MG- Chori-chori..Chupke-chupke.. P3,4,epi1/p3,6,9) Epi2/p11 July26 - Page 6

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Loved it very much

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~Epilogue~

part1

She reached at their regular meeting point. And for a change, today she was the first one to arrive, usually he will be there before her, waiting for her. She thought to roam around the park till he comes & got busy in admiring the natural beauty & started collecting her fav flowers. But every now & then her searching eyes would move towards the entrance..waiting for him impatiently.

She smiled at her hearts eagerness to get a glimpse of him. It has been like that only, from the very begining. And now also, even after 8 months of them meeting almost everyday, this feeling of desperation to see him, is still the same, in fact it has increased with time & each of their meetings!

Waiting for him, made her realise that how difficult task it is! Now she can understand very well that why he always cribbed about her being late. Whenever she will come late, even if its just 5 minutes, he would start his cribbing that how he has been waiting for her for so long & that she doesnt care about him!

She smiled as the images of a pouting maan with a cute frown on his face, came to her mind! She bit her lips, smiling, thinking about his cute expressions & then moved towards the gates, with the thought of waiting for him there!

She was standing by a tree, looking around, when noticed him coming in her direction with hurried steps. He was looking at his watch so didnt saw her. Suddenly, a naughty smile appeared on her lips, as she thought of doing a little shararat with him.

She immediately hided behind that tree. She giggled thinking about his reaction..that cute pouting baby face, he would make on not finding her there. It will be real fun! "mujhe wait karaya na..ab bhugtoh..." ..she smirk naughtily. And waited to see his reaction!


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He reached at the park 5 minutes late today. He rushed inside, expecting her to be there, waiting for him. But was highly disappointed when he didnt find her anywhere. Instantly a frown settled on his handsome face & as expected, he started cribbing... Angry at her carelessness.

" I should have known, wo.. Aur mera intezar karegi..?? Huhh..kabhi nahi..!!!" he smiled mockingly..

"intezar karna toh mera department hai! Hamari Madamji..pehle toh late aayegi, fir kahegi ki mujhe jaldi jana hai..nahi toh mumma daantengi! Tum chahte ho ki main unki daant khaun??"..he mimicked her style, without any idea that soon he will be regretting his actions!

Frustated, he came back at the entrance gate & stood there, waiting for her impatiently. He was continuously looking at his watch & then at the road.

"hey maan" he looked up at the voice that called him & saw his close friend yash, coming towards him. He cursed his timing..

"great!! Issi ki kami thi! Jiska intezar hai woh toh aane ka naam nahi le rahi..aur.." he muttered under his breath, and smiled forcefully at his friend who felt more like a enemy at that particular moment.

"hey, how are u buddy" ..he talked with yash for sometime..wanting to shoo him away from there as soon as possible.

To his hearts little relief, yash decided to leave as he was getting late. While going yash asked suddenly.. "btw, hows ur girl friend?"

Yash & his other friend who are close to him, knew about his liking towards geet. They hadnt met geet but used to tease maan about her..refering her as his girlfriend.

maan blushed at his question. But then tried to hide it with his fake anger. "ab der nahi ho rahi tujhe??" he asked raising his eyebrows, glaring at him. Getting his cue, yash left..but not before winking at him naughtily.

Maan smiled shyly, running a hand through his thick hair. He turn around to go inside, before someone else could catch him standing there...Only to see an angry geet looking at him with her big angry eyes!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Was bored ... I'm so happy to see your update 🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I didn't comment 🤔🤔🤔🤔

Anyways .... so sweet ending ... these type innocent love so pure and heart touching

He told her to come and she agreed... both are happy .. finally their chori chori love will go somewhere

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lovely epilogue

Is he in trouble ?? Geet super angry

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Epilogue 1

superb update!

great that Geet decided to play a prank on Maan! but now he is in trouble as Geet heard what he said

liked this shy Maan!

continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Superb update.waiting for next

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Superb update.waiting for next.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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sweet update

geet find it very difficult of waiting for other as she may times come late n make maan wait for her

geet is try to be naughty with maan by hiding herself but got angry listening maan mimicking her

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I can't stop smiling after reading this

It feels so real . She actuallycame first but Maan lol he did mistake then 😆😆😆

Hooo his friends too know about her . But bad timing Maan, Geet heard you

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