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Posted: 7 years ago

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do you remember? maaneet version seems missing

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missing os ... Want to read more

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Updated Index with New Links on Others

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Well I read your os Khamoshiyan but couldn't comment on it as the topic is locked by the mods. So here it is..

So, maan's a doctor and he meets Geet when she is brought into hospital after suffering a fatal accident. They already know each other..cool.. It must be very difficult to meeting osmeone after so many days and in such a state. Hoping geet recovers soon.

Dev left a poor girl alone after impregnating her and her responsibility fell onto maan. Though I feel really feel bad for both of them and more so Geet. She's losing her love for no fault of hers, hope she will be able to recover as its not easy to see your love getting married to someone else.

It's even more a difficult situation for maan knowing he will always love geet but still he has to save the other innocent women whose life his brother destroyed. And the third person in this equation, poor girl all alone with a family who is hell bent on killing her and the guy who she trusted just left her.

It is still a very noble thing to do but that does not mean it won't hurt.

So they met before this accident as well and geet met his wife. I really appreciate that they didn't loose themselves into those emotions. It's always so easy to just give in the temptation and their love was so pure and passionate that they were still not able to move on. Maybe this is the purity of their love that they both can still confess their eternal love to each other and still respect the situation they were in. Payal seems to be a sweet girl. I hope they found Dev and gave him the punishment that he deserved.

Poor geet.. trying to move on but still not able to..well as they say "you can never forget your first love". Situations..maybe if they had told daadima earlier, everything would have been completely different. They could still have helped Payal, she could have stayed with them and they both could have loved her daughter as their own. Payal would have then found someone in her life gradually.

Oh..poor them they meet again in a situation when geet is getting married..Now maan is free, no longer with Payal..I don't know whether to laugh or feel really really sad about their situations. Geet thinks he lied to her..but why would he..Geet think!! If he was selfish, nothing of this all would have happened. But I can understand her state..that little blink of hope.. And maan..love him..he can't even ask her anything becasue it was him who let her go.. She was selfless for him then and now he needed to be selfless for her.

Atleast he has little Geetanjali in his life..kids are just a ray of sunshine in your life, taking all of stress away with their just one smile. Geet thinking to hold things over with Angad.. Well hope so he understands but it isn't going to be easy for him as well. He has made peace with her always loving maan and now geet changing her mind.

Oh noo.. man!! no words after reading the whole os.. He just let her go..whyy?? He could still have fulfilled his responsibilities being with Geet. Though I still don't hate him..

Oh nooo...

Amazing os..well written as always..

Though next time I am going to check each os and ss if it's happy ending or not.. Sad endings make me so😭.. Though I understand the reality aspect of it but still😒