best ..

Ps all the best for exams ....

Haay atleast you liked it

I tried horse riding at table point toh idea wahaan se aaya

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Chit15

Finally story is updated.

Nice update

Guddan capturing Akshat in her camera chori chori and I think so Akshat ka saara dhyaan Guddan par tha isliye toh jab woh gir Rahi thi toh woh aagaye usse bachane😉

Song was really good loved it

Please update ASAP whenever you are free

Thanks glad you liked it

Kyaa pata waise bhi jindaal saab kahan se sense kar ke gudiyaa ke paas pohoch jaate hai whenever she is in danger shayad cv's ko bhi nahi pata

Thank you moreever I feel it suited Akshan in this story's this phase

Sure and Thanks!

Finally you updated thanks yaar 😘😘😘😍😍

Bohat acha tha 👌👌 update soon don't make all of us wait please 😢😢

Originally posted by: Akshananju

Finally you updated thanks yaar 😘😘😘😍😍

Bohat acha tha 👌👌 update soon don't make all of us wait please 😢😢

mujhe pata hi nahi tha that you was waiting so desperately

And I am extremely sorry as for next update mere pass unique koi scene nahi hai filhaal sirf ek hai that's why it is getting late.

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Update kb milega?😒

actually I tried to edit title of that story but who edit nahi hua I mean there was no option like title toh socha aapko inform kar du as I still remember how badly you want to write me an another part at that time toh finally I updated it

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Kal pakka well I have complted your wish toh kaisa laga bataiyega as aapne pehla part 4 baar padha toh story ka end kaisa laga batana mat buliyegaa

actually I tried to edit title of that story but who edit nahi hua I mean there was no option like title toh socha aapko inform kar du as I still remember how badly you want to write me an another part at that time toh finally I updated it

Maine parh liya it was ☺️

Lekin dil mange more ho ske to ek aur part update kr dena😛

Chapter 16

Sorry guys mujhe pata hai how desperately you allwas waiting for this but still as I didn’t have any unique idea hence it gottoo late even today too I don’t have any unique scenes so I request all of youto cope with it .And bura lage toh batana.Actually I had planned to post thisin today’s afternoon but haye main so gayi and I promised to Akshanju so it’smust.and this update is specially dedicated to her as she requested me alot.Toh thanks to her.

Chapter 16

As Guddanand Akshat’s eyelock got breaked after the duet due to the voice of clapping. Alone tear escaped from corner of Durga’s eyes.

Durga’s mindtalks- I can’t express how happy I am AKshat,bohot achha laga tumhe itne saloonke baad yun gaata dekhkar.It reminded me of the old Akshat,old Akshat who wasnaughty,carefree and funloving,who never paid a heed to anyone.

Who Akshat jo apne aap ki bhi nahi suntan tha.

And then the game continued.

After some time everyone got bored and started tofeel sleepy,so game stopped and everyone went to sleep.

Next morning everyone got ready and after breakfastthey went to their next destination.And their next destination was Mapro Gardens-

It was an exotic and refreshing experience for allof them.Surrounded by greenery Guddan’s mind rested in peace while Saru wasenjoying the very freshly made chocolates.She made Guddan to have them butGuddan didn’t liked it much.

Here Durga too was feeling blessed along with Akshatand was trying pizzas.She offered it to Akshat but he refused.

Akshat- Durga, you very well know that I don’t likethis kind of an unhealthy stuff.

Durga- I know Akshat, but it’s healthy.

Akshat- Durga,stop kidding,itna bhi bewakoof nahihoon main.

How can a pizza be healthy.

Durga- Are Akshat trust me it’s healthy,in thisplace they provides us with very fresh and customized pizzas and theingredients used are 100 % organic.

Akshat- KUch bhi

Durga- Are baba sacchhi.If you don’t believe me thencome with me.

When Akshat watched the kitchen he was convinced andthen he enjoyed the food too.

Akshat- Hello,chef can you tell me what are youmaking,please.

Chef- Sure sir,Actually I am making customizedflavoured chocolate that’s requested by some customer. She didn’t liked all ofour flavours and now I am experimenting a new one.

Just hope the customer will like it.

( Unaware of the fact that the customer forflavoured chocolates is Guddan)

Akshat- OK! Thankyou and he shaked his hand withchef.,

Achha chef I had listened that here the customerscan too try an hand on baking and making chocolates.

Chef- Yes Sir,you heard it right but today ourassistant is on leave and as you can see I am already making a chocolate so Itoo will be unable to help you.

I am extremely Sorry sir.

Akshat- It’s perfectly OK! Actually I had learntbaking earlier So If you don’t mind Can I try a hand and don’t worry I won’t beneeding any assistant.

Actually It’s one of my friend’s request.She wannatest as she never tasted the bakery products made by me and today she haschallenged me.

Chef- It’s OK sir,if you are confident you can try.

Akshat- Thankyou chef!

Akshat( mindtalks)- Kya keh rahi thi Durga ki bacchithat I had forgotten to cook and bake now I will show you look I am gonna winthis challenge and he made an strawberry flavoured chocolate.

