Samaina OS 'Will you be my friend?'

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Hello everyonesmiley9

Feeling overwhelmed as this is my sizzlerz post! So I came with an another OS. Su again I wrote it for you. This OS is dedicated for my LTGsmiley31 If you guys weren't there I wouldn't have become sizzlerz today. Love you guyssmiley31Labhya I hope I could fulfill your wish! And Hash don't worry it's 100% octo friendly.smiley9

Sorry for the mistakes and grammatical errors. Criticism is welcomed. I'm not a writer so your appreciation and criticism will help me to grow. So here it is..

Will You Be My Friend?

"He loves aloo paratha and his favorite color is blue"

"Oho kya baat hai! Aur kya kya bataya usne? Ab toh tu jijaji ke liye aloo paratha banana seekh le"

"Kya yaar swati woh abhi jijaji kahan huye. Abhi toh hum sirf dost hai. Bas itna hi pata kiya. Bahut raat ho gayi thi na toh aur chat nahi huya."

"Accha thik hai phir hone wale jijaji thik hai?"

I couldn't reply to Preeti but my blush answered it all. Preeti and Swati my best friend forever. I share everything with them. So how couldn't I share them about him? I always pretend like i don't like their teasing but actually I love it. Whenever I listen my name with him my heart leaps with joy.

"Sameer aur meri jodi ekdam mast hai. Hum dono hi high society ke hai and we look so good together. He will only date me." Listening to his name my heart skipped a beat. We turned to see who is calling Sameer as hers and I knew it was Sunaina! Our school's most fashionable and rich girl. She was gossiping with her chamchis about Sameer! Swati rolled her eyes "Naina tu us chipkali ki baat pe dhayan mat de. Tu aj Sameer ko iske bare mein batana ki kaise kartik ke hote huye bhi uspe line marti hai."

"Why should I tell him?"

"So that he won't be interested in her."

"She is not his type."

"Ladke ka kya bharosa?"

I couldn't say anything. Maybe Swati was right. Preeti too agreed with her.

***

"Hi Sameer. Are you free now? I need to tell you something." I texted him with my shivery hand.

"Yes buddy tell me. How was school today?"

"It was good. Actually I want to ask do you like sunaina?"

"Kartik's gf sunaina?"

"You know about them?!"

"Of course. Woh dono chahe kitna bhi chupaye kartik toh hume sab batata hai. But why did you ask me this?"

"Oh no nothing aise hi."

"Buddy tell me!"

"Sunaina likes you"

"Oh. Last week she proposed me."

"What?!! Aur tum mujhe yeh ab bata rahi ho?!"

"Main bhul gaya tha. It was so funny. Main toh bahut muskil se bhaga wahan se."

"Sunaina toh kafi sundar hai phir use haan kyun nahi kaha? Woh toh tumhare liye kartik ko chodne ke liye taiyar tha."

"She is not my type. I want a girl who will understand me. Chalta phirta shopping mall nahi chahiye mujhe. I want a girl who will be my friend for life time."

It would be lie if I say I wasn't dancing. He wants his wife as his best friend. This increased my hope. Maybe one day he will actually like me.

"I hope you will get your dream girl. Bye good night. Time to sleep."

"Good night Preeti. Kal baat karte hai."

Preeti! Yes for sameer I'm preeti. I chat with him from preeti's fb account. Because I have a fear if he will know I like him he willI start to avoid me. And I won't be able to handle his ignorance. I wanted to know about him and I'm too shy to send him text from my account. But from Preeti's account I feel free. I feel comfortable to chat with him. It's been almost six months that we are chatting and this was not an easy task to befriend with him. Bahut mehnat ke baad I'm his buddy now. To whom he shares everything.

***

I couldn't believe my eyes. He is a lier I hate him. I'm feeling disgust with myself. How could I love someone like him. And I'm hating myself for crying for that jerk. He told me he wasn't interested in sunaina and I saw them hugging each other. Thank god I saw it for myself. At least now I won't live in my la la land. I'm feeling so stupid. Sach mein ek ladka hamesha khubsoorti hi dekhta hai.

