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Arnav is mesmerized by Khushi, he is still in state of daze. someday it will hit him hard, his real purpose in Khush's office.

Khushi is totally ignorant of Arnav's presence..when she gets to know his real reason.. hell will befall. she will be devastated

oh wow........things escalated pretty soon.........

Things are going to get sticky real soon. Arnav is stuck in a hard place. There is no way to come out without offending Khushi.

The tangles are getting more complex, especially with impending physical intimacy. Khushi has no clue about Arnav’s real intentions behind taking up Sheetal’s offer. Should Arnav not confess it before taking this next step in their relationship and let Khushi take an informed decision?

Just discovered this, and what a fun story. It is cute, funny, sweet and with clouds of trouble looming overhead. I like the characterizations of both Khushi and Arnav, and the entwining of their personal and professional lives thanks to Payal and Akash.

Coming to the last update, I hope that Arnav comes clean with Khushi as to why Sheetal brought him in, before they take the next step in their relationship. If she finds out after, the feeling of betrayal will be worse, and she will likely find it very hard to forgive him. Its not like he's not had the opportunity, but I'm guessing he's caught in the first throes of the relationship, and hasn't given a thought as to why he is there in the first place.

I'm looking forward to seeing how the rest of the story unfolds, starting with their 'date' at Khushi's place after. It'll also be interesting to see how things with work out on the Sheetal front once that bomb has dropped.

Great writing by way, I love the way your words flow...

- K

Wow...romance in office!!!!😍😍

Lovely update...

Originally posted by: Savera84

It started as a cute romance and ended up as something different all together. They both are enjoying this period of being in a relationship.

I thought Khushi will take him to the edge and push him from there. Hmmm, she could not resist him at the end. Who schedules meetings at 5:00? Arnav needs to fire his PA ASAP.

Sheetal cloud is still looming large. Can they address it before she spills the beans please?

Cheers.....

Thanks so much for the constant feedbacks! :)

Guess no one can resist him :D ;)

Like you said, the Sheetal cloud is looming over them esp Arnav. He'll soon need to deal with it.

Originally posted by: canapoem

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Writerji, super duper update.

The best part I have loved about your story is how Khushi has always taken the initiative in their love story whether be it revealing herself, or their first kiss, deciding to keep their love secret for some time and now initiating physical intimacy. I love this bold Khushi and thank you for writing such a female lead.

Also thank you for not showing Khushi as this stupidly blushing, virgin girl who runs away at the first sight of any kind of intimacy. Tired of so many stories where Arnav can be a womaniser and Khushi has to be a virgin.

This story is such a refreshing change and I am loving it. And you my dear writer is how a true feminist should be!!! 👏

Good call to keep their relationship under wraps for sometime. And this should give Arnav sometime to think about how to tell Khushi about his deal with Sheetal. And I really hope Khushi hears it from Arnav and not Sheetal.

Their make out session was super hot and now I can't wait to see what will happen next.

Thank you for another awesome update.

Thanks so much for this (and all your) awesome review(s)!

Appreciate your insights about the characterization of Tangled!Khushi. I wrote what came naturally to me while visualizing fic!Khushi. I've read and liked fics with K exploring her 1st time but here, it wouldn't have been in tandem with what I pictured her as/or her actions - as you explained.

Happy that you're liking it.

Interesting story .

Read all the chapters in one go .

Would love to read this ff .

I can't help but fall for this story some more with each update!

As I hoped and guessed, once the secret is out in the open Arnav is playing the lover boy effortlessly as if he was always meant to😳. The surreptitious flirting was fun and natural. Of course he can't get enough of his woman.

Khushi always takes her work seriously, be it keeping it strictly professional or winning the bets against her own boyfriend. Which makes me worry if and when Arnav's reason for becoming MD comes to the fore she will take it seriously to the heart, almost destructively. Arnav is literally TOYING with a lot here and I don't mean only the children's toy company🥱.

I am bracing my heart for the next few updates as it seems like the build up to the other reveal might be in sight. I only pray Sheetal doesn't add to it.

The only complain I have is the chapter ends as soon as I start reading it🤣 On a serious note, your writing is simply amazing and effortless which reiterates how good you are. Keeping the readers tangled as always!