The Rumblings Midday mumblings.. My Ra4gKor

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The Rumblings and Midday Mumblings….an OS


The transformation of Maidam to Chakor was so beautiful with ofcourse a demo and ever since the family has been busy with the academics, sports, the roses nursery, their growing up sickness, annual day events…

The couple was busy with their schedules, with Raaghav getting repeat UK deals as of the goodwill of Rishabs and also expansion of business. The operations have indeed grown and new trainees inducted and many of Laal’s workmen were acquired to save them from lay offs as the Laals shutters were down. The Rishabs workmen were inducting them fine but with stringent no nonsense rules within the Plantation. Any weed found were thrown out even without bringing to the couples knowledge as Govind and Mohit was in full custody and they wanted only hard and loyal employees. The new employees were amazed at the respect the workmen have for their ideal couple and the excellent work environment and workmen benefits.

Kaaka was more of into advisor role and happy at the Plantation and he has his remodeled office room in the Plantation too rarely visits the Lodge but not much he wanted to visit his daughter too as he was overwhelmed with the foursome and his chatur bitiya…

Chakor was busy with her coaching at school and also with other children who had been referred by Rathod personally and also from the rural background. Her regime was quite busy but this regime has indeed made her more confident and toned her more beautifully too…

Its been quite a few months with busy schedules but they did not fail to be in their warmth though nothing more could happen…but happiness was prevailing in their cute moments of warmth though Rowdy was missing his demos very much as she would come tired after her coaching sessions but not failing to spend time with the cubs and the roses that most of the time she ended up with cuddle with her Lion getting his warmth and soft soothing kisses. Once he just said, birdie we just need to go on some vacation please as we need a break too! She smiled.

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The boys were just shining in their academics, extra curriculum and also in discipline… Arjun grew more matured and also fearless, sometimes gets into a bit of trouble too but with Aayansh he manages… Rohit and Lalit have become like their guards… and the roses were budding well, with Aditi like Rowdy and Ananya like Birdie…

It was a PTA meet at school and the boys were identified as the best all rounders in their classes and Arjun gave an excellent but a short speech about his parents…

Aayansh cutie pie could not talk much but asked Mumma and Daddy to come on stage and just hugged them and said to the crowd that he has the best parents in the Universe and kissed mumma in her eyes bringing tears from RagKor.

It was a weekend breezy evening and winter had set in. The boys were inside the Mansion in the huge family room playing with the roses and Aayansh was sketching something while An was giving him the erasers when asked. Ar was surfing and teaching Ad various games and rhymes…

RagKor walked in when Chakor kissed them and started to tear looking at the sketch… It was a Big Indian Canvass, which had Rishab’s drawing and below was written …. Thank you dhadha for giving us the best parents!!! Love you loads!!! And there were mini sketches of the four kids at the bottom…

Aa showed it to Bhai who told him certain corrections. Raaghav was very emotional and was tearing when the boys just hugged him and said Daddy please don’t tear… We love you and mumma…what would have happened to us if you were not there, what would have happened if mumma had not come to us…

He just hugged them and said, If you had not come to me I would have been living like a corpse searching for my life looking at Chakor and if your mumma had not come to us maybe we would be still living but without our life… thank you Chakor for coming into our lives and kissing the roses giving a meaning for our lives… It was a very emotional moment for the family.

They all were in the Master bedroom and after sleeping kids were placed in their respective rooms when RagKor were in their diwan, she was resting on him while he was hugging her from behind placing soft kisses… Raaghav, hmmmm what would have happened to me if Aa had not seen me, if I had not boarded the Shimla bus and If you had not spotted me… with tears running down… I would have gone back to AZ and would have maybe even die… he turned her towards him, closed her mouth with his lips and she trembled in his hold till she calmed down. He did not speak anything but just calmed her and carried her to bed and just cuddled her very close to him. He just soothed her with kisses saying I LOVE YOU CHAKOR and JUST LOVE ME MORE while she went into a slumber.