"Naina ruk. Naina" I heard preeti shouting my name. But I wasn't in a mood to talk to anyone. But preeti stopped my way.

"Naina why are you crying? Is everything okay?"

I couldn't control anymore. I hugged her and told her everything.

"He is a lier preeti. I saw them hugging. Akhir woh bhi baki ladko ki tarah nikla na."

"Tu shant ho ja. Shayad tune galat dekh li ho."

"Nahi preeti main kitni badi gadhi hoon na? Mujhe uske saath baat hi nahi karni chahiye thi."

"Ab kya karegi tu?"

"Tu use aj raat message de dena boards ki taiyari ke liye tu ab fb pe nahi ayegi."

"Lekin ek baar use pooch le na ki kya hua aisa ki man badal gaya?"

"Please mujhe aj se uske bare mein koi baat nahi karni."

***

Today is our farewell. I should be happy that I won't see him anymore. But I don't know why I'm feeling so lost. My subconscious mind doesn't want to go away from him. Silly me! Itna sab kuch ho gaya phir bhi akkal nahi ayi. For exams we all were busy so Sameer didn't doubt preeti. But many times he texted preeti to know how was his buddy. He even tried to talk with her in school when she was alone. Because I had told him once not to talk in school as everyone would link up them if anyone sees them talking. And my excuse worked. He never tried to talk with preeti in those days when we were chatting. And Preeti was always careful enough to handle the situation.

I saw him smiling with his friends. He has a beautiful smile. I'll miss him but one day I'll forget him. One day!

***

I thought I have moved on. But today I understood he was always in my heart. He became more handsome. How I missed his luscious hair! His smile! And his naughty wink. I'm meeting him after five years in a friend's wedding. I didn't expect him to come. He talked to me! I'm glad he remembered me. Now he is dropping me & preeti to our home.

"I missed all the school friends so much. Aur preeti yaar itna bhi kya busy thi tum ki baat nahi kari itne saal."

Oh god! We shouldn't accepted his request to drop us. Why he had to talk about this!!

"Nahi woh aise hi utna time nahi milta tha" Preeti said with nervousness.

"Haan par tum har saal mujhe birthday pe wish karna nahi bhulti thi. Thank you."

***

It was so awkward for me to sit with him alone. Why my house is so far! I'm feeling so angry with preeti. She deliberately went to her aunt's house so that I could talk with him.

"So how is sunaina?"

"Umm koun? School wali sunaina? Mujhe kaise pata hoga?"

"Kyun tum dono ka breakup ho gaya?"

"Break up?! We were never in relation."

"Oh come on. I saw two of you hugging."

"Ewww don't remind me of that day. And excuse me I wasn't hugging her. She was throwing herself on me. Ankhen check karao apni."

Was he telling truth? Did I really misunderstand their position? I am feeling like killing myself.

"Umm oh accha chodo. Koi aur gf toh hogi?"

"Nahi aisa koi mila nahi. Aur tumhari?"

"Bf woh bhi meri?!"

"Haan kyun nahi?"

"Oh come on mujh jaisi behenji ka koi bf kaise hoga."

"I think you really need an eye specialist. Girl have you ever seen yourself in the mirror? You are the cutest girl I have ever seen."

Am I blushing? Yes I am. I shouldn't again fall for him.

***

I hate myself for coming so early. Last night after dropping me he texted me to meet him again. And stupid me again accepted his request. Now I'm waiting for him for 35 minutes and mahashay ka koi ata pata nahi! I couldn't sleep because of him. Why he wants to meet me and his compliment! I couldn't help but blushed again remembering his lines.

"I'm so sorry I'm late."

"It's okay. Mujhe kyun bulaya?"

"Abhi abhi toh aye hai. Let's order something."

"I'm not feeling like eating. Coffee chalega."