The chef there made an orange flavoured chocolateandboth chocolates were put extremely adjacent and the covers too weresimilar.Akshat went to wash his hands off.

Here Guddan and Saru asked the waiter about how muchmore time is needed for their chocolate.

Waiter- The chocolates are ready mam, I wil justbring it.

Saru- Haa toh jaldi jaaiye na laaiye.

Waiter- Ok mam and left from there.

Guddan- Saru, there’s no need to get overexcitedthey are just chocolates.and it wasn’t the right way to talk to that waiter.

Saru- OK mataji aage se khayaal rakhungi.

And both of them smiled and had an hi-fi.

@ kitchen

The waiter came and asked chef about chocolates.”They are kept on the table”.The chef answered without looking as he was busy innext order .The waiter got confused in both the ordersSo mistakenly he takeschocolates made by Akshat and leaves kitchen.

After few seconds Akshat came and he too withoutnoticing takes the chocolate box and leaves.

Here the waiter handovers chocolates to Saru andGuddan .Guddan thanked him and on the other side.

Akshat- So here are your fresh flavoured chocolatesmam.

Durga smiles and offers him to sit.He sits .

AS Akshat handovers the chocolate bos to Durga sheopenes it and says.

Durga- Well,it’s looking nice but is it’s taste too like it looks.

Akshat- Your wish mam, if you want have it or else Iwill donate it to the local children here.

Durga- OK

As Durga opened the box and lifted a piece ofchocolate Akshat was watching her with mixed feeling of excitement andnervousness.

Durga just stopped as she was about to put thechocolate in her mouth she stopped.

Akshat- What happened Durga?

Durga- Akshat you are sure na after eating this mystomach will be allright.

Akshat took the box and said.

Akshat- there’s no need to taste,let it be and Durgastarted to laugh.

Durga- I was just kidding,tum toh sach main naraazho gaye ,acchha bada sorry.

Akshat too even smiled

Akshat- Toh timhe kya lagaa mazaak sirf tum hi karsakti ho?

And both of them bursted in laughter.

Akshat- Chalo abb batao bhi,how’s it and he feededthe chocolate to her.

Durga- Umm it’s awesome.I didn’t knew orangesflavoures chocolates this well.It’s one of finest chocolates I have evertasted.

Thank you so much Akshat!

Akshat- Orange?, Wait letme taste it and he wasshocked it was actually orange flavoured chocolate.

Here Guddan had almost emptied half of the chocolatebox. When Saru tried to take she refused.

Saru-Yeh dekho,madam ko chocolate pasand nahi and emptied almost half of box and isnow refusing me too for having it.Guddan 2-4 toh aur de de you just let metaste a single chocolate.

Thode aur khane de I am getting bored.

Guddan-SO wht you have already emptied many boxes today so what if I had one. And waisebhi you didn’t like this taste naa.then

Saru-Achha baba Ok but 2-4 toh de de baithe baithe bor ho rahi hu.

Bylooking at the box and making a sad face.

Guddan-Achha ye le but only 4 ha and that too because you are my best friend or else Iwon’t share my chocolates.

Sarujoined hands infront of Guddan

Saru-Achha baba pata nahi what magic these chocolates has done on Guddan.

Guddan-Yes they are too delicious.

Saru-delicious?. After tasting 1760 flavours what flavor you liked,Strawberry,whichyou hate most.

Guddan-But it’s tasting too good.I feels like to kiss the hands of the person who madeit.

Saru-Achha OK OK. I am glad atleast you liked it.

Guddan-Liked,I loved it.

Saruwas happy looking her friend and here Akshat got confused

Akshat(mindtalks)-How’s this possible? I made Strawberry flavoured chocolate .But these areorange flavoured.

Thenhe got reminded the chef was experimenting a new flavor.

Shit!This was the order of a customer and chocolates got interchanged.

Hecame out of his thoughts as Durga spoke.

Durga-Maan gaye Akshat! You won the challenge and Akshat passed a sarcastic smilehiding the true fact…………….

Sofinally I was able to keep my promise. Chalo ab jaldi jaldi batao

How’sit?

Originally posted by: Kammy02

Maine parh liya it was ☺️

Lekin dil maange more

Actually maine baad main reply padha Sorry and glad that you liked it.......

Haaye raam aur kitna paap karwaogi 😉waise bhi ise likh liya yahi bohot hai 😉aur jis kisi ki bhi yeh story thi usne room ki awkwardness tak hi likhi thi maine toh car ka scene extra add kar diya.

But if you want then I will PM you next part extra bold !

Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Actually maine baad main reply padha Sorry and glad that you liked it.......

Haaye raam aur kitna paap karwaogi 😉waise bhi ise likh liya yahi bohot hai 😉aur jis kisi ki bhi yeh story thi usne room ki awkwardness tak hi likhi thi maine toh car ka scene extra add kar diya.

But if you want then I will PM you next part extra bold !

Okk

Waise story mein post krne mein v koi burai nhi hai😉