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Ar had picked up a quarrel at School as a senior student had been rude with a younger one and it had indeed gone a bit nasty and it was brought to the notice of the Principal who had called Chakor. Chakor apologized and was upset with him and drove them home with the boys and girls and indeed very angry on Ar.

At the mansion…..

Ch: Ar, I have told you many times not to get into physical duels and to inform the teachers or the principal. You are not listening to me. He was quiet…

Raaghav signed him to go to his room.

Ar: Sorry mumma he said and left but I cannot see injust and he was rude… He walked silent..

They were in their room Raaghav was telling Chakor that it is ok as he is unable to digest any injust like his mumma so taking it out.

Chakor: Raaghav please donot support violence and he is too young and it is not taking like me she said. I donot support violence and taking law into own hands.

Raaghav: You do take decisions on your own and you too can’t take injust. He is being bold.

Chakor : You mean to say that I don’t listen to others and do things on my own? He is too young and for that matter I don’t fight with others.

Ra : But don’t be harsh on him, I will speak to him, I know him better he said…Soon he realized what he spoke…

Ch : She was shocked, crying. Haan, I was not with him, I am not his mother, true only you know him.

Ra: No, I did not mean it that way, and you are making it big… I just told that I will speak to him.. you are….

Ch: Its ok… crying….. You are true, you know him better…. You were with him for ten years, me only few years…

The air was not good and this was the first time they had words of war and both slept thinking, without having the warmth which hurt both very much… But life is not always smooth… She is right, its not good to be physical at this young age… and I should not have told that I know the kids as she has given herself though being only for few years… but..Raaghav is right, he definitely knows them better as being with them so long right from the young age. Why did I feel insecured??? They turned but saw the other closing their eyes and turned back and kept quiet.. Should there be ego within couples???

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Chakor was up and she did not have sessions so she did not go to school…. She prepared the kids when Ar walked in and said hugging her mumma I am sorry, please donot be sad and angry… I will not get physical, I promise.. I understand.. She smiled hugging back… Ar we need to be bold, stand against injust but should follow certain norms before getting physical and if you start being physical then that will become a habit to deal with things. He accepted and was ready for the school.

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He was getting ready in their room but his mind was very disturbed. Why did I say that line? She did not cuddle to sleep too?? Will this lead to more of distance?? No No I cannot grow this.. I love her, and she has seen so many hurdles in life, she know better.. He turned….

She was climbing to the room with disturbed thought… why did I react? He was true, I should not be harsh.. Yes many times I do things on my own….He did not cuddle me last night… He must be upset but I …. She walked in to hit against each other.

Both looked up with tears in eyes… Sorry, both together…. Chakor sorry I should not have spoken like that.. should not have told you those words… No Raaghav you are right, I should not have been harsh too and you are right you indeed know them… there was nothing wrong..I should realise that…..she was on and on… I have hurt you….. I am also wrong, I too should not have…… both were on and on when both just came together closed each others mouth… He held her tight… moving his hand and hers on him, he looked into her eyes, lifting her chin kissing her… and she was kissing him back…it was few minutes, when she hugged him tight going into his chest… lets not talk about it… But Budda why did you not cuddle me last night she punched him… he smiled lifting her… Sorry…. How about a demo winking… its been way too long… hmmmm ….. Daddyyyyyy we are ready. What are you doing still called the Boys… Oops kissing her quickly…. Coming coming was going to show a demo!! Ooops she kicked him with her elbow. Chup…. Rowdy.. shying… he doubled down…carrying the roses… they all waved at her!!! On to the steering he mimed looking at her. SORRY… DEMO!!!😘

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The kids had half day, so she picked them from school… Rohan and Lalit came along to play and group study with the boys… the roses were happy… all had their lunch. They played for sometime and went to have their nap… snoring to glory..

She went to have a shower thinking of the morning, smiling to herself, taking the robe from the cupboard and going to their aesthetic bathroom, lost in his thoughts she just pushed the door behind….