He ordered to the waiter and I was staring at him. He was wearing orange T-shirt with blue jeans. Orange really suits him. Actually every color suits him. He doesn't have long hairs like school but still it was long. After ordering he looked at me straight into my eyes. God why he always do this effect on me!

"So how are you Naina?"

"Tum mujhe yeh poochne ke liye bulaya?"

"Nahi baat kuch aur hai"

"Toh bolo na" I couldn't wait anymore.

"Umm woh darasal"

"Sameer please jo bolna hai seedha aur jaldi bolo"

"Woh mujhe Preeti bahut pasand hai. Use propose karne mein meri madad karogi?"

I blinked twice and tried to gather the information. My heart wrenched hearing this. Again he broke my heart. But it was not his fault. It was always my fault that I gave him chance to broke me.

"Oh thik hai. Kya karna hai bolo?"

"Kuch nahi mujhe bas janna tha uske life mein koi hai kya? Aur use kya kya pasand hai?"

"Thik hai main tumhe sab text kar dungi. Abhi mujhe jana hai bahut zaroori kaam hai."

I picked my handbag and stood up for going.

"Ek minute Naina. Apni buddy se itne din baad mile ho. Baat nahi karogi?"

I was shocked to hear this.

"Hain? Buddy koun?"

He too stood up and came near to me.

"Main itna bada gadha bhi nahi hoon ki yeh na samajh payu ki tum hi meri buddy ho."

"Yeh kya bakwas hai?"

I couldn't look into his eyes.

"Woh tum hi thi na jo preeti banke mere saath chat karti thi aur har saal mujhe birthday wish aur gift bhejti thi?"

"Tumhe lag raha hoga preeti ne bataya. Par mujhe khud pata chala."

This time I looked up with confusion.

"Kal tum dono saath thi aur sirf tumhe pata tha ki mujhe khane mein kya pasand preeti ko koi farq nahi padh raha tha. Aur yeh bracelet yeh toh maine apni buddy ko bheja tha tumhare paas kaise?"

Oh shit! He noticed it! Main sach mein ek number ki gadhi hoon.

"Aur tumhara chehra itna utar kyun gaya jab maine kaha ki main preeti ko pasand karta hoon"

"Woh Sameer aisa kuch nahi hai"

"Toh fir meri taraf dekh ke bolo"

"I'm sorry Sameer. I had a crush on you in school. I know I shouldn't do this. But I just wanted to know you better."

"So you had? Now you don't have?"

"Hain?!"

I was dumbfounded. This boy will be my death one day!

"Bolo na"

"No I don't have " I lied and he knew I was lying.

"Okay. Then I go and propose preeti."

"No why? I mean I am your buddy toh phir tumhe mujhe propose karna chahiye na?"

I blabbered nonsense and he was laughing. I want to kill him but his laugh melt me like anything. And then what he did was beyond my expectation. He held my hand and said those lines which I was craving to listen to all these years.

"Naina I had a crush on you too. I never got the courage to tell you. You were topper of our school and I was nothing. Himmat hi nahi huya. So.."

One second seemed like one year. Everything was blurred and I could only see his beautiful eyes which made me fall in love with him.

"So Naina will you be my friend? For life time?"

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Res...

unres... (mjhy res or unres ka itna pta ni ha sahi sy new to this thing so pardon me...) 😉

wow just beautiful os ray...sach ma koi ni kh skta ha u r new to writing...vry expressive nd something vry creative boly to jhakkas..i loved it vry much...u mantain the magic of samaina...such ma prh kr maza aa gya...nd i am vry happy u r vry lucky tum sizzlerz bni sb k group chng ho gye..kop kop for such a lovely os...

congrats for 10k and for becming sizzlerz...aj tum itna bzy thi phr b os diya that's big thing u r such a sweetheart...yr...many more clrs come to u...always love u my sis...u r vry positive membr of this forum🤗❤️

