Bonded by Fate- AkshAn FF (Part 48 Pg 117) (UPDATED-2 Jan) - Page 66

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice update...

Continue soon

Yeh new IF ne Sara maza kirkira Kar Diya hai...

Hope they fix it soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice update.Image

Loved bonding between Karan & Guddan. I like Karan early also but loved his character in this update.Image

Finally Akshan Truth Out before KaranImage


~ I know right now new design is pain, word limit, spacing, enter, server error, bold words being lost after posting sometimes, .... & many more.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Nice update...

Continue soon

Yeh new IF ne Sara maza kirkira Kar Diya hai...

Hope they fix it soon

Thank youWill try to update asap(^o^)
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya1994

Nice update.Image

Glad to know u like it😊

(Vese where did u find the emoji?!(TдT)

Loved bonding between Karan & Guddan. I like Karan early also but loved his character in this update.Image

Karan is an absolute sweetheart;)

Finally Akshan Truth Out before KaranImage


~ I know right now new design is pain, word limit, spacing, enter, server error, bold words being lost after posting sometimes, .... & many more.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part - 39 Bheege Bheege se Lamhe

“Why didn’t you go home with Karan?” Akshat enquired while driving the car.

It was fifteen past ten and the road way back home was a lonely one bypassing a forest.

Apparently, Guddan got off the college at 5 pm and was to be dropped off at Jindal mansion, as was stated to Karan but she insisted on accompanying Akshat and thus Karan dropped her at the restaurant where Akshat was personally supervising the order for a foreign delegate’s welcome ceremony. And by the time he got free, the clock had already stuck 10.

“Because I wanted to go with you!” She replied in a matter of fact voice and looked out of the window.

Akshat sighed. Women were troublesome creatures, way beyond his measley level of understanding.

As he was continuing with the mind monologues about peculiarity of women and his wife in general, a banshee like scream screeched through his ears as he applied the brakes instantly.

“What is it?” He asked worried turning to the aforementioned banshee…his wife.

“I am starving, let’s go and eat maggi over there!” Guddan suggested.

Akshat let his eyes follow the direction she was pointing to and found a rundown stall in the midst of nowhere where a frail old man was probably brewing some tea and maggi on the go.

“No! This is extremely unhygienic! And we’ll reach home in another 30 minutes, so control your stomach”

Guddan pouted and glared at him, “Is that so?”

Akshat nodded, puzzled as Guddan flashed him an out-of-the-blue smile. The sarcastic one!

“Since it is so unhygienic’ I won’t force you!” She trailed as Akshat let go of the anticipatory breath he was holding and had just turned the key, when the door on Guddan’s side was pushed open and she stepped out.

“Guddan?!” He called out puzzled, leaning over her seat.

“Aapko nhi aana toh mat aaiye”, Guddan shrugged carelessly and was soon crossing over to the other side of road.

“Uncle, aap na jaldi se mast si maggi aur ek cup masala chai bana dijiye!” Guddan ordered, her mouth already salivating at maggi’s fragrance sneaking up her nose.

“Make it two!”

Amused, Guddan turned her head to see a 6 ft 3 inch mass of stone plop behind her on the wooden table cum chair.

“Oh! If it isn’t Mr. ‘this-is-unhygienic’!?” She spoke sarcastically like a high society aunty.

Akshat smiled, “I don’t fuss over tea too much!”

An indistinct noise of “Hmmphh” originated from Guddan’s throat as she turned her face away from him.

Akshat chuckled. She looked cute,making faces like that.

While Guddan was humming a song, a loud sound of thunder pierced across the sky and the clouds opened up.

“Shit!” Akshat cursed as he hurried to hide his head within the minute space in the stall.

Turning to the his side, he found Guddan gone only to see her standing with arms wide apart and tongue sticking out, while she faced the clouds raining incessantly.

“Kya kar rahi ho? Andar aa jao. Beemar pad jaogi!” Akshat shouted.

But his words were dissolved halfway as Guddan whirled slowly,absolutely lost in the rain.

Shaking his head, he removed his coat and rushing to her, caught her palm. Confused, Guddan looked at him as he leaned closer.

“This is the first rain of the season, for god’s sake! You’ll fall ill!” And with that he started pulling her away only to feel his hand pulled back.

“Aap bhi aaiye na! Feel for yourself, how this rain will drain away all your stress and anxiety and will leave you feeling fresh. Kabhi kabhi faayde nuksaan ke beyond bhi dekhna chahiye. Kya pata kal hona ho”

As she let go his hand and let her tresses fall free from the bun,Akshat looked on enamoured as she combed them back while drinking the rain drops falling onto her stuck out tongue. He had long lost track of the fact that he was standing in rain as he suppressed a chuckle on seeing her stick out her tongue in various directions, in a futile effort to catch raindrops.

