SamAina OS: The Bond of Body and Soul

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Svetalana Singh

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Posted: 6 years ago

#21

Beautiful awesome fantabulous OS . Loved the w as y they progressed with their intimacy and consummation Naina wearing pink nighty and surprising Sameer was the best. Loved the reaction of Sameer. I wish CV shows something similar to this. Pura Fandom pagal ho jayega

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sc2.o

@sc2.o

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Posted: 6 years ago

#22

You write so beautifully!! This piece is so beautifully written. You are amazing. [L]

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Sue123

@Sue123

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Posted: 6 years ago

#23

Hey Mou, this was brilliant..

The way u portrayed Naina's fear and Sameer's maturity is outstanding. Naina wore the nightie haiii...

Their growth physically and emotionally is so touching. Loved loved loved it..

Lots of love 🤗

Sneha

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RangnRia

@RangnRia

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Posted: 6 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: MSK04
Hi Friends - Thank you as always for your love, patience and constant support. I am indeed blessed to have readers like you who enjoy my works so much.
I know CVs did a fantastic job in handling the topic of menstruation yesterday... and I don't even have enough words to praise Sameer Maheshwari. But, here's another OS from me which I had started writing couple of days back... Hope you enjoy the read.

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The Bond of Body and Soul

Hi Mou Di,

Kaan pakad kar sorry for this late reply,but kya karoon work,home and this navratri vrat left me exhausted at the end of the day.So read your story yesterday.

What an apt title!!! Your Titles are always so perfect...You actually depicted a true bond of Body and soul between two people.

Your stories are my DESSERTS kept aside to be savoured at the end.I have this habit of reading something before sleeping off and your updates or OSs have always been my bed-time companions...

Coming to this DESSERT,it was not only delectable but also captivating in the simplicity of its rendition.

Loved every bit of it.From how Sameer patiently explained to her that it was not "ganda"...to the usage of words like "world-war 2"...to him getting a taste of his own medicine...Naina's hand under his vest in her sleep giving hints to Sameer about her unspoken desires...the hilarious reaction of Sameer to Naina thinking of her as an illusion...that statement by Naina"chilla chilla ...dry tha".

One word Di...WOW!!! What a beautiful,sensible and captivating account of the changing dynamics between a newly married couple with the bride thinking of monthly cycle as "ganda" and the groom going all out to make her feel comfortable,not think of it as "ganda" as well as making her feel wanted .

Loads of Love,

Ria.