He was in the plantation, busy with a new packaging when he lost in her thoughts he poured on to him the concoction staining the dress his shirt and pant.

He tried calling Chakor to send him a set of dress alongwith the lunch but Chakor phone was not answering… Kaaka just let me go home change, have lunch and come he said driving to the Mansion….

She showered slow, with all the essentials oils.. shampooing her hair…. And came out with the wrap, knotting the towel up the wet hair… sitting in front of the dressing mirror in the bathroom…

He came to the Mansion… Hi young men !!! whatsup!!! Shhhh dad we are playing Trade.. enjoy… he doubled up to peep his roses who were sleeping to glory, he kissed them and went to his room…

He searched for her could not find… removed dress, wrapped a towel around and went to the bathroom whistling….

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Mumbling mumbling… teaser….

She was humming a lovely melody closing her eyes….raising her hands to remove her head wrap to dry her hair.

It was misty, sensational and the essential oils was filling the room with aroma….He said… you look so dam hawwwt and sexy………..🔥 🔥 whaaaat!!! Eyes wide… 😲

Raaghav….. lips trembling…pleeeaasssee its leaaavvee me... Will I... Should I husked, he

Ooops is it noon!!!! Run run go do your errands!!!! Ha ha ha

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Omggg...How do you come up with these amazing stories....I'm already in love 😍 😍

Thank you for accepting my request dear 😘 ..you are so sweet and talented person....you have strong writing skills...👏 👏 👏

Loved the cute little fight blw ragkor❤❤❤❤❤..I'm.rereading again...

Ur stories are sweeter than gulab jamun and hotter than sun 😘

I know it's not easy thinking of what to write..thank u for writing spending time for us..

Ufffff ohhhhh godddddd waiting for next part demo🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😜 😜

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😍😍😍😍thank you dear for another fantafab story...... was missing since the last one....

And loveddddd that they had the fight.... such a natural one too..... very very relatable. ....

Plus fight ke baad coming together is so much more interesting..... ❤❤

Aayansh is such a cutie pie.... can imagine the roses too.... one like rowdy and one like mom😍😍😍 also how sweet of arjun to have come and said sorry...

And the precap is damn interesting.... infact hottie hot if I may say.... so kindly update it asap.....

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Sukor123 for the lovely words on twitter.

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Aww another beautiful RagKor story 😘😘😘 Thanks dear for writing such an amazing stories for us

First time RagKor cute fight but thank god it solved soon Loved the family part abd RagKor cute moment and next part is just 🔥🔥🔥

Eagarly waiting for next part

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Thanks Mahsa for the lovely comments on insta

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My Sumi dear What a amazing Well Writting dear, Wow raghav and Chakor Such a Cute fiery fight ❤🔥❤🔥❤🔥Our MeeJay both aced it I Can imagine 😍😍👍👍👍👍after fight they Coming together is Sooo amazing, loved it loved it those I LOVE YOU MORE raghav he Said it to Chakor 😍😍😍😍👍👍👍Thanksss a lot my Sumi dear for your Magical Writting dear Hat's off you my dear 😘😘😘😘👏👏👏👏👏❤❤❤❤❤


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Thanks Sritama for the insta comment

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Thank u so much Sumi di for ending ur holiday n writing dis super fab new Ragkor story 😘😘loved it immensely👌👌💜💜Ragkor's first fight was indeed very relatable coz differences of opinion btwn parents regarding their kids is a very common thing nd after d fight the way both of dem were missing each other's warmth nd dying to patch up with each other was so cute😍😍n d way dey patched up 😍💜damn sweet & blissfully beautiful😍💜Aa,Ar, roses as always so cute💜💜

Ragkor nd d boy's emotional bonding & conversation💜💜 d way dey were thanking each other..so heartwarming 😍😍n d precap...oh my my.. hotness overloaded..can't wait to see Raghav's demo😍😍 Oh yes yes I m in love with Raghav's demo😍😉

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Haha looks like Raaghav' s demo is in great demand. 😜😜

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Originally posted by: Kavi.Gollapudi

Omggg...How do you come up with these amazing stories....I'm already in love 😍 😍

Thank you for accepting my request dear 😘 ..you are so sweet and talented person....you have strong writing skills...👏 👏 👏

Loved the cute little fight blw ragkor❤❤❤❤❤..I'm.rereading again...

