MG STORY BAWRA MAN PART 25,26,27- PAGE 34,35 25MAY2020 - Page 16

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Priyal update when you can
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Hey Priyal! update next please

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Nice update 👍 poor maan geet will get married to someone else waiting to see how story proceeds further please update it's been 3 months now

Will prepare ur problem also get solve god bless you 🙏

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Please do try and update Part 20

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waiting for Part 20 as well

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PART 20

Mohinder saw only groom's parents

Mohinder: Aap dono. Sab thik hai na.

Groom's father: Kuch thik nahi hai. Aapne hamare sath dhokakiya hai

Mohinder: Dhoka.

Groom's mother: Haa yahi ki geet aapki beti nhi hai.

Mohinder: Geet hamari beti hai.

Groom's Mother: Par aapka khoon to nahi hai na. Pata nahi kahase utha laye ho

Rano: Bas kijiye.

Mohinder: Geet hamari beti hai.

Groom's father: Hogi mante hoge aap .par aapka khoon tonahi.

Brij: Aap apni had mat par kijiye. Warna main umar ka lihajbhi bhool jaunga

Groom's mother: Aise pariwar se hame koi rishta nahi karna.Ham to kya biradari ka koi bhi aapki beti se shadi nhi karega.

Mohinder:isse pehle ki main aapko dhakke marke bahar nikaldu chale jaiye.

They left

Devki: Ho gaya mil gaya sukoon. Maine kaha tha mat la is ladkiko ghar. Par beti beti kehke sar chadha rakha dekh liya natija.

Geet saw and listened everything went to her room cryingbadly

Amar: Mohinder ye sab kya hai.

Mohinder:Ji sir.... Geet mere dost ki beti hai.

He was about to say more but Remembered geet ,Rano geet kole aao. Use bhi ye sab batana hoga.

Rano went to bring geet . She knocked door. But no response.

Rano: Suniye ji, Brij geet darwaja nahi khol rahi .

Amar, dadi ,devki ,mohinder ,anjali ,brij gathered .

Brij told them to be far he broke the door.

They went inside. Saw Blood oozing. Geet slit her wrist.

Devki: Lo aur ek tamasha.Bola tha maine ye ladki ek din sabko le doobegi

Brij: Dadi aap chup kariye.

Rano: Geet bete, bete utho

Rano was crying .

Brij lifted her in arms and rushed to hospital. Doctor wasabout to say something but as he saw Amar khurana kept quite

Doctors started their treatment.

As doctor came out.

Mohinder: meri beti.

Doctor: wo abhi stable hai. Wo under observation hai. Unhekafi weakness hai . At least 5 to 6 days unhe yahi rehna hoga.

Brij: Ji doctor.

Nurse gave him prescription

Nurse: Ye dawai aap le aaiye

Brij: Jee.

Dadi called Maan. Maansaw dadi calling. He cut the call. Dadi again called

Maan: Hello dadi maa.

Dadi: Maan. Wo maan.

Maan: Maine photos dekhi dadi. Aapne gift de diya? Geetkhush to lag rahi hai na.

Dadi: Maan(bit loud but controlled seeing surrounding nursetold her to talk in low voice)

Maan: Dadi kya hua? Aap chup kyun ho?

Dadi: Geet ki shadi tut gayi Maan. Geet ne suicide karne kikoshish ki.

Maan was shocked.

Maan: Geet thik to hai na . main abhi India aa raha hun.

Maan cut the call. He called John.

Maan: John am goingto India. Please you adjust here.

John: Suddenly.

Maan: Bro I will explain you later. Only thing i can say mygeet needs me

John understood that there must be something important. Hedidnt ask more

John: Ok bye. Take care.

Maan took the flight and left to India.The moment when he arrivedIndia. Went to hospital. He saw Brij there.

Brij saw Maan. Till Brij pretend to be strong. As he sawMaan hugged him tightly.

Maan: Everything will be fine. Geet will be alright.

Brij:Mujhe meri purani gudiya wapis chahiye, see how lifeless she islooking. Kya galti hai meri masoom ki. Itni hi na ki wo sagi nahi hai. Brij toldeverything to maan

Maan was shocked listening this.

Maan:Ye kya keh rahe ho?

Brij: Haa Maan she is adopted. Thats why jab un logo ko patachala unhone ye kehkar rishta tod diya na jane kiska khoon hai. Chodunga nahiun logon ko.

Maan: Calm down Brij.

Brij: Kaise shant ho jaun. Itna bada ghav kar diya uske manpe unki ghatiya bato se. Sab bate sun li usne tabhi usne ye kiya Maan.

Maan: Baki sab kaha hai.

Brij: Sab kal raat se yahi the. Maine unhe dopahar ko gharbhej diya. Thoda aram karle phir aa jayenge.

Maan: Aur tum ?

Brij: Main meri gudiya ke pas hi rahunga. Aisa lagta haiagar ek pal bhi usse dur jaunga to wo mujhse dur ho jayegi. Humne use almostkho diya tha

Maan: Nahi Brij. Aisa kuch nhi hoga. Jiska bhai usse itnapyar karta ho usse kuch nhi hoga. Sham ho rahi hai. Tum jao fresh hoke aa jao.Main yaha rukta hun.

Brij: No

Maan: Relax Brij. Main hun. Trust me.

Brij: Ok. Meri gudiya ka dhyan rakhna.

And he left from there. Maan went to geets room. Sat nearher. Nurse was there.

Maan: Ise hosh kab tak aayega?

Nurse: Inhe hosh aaya tha dopahar ko. Par ye shock main hai.Ro rahi thi. Doctor ne inhe nind ka injection diya hai. Kuch waqt me inhe hosh aa jayega. Aap yaha rukenge kuch der main abhiaati hun.

