MG: kuch pyar ka pagalpan bhi tha| parts 1-5 | pg 1,2,3,4,5 - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
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PART 4

Maan I am hungry , geet said shaking him.. They were going towards the unknown destination that she couldn't even guess , her tummy growled and he laughed while she made a cute baby face...

Jaan I love this puppy face of yours a lot. Pata hai, I want to kiss you right here , right then jaan , he said kissing her wrist that he was holding. His lips touched her wrist making her shiver. Even after being together for four complete years , maan still had not even kissed her , he loved how he maintained the dignity of their relationship and the first feel of his proximity on her wrist that moment was evoking a new feeling within her..

Maan.. She moaned.. Her milky white wrist were looking so beautiful..

Jaan , I don't like your wrist , maan said suddenly halting the car and she looked at him shocked..

Maan .. Before geet could proceed . maan shifted a bit and leaned towards back taking a parcel and he gave her..


Her eyes were looking expectantly at him..

What is this?. She asked with a curious face and maan smirked as she was about to grab the packet from his hand he dodged the packet..

Na.. Na.. Itni jaldi nai.. He smirked and she quickly opened the seat belt and pounced on him.. She held his one hand and was trying to get the hold of his other hand..

Let me get your hold once.. She tried but he flipped and now she was beneath him..

Jaan , itna gussa he touched her red nose and shifted a bit took out a box.. He opened that and she sat on the seat , now maan was on passenger seat and geet on driver's seat , geet's eyes twinkled as she saw the contents of the box..

Chudiyan , she said excitedly and maan took her wrist and made her wear one by one.. His eyes were on her face while his hands were slipping the bangles..

Maan see , they match my suit.. Geet exclaimed as she saw that he was making her wear the green glass bangles.. Maan kissed her wrist once he had done with one hand and geet looked at the packet again.. It had two more boxes..

One had red bangles and the other was having the diamond studded bangles , that were looking so expensive and as maan was about to make her wear them , she didn't let him..

Maan , no.. I can't take this , waise hi meri family mere against hai aur aapki bhi toh ise lene ka koi matlab nai banta.. Her words were seeming practical and the next moment he took the glass bangles too and said in a sarcastic way..

Let me take them too then geet , I think it is heavy for you to bear , I know our relationship is nothing more than a compulsion isn't it geet..


So , don't feel any kind of pressure now.. I don't want you to feel anything now.. Let me take them too , maan was roughly taking out the bangles when she pulled her hand and one bangle broke and the glass pierced in her wrist..

Ahh.. She cried and he immediately wiped the blood and tied his handkerchief on her wrist..

Why did you have to invoke me jaan.. You know I am short tempered , I get angry easily and see what I did.. He was blabbering and she immediately hug him feeling him , maan felt her shivering and he she could feel him getting stiffen..

Maan , I am sorry , I always do this.. I always provoke you.. You love me so much.. Kitne pyar se aap hamare liye ye lekar aaye aur humne..


She was having tears and she parted a little and he wiped her tears..

Phir se ye aansun.. He said with a mocking face and she kissed her life , her maan..

Maan parted her and he laughed as the next moment her stomach growled..

Itni bhuk lagi hai jaan..

She made a baby face and nodded.

How could I eat when I knew that you didn't have anything , maan shyad me apse utna pyar nai karti jitna aap karte ho , dekho isliye aap itna kuch laye mere liye..

Maan nodded in a No..


And this time he gave her the big bar that he peeled and gave her. He knew that how much she love chocolates and maan had specially brought a box full of her favorite chocolates ..he forwarded her the bar but she first made him take a bite and then had herself..

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Posted: 6 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Ohhh school romance 👫👫👫 I likkes it

Seems Maan was totally spoiled and Geet brought him on track .. good she still check on him

But yup they are very young that doesn't mean his uncle will raise hand 😠😠😠

Between Handa too not liking their prem katha


It's not Maan's uncle it's his father

Geet is calling him uncle 😂

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I tried many times

Kuch nai hua

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaana


It's not Maan's uncle it's his father

Geet is calling him uncle 😂

Oops my mistake 😂😂

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Will read after lunch

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter 4

Just a Fabulous Chapter

Maan bought bangles for Geet though she accepted

the first green ones but the red and diamond studded she refused

probably her family would have suspect something and Maan with his temper

got angry well it has to be his possessiveness for his love

but the care and the purity of their relationship is just amazing

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Cute sweet part ... their innocent love

Still I'm waiting to read why Maan was like that, drinks n all

Their relation is beautiful, but yes diamonds bangles that very expensive...i agree with Geet here glad no big issue happened

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Posted: 6 years ago
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PART 5

Maan hum kahan ja rahen hain.. Asked a desperate geet as they were in the outskirts of the Delhi but maan was not saying anything .. Maan was just busy in driving and geet was busy looking at the scenario outside seeing that Maan was not responding to her.. There were beautiful trees and the running cattle's , she could see there some tractors and maan parked in a safe place and lead her outside the car..

It was an open area and he brought her in the open fields..

Geet was busy in admiring the beauty of the nature when maan held her hands and lead her to the tubewell.. It was a farm and there were riped crops ..
He made her sit on the corner and brought some water..