Ur stories are sweeter than gulab jamun and hotter than sun 😘

I know it's not easy thinking of what to write..thank u for writing spending time for us..

Ufffff ohhhhh godddddd waiting for next part demo🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😜 😜

Thanks Kavi.. Hope you are happy the way the story is... Thanks for the compliments but just the love for Meejay and my ficfam and the love you all shower on me.

yes cute fights which happens in any family with regards to children. I am a strong believer of NO EGO ...

gulab jamoon and Sun both my favo... 😜

writing story is not my cuppa, but with my tough bossy I am left with no choice rather to develop that competency ha ha ha...

Demo ha ha lets see whats new me too waiting waiting... just debating should I write it bit BOLD and Mature or sober..... I am sure what the answer will be 😍

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Originally posted by: 77nikita

😍😍😍😍thank you dear for another fantafab story...... was missing since the last one....

And loveddddd that they had the fight.... such a natural one too..... very very relatable. ....

Plus fight ke baad coming together is so much more interesting..... ❤❤

Aayansh is such a cutie pie.... can imagine the roses too.... one like rowdy and one like mom😍😍😍 also how sweet of arjun to have come and said sorry...

And the precap is damn interesting.... infact hottie hot if I may say.... so kindly update it asap.....


NIKK deary deary

Happy you could relate and also their fight... yes am loving my kiddos....

Precap ahmmm ahmmmmmm...hottie hot lets see what your RR is going to do with his SB

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sumi dear🤗

Wow thats a pleasant surprise. As always very realistic blending the right amount of emotions and lovely to read.

I just loved it.

be it the scene with boys, the school, Aa hugging them and thanking, the sketching ,the emotional moment, then Ar saying sorry to chakor, Adi being like rowdy and ana bring like birdie, rohan&lalit playing with them, I loved all kids part.

Ar&Aa thanking for Ragkor coming in their life, Raghav telling they helped him live and telling if chakor hasnt returned would still be living without life.. her emotional words, fear what wuld happened if she hasnt returned to him, he calming her , soothing her and they drifting into sleep. loved that. i couod visualise

then coming to the most loved. ofcourse its the fight, the night and the making up in morning..thats so realistic and too good to read. And very relatable.so true. written beautifully.


And then the hottie hottie precap🙈☺ waiting for next.

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Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Sumi dear🤗

Wow thats a pleasant surprise. As always very realistic blending the right amount of emotions and lovely to read.

I just loved it.

be it the scene with boys, the school, Aa hugging them and thanking, the sketching ,the emotional moment, then Ar saying sorry to chakor, Adi being like rowdy and ana bring like birdie, rohan&lalit playing with them, I loved all kids part.

Ar&Aa thanking for Ragkor coming in their life, Raghav telling they helped him live and telling if chakor hasnt returned would still be living without life.. her emotional words, fear what wuld happened if she hasnt returned to him, he calming her , soothing her and they drifting into sleep. loved that. i couod visualise

then coming to the most loved. ofcourse its the fight, the night and the making up in morning..thats so realistic and too good to read. And very relatable.so true. written beautifully.


And then the hottie hottie precap🙈☺ waiting for next.

Ugh i typed the reply. If played havoc 🙄

I love my story when you write the precise. Happy you could visualise and relate the family moments.

True she is a a Eagle for all but her vulnerable side comes when he is with him and he know his birdie well. She has suffered a lot so always has a unknown fear...

Fight yess tried to weave it as a cutie reader kavi wanted it. I hate ego within couple so yes little fights thanks you could relate.

Precap hehehe don't know what's going to happen... 😜 😜 😜 😜

Me too waiting hope all your waits turns a worthy one.

Sumi shy shy🙈🙈🙈

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