Maan: Ji .

Maan was looking at her and thought “ Tumne khud ki jaanlene ki koshish ki iska matlab to yahi hua na kit um rajvir se pyar ho gayahai. But he is unfortunate tumhare liye stand nahi le saka. Matlab to yahihai ki he never cared for you. Man kartahai isi waqt sabko keh du ki how much I love you. Zindagi se bhi jyada tum important ho.” He was about to touch herforhead. Just then his phone rang. Hereceived.

John: Maan you didnt call me? Is everything ok?

Maan : Nothing is ok. Geet attempted suicide.

John: What?

Maan: Yes John

Maan told everything to him.

John: Is she ok?

Maan: She is sleeping. Thanks John. You supported me a lot.

John: We are friends . No sorry No Thankyou in friendship.

Maan: We are not friends John. You are my best friend. Willcall you later.

John: Bye take care.

Maan was waiting for Brij. Just then Nurse came and preparing injection.

Maan saw it. He was worried how much pain she have totolerate

Maan: Injection kyun? Geet to so rahi hai.

Nurse: Doctor sahab ne bola hai.

Nurse gave her injection and left.

Maan thought" Kya halat bana di Apne aap ki. Agar tumhe kuchh ho jata to mainkaise jeeta. Tumhe nahi pata na how much i love you. Par ab Main sab kuch thik kar doonga."

Just then he heard meek voice and her movement.He went nearher

Geet: Maa, papa, veer ji.

Geet opened her eyes . she saw Maan. She tried to get up.She was impatient.

Maan: Relax Geet.

He helped her to sit.

Geet: Maa, papa, Veer ji sab kaha hai? Aap yaha kaise? MujheVeer ji ke pas jana hai.

Maan : Ok ok . Main call karta hun.

Maan about to call Brij. Just then Brij arrived.

Geet saw him. Brij went near her. Geet started crying and gavehim hug.

Maan was watching their sibling love

Brij: sshhh.... Chup ho jao ro mat ( wiped her tears)Kaisalag raha hai gudiya?

Geet: Maa papa kaha hai? Aap kaha chale gaye the?

Maan saw her restlessness.

Brij: Gudiya bas thodi der ke liye bahar gaya tha. Maa papakal subah aa jayenge.

Geet cried.

Geet: Am sorry veer ji. Maine aap sab ko pareshan kiya. Par main kya karti sab meriwajah se dukhi the.

Brij: Nahi Gudiya. Tumhari wajah se koi dukhi nahi hai. Wo log unlucky hai. Jinhone merigudiya ko mana kar diya.

Geet hugged him tightly.

Geet: Mujhe maaf kardo . I am sorry.

Brij: Dont cry. Kuchh kha lo.

He gave her fruits. Geet started eating.

Brij: Maan tum ghar jao. Aaram karo. Thake lag rahe ho

Maan: Main thik hun.

Geet: Bas ho gaya.

Brij: So jao ab.

Geet: Mujhe ghar jana hai. Mujhe yaha nahi rehna.

Brij: Ye kya jid hai?

Geet: Mujhe yaha achha nhi lag raha. Mujhe ghar le chalo maapapa ke pas.

Maan: Use yaha achha nahi lag raha Brij isliye jid kar rahihai na. Hum abhi doctor se baat kar letehai.

Brij: Thik hai Gudiya. Tum aaram karo hum abhi aate hai.

Geet: Veer ji jaldi.

Brij: Haa.

Brij and Maan went to meet doctor. Brij asked doctor forgeet's discharge.

Doctor: She is weak. Kafi blood loss ho chuka hai. Agarthodi bhi der ho jati to unki jaan...

Maan interrupted

Maan: We can understand. But uski full care hogi.

Brij: Yes doctor. Uska bilkul bhi man nahi hain.

Doctor: Thik hai before discharge main unko check kar letahun. Nurse discharge paper ready kariye.

Doctor check her and advice to be careful regarding diet andwarned to not to give any stress to her.Brij signed discharge papers.

Brij helped Geet to sit in car.

Brij: Main drive karta hun.

Maan: Main drive karunga.

Brij: Thanks Maan. You are here . I really need you.

Maan: No need to saythanks.Lets go.

Maan started driving. Brij asked Maan about office work.They started discussing about work. Maan was looking at Geet through mirror who was lostin looking outside from window.

Brij: Maan main gudiya ko chhodkar wapas nhi jana chahta.Par tin mahino ke liye hume jana hoga. Humari internship bhi complete hojayegi. Then we'll be back to India buddy.

Maan:Hmmm?( came out of trance)

Brij: Tum kaha khogaye.

Maan: Kuch kaha tumne?

Brij: Boht kuch kaha. Tumne dhyan nahi diya.

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Edited by priyal12 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

It's gud that Geet marriage didn't happened it's totally mohi mistake before fixing alliance he have to reveal truth to boy parents .

what if they knows after marriage and rajvir divorced hr

Maan came back hope this time he can confess his feelings to brij and Geet

Maan thought Geet lovey rajvir that's y she attempted suicide but Geet did bz she thought hr family facing problem bz of hr

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Posted: 6 years ago

thanks for the pm!

Part 20

feeling for Geet! what is her fault? glad that the marriage was called off now! what if they got to know later? how did they find out?

hated that Geet cut her wrists! Thank God she is fine!

glad that Maan came to India! understand Maan's concern for Geet.

hope that Maan tells Brij that he loves Geet!

update soon


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sad update

geet try to suicide after breaking her marriage n her identity

brij feel little relax seeing maan who come back getting all this from daadi

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I'm truly sorry for such response

thankfully was going through all the threads

and realized I haven't read the last chapter

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