MG- Chori-chori..Chupke-chupke.. P3,4,epi1/p3,6,9) Epi2/p11 July26 - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Your stories are like this .. always left a smile 😊😊 keep writing


Thank you😊

My pleasure dear will try to make u smile often😊
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Originally posted by: Shonameet


Nhi its chori-chori.. Chupke-chupke

Oh another new
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Both left something for each other that's so romantic
Last line was superb he yinally ended their hide and seek game
Maan noticedevery small thing about her .. Aww he definitely in love
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Posted: 6 years ago
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That was so beautiful
Finally the hide and seek game is over
Loved it
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marvelous OS!! great that finally the hide and seek ended!
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Part3

He has felt someones gaze on him..he stoped with the intention to turn around..but didnt wanted to make it obivious, so pretended to tie his shoe lace. While correcting the alredy perfectly tied laces.. He lookd around through the corner of his eyes..but noone was there. He was about to get up..when noticed something or rather someone moving near the pillar of the main gate of her house. His heartbearts rosed with the instant thought.. Could it be her??

He wanted to confirm his doubt. So he pretended to walk away.. And then hided at the corner behind a wall. A strange kind of excitment was there..and a hope, that it should be her. He peeped behind the wall to look at her house.. And at that exact moment.. She came out from behind that pillar. His heart jumped in joy..seeing her. So she was aware of his presence around her..this realisation gave imense happiness & statisfaction to his heart...that she wasnt obivious to his existance like he had thought earlier.

She turned to go back inside..but then stopd n lookd at the ground. He saw her picking something..his hands automatically moved to check his pocket...while it didnt take him anytime to recognise his hanky that was in her hands now. It must have fallen from his pants poket.. while keeping that anklet of hers.

His heart skiped a beat when he saw her craseing it with her soft fingers. And next he noticed her lips moving..she said something..he didnt know why but he felt..he felt as if..as if she has said his name..she has called him..however he wasnt sure.

Then she brought it close to her face & touched it with her soft skin.. her this innocent gesture made his heartbeats crazy.. As he got the confirmation of her feelings for him..that she was also affected by him as much as he was. He couldnt controlled himself and didnt realised when he came out from his hiding & started walking towards her. His eyes were stuck at her..seeing her blush adorn cheeks & that shy smile playing on her lips. He stoped a few feets away from her. And kept looking at her didnt know for how long? His tarnce broke only when she lookd up..that shy smile was replaced by a shock seeing him infront of her. Time stoped for him when his eyes met with hers... He was so lost in her eyes..that he forgot the world around him. She was also lost..probably coz of the sudden shock..she didnt even tried to move or run. He wanted to talk her..he had so many things to say!

He took slow steps towards her..looking straight at her..in her eyes. While She stood there unable to move. With each step he took.. Boths hearbeats increased..both were going through the same emotions..nervousness, excitment, hesitation!

He was just a few steps away from her... when

Suddenly he saw her leaving...and without thinking he just held her wrist..thus stoping her from leaving.

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Wow update ... bit busy Will read soon

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Updates thread

Hi it's updates thread... feel free to post your updates link there.... not compulsory 😊😊😊

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