Get freshed jaan.. Then we can have something.. He said and he himself washed his face.. The farms belonged to the khurana's as maan's dadaji had so much land and now there were caretakers who were taking care of the same . maan never told them but he always visit the farms.. The farms were in the NCR and maan knew that here no one can find them..

Geet sprinkled the cold water on her face and she felt so much refreshed.. Maan was busy looking at the farms when he felt some water and he turned and the moment his eyes went on her she ran for her life after throwing some water on her again..

Maan , its so much fun.. She ran for her dear life and maan caught her and twirled her .. She was giggling and their laughter was echoing in the fields..

Maan , thank you for bringing me here.. Par ye kiske hain.. We can be caught , chalo yahan se..

She said when he let her down and she held his hand dragging him ,

Chalo , chalo yahan se , babaji agar kisi ne dekh kiya hame yahan toh kya hoga.. Aur agar phir se ghar me pata chal gaya toh.. Babaji.. Maan ko thodi akal dijiye.. M so scared.. Chalo jaldi maan.. She once again tried to drag him but maan didn't budge this time and he pulled her towards him..

These fields belong to me jaan.. Maan singh khurana owns them.. Dadaji gave these fields to me , these are on my name geet.. And no one can even think that we are here.. Now come , I want to have some food..

Maan held her from shoulders and he spread the sheet in between the fields , there was a soothing atmosphere , the cool breeze was making them fall love again.. Maan had brought the home made food for them.. He knew that his geet rarely eat outside or whenever he does he make sure that it was like home made and the food from dhaba's was an exception..

Maan opened the hot cases and he served for her.. Geet tore a bite and made maan have it.. She knew that he will again skip when he will return to KM..

Maan opened his mouth and then she had hers.. She was satisfied and then she continued feeding him lovingly..

Maan was feeling light after so many days.. Its been a month they were in lime light and the person who was responsible for this mess was non other than geet's bodyguard..

Jaan , did anyone said anything to you again.. And where is your Bodyguard now.. I swear agli baar dikha na wo mujhe toh me use maar hi dunga.. How did you ditched him..

Geet fed one more morsel to maan and he reciprocated her love by making her have the rice ..

Maan , I am thinking to tell him everything now , he can help us in meeting , he isn't that bad.. Infact I have already talked to my bhabhi and she has assured me that she will be with me.. Wo veerji ko samjha dengi . par maan hamari families ek dusre se itni nafrat kyun karte hain.. Mujhe kisi ne nai bataya and they.. She coughed as maan was continuing feeding her..

Maan patted her back and there they hear the giggles of some villagers.. Both of them turned and saw that some village girls and ladies were giggling holding their pallu.. And one commented seeing them..

Chore kahan te laya hai iss chori ne.. She asked maan and maan replied her , she was the wife of caretaker of farms..

Kaki , thari bahu se.. Maan replied making geet to start coughing and maan was patting while the girls were giggling..

One of them commented

Chachi.. Ye toh Ghana chahawe hai chori ne...

Naam kya se iska .. She asked maan..

Geet hai hamara naam.. Geet replied with a charming smile making the girls to giggle while they walked away leaving maan and geet alone..

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On the other hand

Nisha was looking at the clock , she knew that anytime the handa men will be at home and geet had still not returned , she was getting tensed when suddenly geet appeared with her friend nazia.. Nisha ran and immediately hugged geet , she kissed her forehead..

Geet acha hua tu aagayi , pata hai kitna ghabra gayi thi mein.. Agar tej ya papaji aajate toh me kya kehti.. Chal ab , she dragged geet towards her home.. Geet was prohibited from going anywhere and wherever she goes it was her BG who would follow her..

Nazia was looking at nisha and geet and asked her.

Bhabhi aap janti thi , geet gayi hai unse Milne.. Nazia didn't take maan's name on purpose as she knew that if anyone would have hear his name then there will be so much problem adding to the impending problem..

Naz , bhabhi is with me , and I love her for that geet hugged nisha and she reciprocated her hug again..

Geet , you are like my sister.. And if I am with you then I want you too never do anything that will break papaji and your veerji , they love you so much and they will die if you will do anything that would leave them no where..

IN KM

nandini , went towards maan and she herself held his hand and opened the wounded hand that was having blood oozing out..

Bhabhi , I am fine .. He said but nandini made him sit forcefully and she went to the washroom to get the first aid kit..

She cut the old bandage and was wiping the blood when maan saw tears in her eyes..

Maan wiped those from her cheeks..

Bhabhi aap ro rahi ho.. Maan asked..

Nandini looked at maan and she asked him again..

Why don't you listen to Karan and dad maan.. Bhul kyun nai jata geet Ko.. I can't see you like this.. You are like my brother and more of a son.. Tujhe aise nai dekh sakti.. As nandini words reached maan he took his hand out of nandini's grip.. But she held it again..

Bhabhi please..aage se mat kahiyega ye baat , you know what she mean to me..

Maan , let me bandage.. Aur geet se milke aaya hai na toh batayega nai kya hua..

Nandini tried to change the topic..

Bhabhi , why dad hate handa's.. Maan asked nandini but nandini's words made maan confused..

Maan , I don't know but there is something serious . only dad can tell you.. But promise me one thing maan.. Tujhe kasam hai geet ki maan.. Tu aisa kuch nai karega jisse khurana's ki izzat daav par ho..

I promise bhabhi , but only when geet is not involved in the matter
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