MG- It rained Love that day... 💕

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Posted: 6 years ago
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It was rainy season. But that day, the sky was clear and it didnt looked that it will rain. So, Geet didnt took the umbrella while going for tution. She had walked more than half distance, when suddenly it started to rain slightly.

She walked with fast steps and managed to reached the tution class, just before the rain become heavy. All the while there class was going on, it was raining continuously.

When the class ended, it was still raining. Like her, meera also hadn't brought her umbrella..so they decided to wait for rain to stop or slow down..as all three cant go in pinky's umbrella!


When Maan saw her standing there, he asked her as to why she was still standing there?? And after knowing the reason, he offered, "toh..tu mere sath chal na!!"

she denied first, but he was not listening & then the rain was also not stoping. she agreed..as meera & pinky also told the same. And she went with him!

She didnt wanted to think on that line again, but she did felt good that he cared about her. And her heart was excited with this realisation.
She was not able to say anything...coz of the way her heart was beating so fast.

It was him...talking occasionally and she answering when needed. She just wanted to feel that moment..with him, walking in that rain, under the same umbrella.


When they reached at the point, where from both had to go in different directions, she told him that she will manage from there, as the rain had slow down then. But he did not agreed.

Instead he suggested that she should take the umbrella and he can go as his home wasn't that far. After arguing for few minutes, he said with finalty, "Maine bola na..tu leke jaa.. Toh bas!" And then he gave that umbrella in her hand. Saying a bye, he went away...with fast steps.

May be it was nothing so big for him to do that. But for her, it was! His that caring gesture had touched her heart deeply! She kept standing there for few seconds, looking in the direction he went..with that smiling face. Then started walking towards her home...smiling to herself.

She was happy...her heart was happy. And the excitement was so much that she wasn't able to control. So when she saw that little puddle in the middle of the road...she just once looked around to see if anyone was there.

After confirming that the road was empty...she just jumped in that puddle...splashing that muddy water on the road & on herself . And then laughed freely...like a carefree kid!



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Posted: 6 years ago
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First of all, I am obsessed with rain...I can't even express how much I love rains and thunders!! More than any music on this earth..!

Coming to the update - it's absolutely adorable..Maan is very caring towards his Geet...While she seems to have to develop some sort of crush on him..His generous offering of the umbrella made her fall for him even harder.

Naughty little thing did drench on the rain though..Also played with mud!! Cute but the ending seems incomplete! Give us the full update! What about Maan's feelings????



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Posted: 6 years ago
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beautiful shot!

glad that Maan insisted that Geet leaves with him!

can understand her feelings!

sweet of Maan to give the umbrella to go home.....

Adored Geet's reaction! his one gesture means so much to her!

Edited by khwaishfan - 6 years ago
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Congratulations on the color change...
Looks like the ladder group is back in action...Alas my Sahibo still is teal but it might take time for covering all ids...
Thanks for holding upto my request and not vanishing...
Good to see updates...đŸ€—

Edited by WaveTeal - 6 years ago
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Congrats on becoming an IF Rockerz!!! 😊

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Congrats on your story

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Congrats for new story..

Geet went with Maan to her home in his umbrella..

Maan has given his umbrella to her to reach her home..

Continue soon..

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congrats for new story

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Wow New story. Congratulations...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhanu27

Wow New story. Congratulations...

It's not knew story... Just posted a little part of one of my completed story.... â˜ș

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