A puddle had formed in a ditch on the road as Guddan started jumping init like a kid. She felt so alive and so free!

Turning her head, she stopped as she saw Akshat facing the sky with his eyes closed while a serene smile danced on his lips.

Seeing him in sukoon, bought her sukoon. Guess that’s how love works!

As an idea clicked in her mind, Guddan approached an unaware Akshat.

‘Aapne toh kabhi poocha nhi, hum hi pooch lete hain! Aap bhi kya yaad rakhenge! Ye ishq hai…kya kya karaye…’ Guddan chuckled feeling silly as she paused in front of Akshat and forwarding her right hand, while placing the left one on her back,called out to him.

“May I have the pleasure of dancing with you?”

Akshat’s eyes snapped open as he saw Guddan asking him for a dance. Her eyes were alit with mischief. He smiled and keeping his left in her right,mimicked her gentlemanly tone, “It would be my honour”.

Grasping her hand firmly, he reversed their positions as her palm came on top of his and then leading her to a corner, he kept her hand on his shoulder while sliding the other one in his palms. As his free hand slipped behind her waist, they started swaying to the song being sung by the rains, the wind fluttering against the leaves while being surrounded by earth’s scent.

Soon, Guddan moved closer as she rested her ears against his heart and clutched onto his palm. I wish this moment never ends. Kaash aap aise hi mujhe humesha apni baahon mein rakhein.

“Akshat Ji?!”

“Hmm”

As Guddan moved her head back, she looked into his eyes determined. Karan was right. She should not wait for the right time anymore. This was the moment. She should confess.

“Humein aapse kuch kehna tha…”

“Haa..bolo..”

“H-hum…hum…aa…p..s…aap-se….pya…I…lo….”

“Beta…aapki maggi thandi ho rahi hai!”

And Guddan’s first attempt at confession was interrupted, brutally.

“Let’s eat first or the army of mice in your stomach might run over your sanity”, Akshat chuckled and pulled apart.

“Iss maggi ki toh!” Guddan cursed annoyed as she went inside and picked her maggi.

The downpour had simmered down considerably but a slight drizzle was still going on. Taking her plate, Guddan went on to sit below a tree, under the slight drizzle.

“You like your maggi soggy?” Akshat asked as he put over her frame a plastic sheet that was lying unused with the stall owner.

“Aap bhi aaiye!” Guddan invited him spreading the sheet as he obliged and plopped by her side, on the mud while pulling the plastic sheet over his head.

He looked on fondly as she slurped the maggi and then made a blissful face.

“Aap khayenge?” Suddenly, a fork with maggi dangling off its ends was shoved right in front of his face.

He refused but she insisted and he gave in. As he closed his lips over the maggi, he realised that it indeed was very tasty. He had long back left eating maggi owing to him being a health and fitness freak and all.

“Achi hai na?” Guddan asked proudly as Akshat nodded and picked up some more with his fingers.

However as he slurped it in, his eyes widened as he saw Guddan’s face few cm away from his with the other end of maggi in her mouth. She was just as stumped, considering that she had almost stopped breathing too.

And the next moment, she literally choked on her own breath as Akshat did something she never expected him to. He went ahead and sucked in the maggi to the point where their lips touched and then he bit on it, leaving Guddan gobsmacked.

In the next instance, he turned his head away flustered unable to take the shocked expression her face. He had done something super bold but he couldn’t help it when she had that puzzled look with tinges of red staining her cheek. He just had to do it.

Guddan smiled as she touched her lips with her index finger. Was her love really one-sided? Maybe…just maybe…she should not be bracing herself for a rejection for his actions are speaking way louder that he ever would.

“Akshat ji?”

“Hmm”

“Let’s bring Saru bahu home”

With that Akshat turned around to face her, as Guddan smiled.

Part 40 - Shenanigans

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/150273837?tid=5034085

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Edited by nish_vir - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Amazing

Akshan romance in rain bt even now Aj doesnt realise his love for her

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Good update

Akshan eating Maggie while raining and their romantic dance was awesome

Please make both Guddan and AJ confess their love simultaneously it would be great

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome as usual

Loved it

Plzz update soon

Can't wait to read the next part

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Posted: 6 years ago

Phir se lollipop cheater .....😯😯😯😯😯


By the way doesn't that maggi tastes good to Jindal Sahab 😜😜😜😜

Haaye ....pls ab busss intezaar Nahi hotaaaaa

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Kaya_luvakshan

Phir se lollipop cheater .....😯😯😯😯😯

*chuckles* I am a writer after all, it's my duty to show you the lollipop *winks*

By the way doesn't that maggi tastes good to Jindal Sahab 😜😜😜😜

It definitely did, no joke! *evil smile*

Haaye ....pls ab busss intezaar Nahi hotaaaaa

Keep patient, becoz picture abhi baaki hai mere dost. What you want will defintely come but road towards that won't be an easy one...

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