MINI SS - Kya Hua Tera Wada ( Completed )

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Kya Hua Tera Wada

Kya hua tera vaada

woh kasam woh iraada


It's raining heavily, all people went to safe site to save themselves but one boy still standing there not caring about rain . His friend angrily tried to pull him but he didn't move an inch .


" Damn Maan stop this madness ..bohot hua . An wapas chal "


" I can't " that was his simple but firm answer .


" Maan don't be stubborn , bohot jor se baarish ho raha hai tu bimar par jayega .."


" doesn't matter " again same tone . Adi couldnt help but cursed the person because of whom his friend doing this madness .


" now you gone mad . Stop being ... "


" nehi Adi... I promised her I will be present here at this time . What if she comes here and couldn't find me ? She will be heartbroken. "


Adi laughed loud as if Maan cracked some joke . " really she will be heartbroken! Maan it's already two month and you think out of nowhere she will come . Ab bas bhi kar , think about yourself. She not coming back not now not never . Kab samjhega tu yeh ? "


" agar mera pyaar sacha hai toh ... "


" pyaar !! Where this come from ? She never loved you ? She only used you to pass her boring motionless life that's it . Why you still pinning feelings for that girl ? Move on , bhool ja usse "


" Adi woh mere sath rahe ya na rahe hamesha mere dil pe rahega.. main usse kabhi bhool nehi sakta "


bhoolega dil jis din tumhe

oh din zindagi ka aakhri din hoga

Kya hua tera vaada

woh kasam woh iraada


In those few words Adi understood his friend not gonna listen to him . His love for Her is something which he will never understand. He hates Her , he hates Her with passion but still for his friend sake he hopes she come back to Maan. For Maan's sake he ready to forgive Her who giving Maan so much pain .

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Random one .. was listening this song si had to write something , don't know how it came out . Ignore if too sadist lol ... also ignore mistakes....

Enjoy

Index

Part 1 - Above

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Last Part

Epilogue


My Index

Edited by Keepdreaming - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sad but nice os.are u going to countinue or just this one short.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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great

maan is waiting for his love when there is no hope of her coming to meet maan

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hie Sabina...

congrats on the new OS...

I love this song, Yaar...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Maan waiting for his love for two months...my heart went out for him...

loved that Adi was there for him...

can understand Adi's anger for her...but is it true? was it just time pass for her? or is there any reason for her disappearance for two months...

would love if you could give us some background to this too...

loved your randomness, though...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

I was not fan of this song but after watching too much promo ( you guys can guess what I mean ) kinda liking it very much ...

So put down this ... just sudden thoughts.. had to write something so don't know how it came out . Ignore if too sadist lol ... also ignore mistakes

Enjoy

Promo? Which Promo?

Koi naya show hai kya??

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update

It's sad 😢

Yo show his love and his trust

Adi hate his love

Friend always there for you

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice os...👍🏼

Maan is waiting for his love from past two months....

There is no hope of her coming back...Adi is there for him...

Plzz add me in ur pm list.i'm old reader of ur stories...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahibasharma

Promo? Which Promo?

Koi naya show hai kya??

Colors new show bepanha pyaar promo .. this song play on background..

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