Edited by hj42928 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Res🤗

unres

Ray my bhen congratulations on turning a sizzlers 🤗

and joining me back

I know you can write hence I keep pestering you to do so

so I am glad you came up with this because I asked you to

I love you❤️

now coming to this OS

it was soo beautifully written

Naina and Sameer internet friends

and he being unaware that its Naina he is talking to instead of Preeti

one misunderstanding can cost you very much

and it did cost them few years of their life as they had to stay away

but Sameer came back

and they met

and he already knew that it has been Naina who was his buddy

wow it was such a cute confession

Naina got him

he got her

and I got happy

now don't wait for your stunnerz post

just keep writing🤗

Edited by munchkinland - 6 years ago
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Meri pyaari Ray behna aaja jhappi paaa🤗kya Os likha hai .... I am super duper happy!!!!!!!! 🥳 Bhagwan kre tum Roz ek naye ladder pr chado taaki Roz hame tumhare side se write ups padhne ko mile... Kya tha ye itna pyaara sa OS kaun likhta hai btao ? Arey mai baar baar padh raha hai ise ... Aur har baar padh k sirf ek hi sentence nikalta hai muh se , " ladki ne kamal kr diya!!!! "

I could see what you told me and it was beautiful! And believe me i am more than happy to know .... ( Saari baat idhr nahi bolega mai kuch khopche k liye bhi chhod deti hu )

It is one of the special OS I've read until now and trust me it has become a part of my favourite list! everything was beautiful

Their chats, the misunderstanding, the meeting after the gap, the compliments sameer gave ,Naina's blush, their confession date , sameer teasing naina , Naina's blabbering and their confession!!!!

The word buddy and the line will you be my friend for life time took my heart ❤️

Ab mujhe aur padhna hai... To jaldi se koi dhamkaaaa karo

Keep smiling

Labhya

Edited by Labhya - 6 years ago
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Res...🤗

Unres❤️

Ray, tujhe aur bhi likhna chahiye yaar!! Such cute engrossing os❤️!! Ab Stunnerz post ki wait mat kariyo... kuch dhaasu sa de diyo,behen..🤗!

So, sameer and naina are buddies in online, but in online she is preeti,not naina...! Sameer shares his all likes dislikes with his dearest buddy!! But, one misunderstanding creates the distance of years..! But, better than the rest, der aye durust aye! Sameer and Naina met eachother at function... and the duo met again in a cafe...! And such cute confession..❤️!! " I mean I am your buddy to mujhe propose karna chahiye na? " -aha, Naina is such a cutie! Last line has my heart... " So Naina will you be my friend? For lifetime? "

I always want this kind of samaina basis of nowadays! Aur tune de diya... love you🤗!!

With love,Suparna

Edited by Suparna13 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Res

Unres

Ray🤗


Thank you for writing this beautiful OS. I was so engrossed. I didn't even realise it ended. So beautiful. You should definitely write more often. Loved loved loved it to the core. ❤️It really reminded me of someone. Of course it didn't end this way or was something like this but it did remind me for a memory😆. I want you to write more often. Thank you for this one especially for making it total octo friendly🤗



PS: Congratulations🤗

Edited by Octothorpe - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow such a cute piece of work 😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Absolutely loved this " In dinon " wali os. Loved the way you built up Samaina's bond and the cute sa jealousy. When I read Sameer sunaina hug.. I was like ohh no.. now how to get over this.. coz I just can't bring myself to read stories where Sameer romances anyone else.. still managed to get myself to read further.. and am glad I did.. as things got clarified and Samaina came together.. despite the mini heart breaks that the os gave me.. it was totally worth the read❤️. Now I too wish I have a sweet si love story like this

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Res 🤗🤗🤗

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Such a sweet OS... and set in a different time 😊

Liked the way it jumped from the school days to when they had become adults... but their bond and feelings still didnt.

Preeti ko propose karne ki baat sun kar toh Naina ko chakar hi aaya hoga! very naughty of Sameer to scare her like this!

And congrats on turning a sizzler dear! 🥳

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