KalMa + AnuSar TS: Kissa Kiss Ka || Last Part || Pg 14 || 14/2/2020 - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
Awesome update
Penned beautifully 
Loved it 
Plz update soon
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Posted: 5 years ago
Awesome update dear
Loved it
Acha malhar was feeling left out by kallu attention seeker
I loved hw kallu manofy him .
So malhar to spent time with his family him his wifey aur son
Please do continue soon
Edited by kusharberry - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Superb ya.. Finally something fun to read about KalMa and AnuSar
My Sunday becomes fun filled day with your update.. 😊
Loved it.. ❤️
Keep on inspiring us to get our creative side out with your writing.. 🤗
Thank you..
Update the next part soon.. 🤗 🥳


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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: anju92

Super..I.like this possessive malhar..thinking about family and all..hope u will update next part without  any delay..


Thank you will update soon
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: porankisrilata

Wow... Superb update... Maza AA gaya...pls update the next part soon.. .


Thank you
Will update soon
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Are wah...

It was good ..
Malhar's frustration was so beautifully penned..
Kallu- manaoing mallu with song was best...
As usual deshmukh's the villans Brock there moment...
Yeh kallu b na dhakkan he hai...
Mallu k sath ja rahi he to yeh nhi k enjoy kare...
Yaha b aai ki dum bana chahti hai...
Khud k sath AnuSar ko b disturb karegi...
BTW kallu ka darr hearing Mumbai name was so genuine and the wat mallu convince her was beautiful...
Continue soon...
Jyada wait karna sehat k liye hanikarak hai...


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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sobiya153

Awesome update

Penned beautifully 
Loved it 
Plz update soon


Thank you

Update se pehle teasing teaser
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: kusharberry

Awesome update dear

Loved it
Acha malhar was feeling left out by mallu attention seeker
I loved hw kallu manofy him .
So malhar to spent time with his family him his wifey aur son
Please do continue soon


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Will update soon but uke pehle teasing teaser
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Posted: 5 years ago

Teaser Part 2

Kalyani looked to the left then to the right. She also got up and looked at the boulders alongside Marine Drive.

 "Malhar ji, inko dekhkar aapko kuch karne ka mann nahi kar raha.

"KYA? Kya karne ka mann karna chahiye mujhe inko dekhkar Kalyani.

"Wohi jo aapko karna chahiye lekin kar nahi rahe.

"Kalyani, chalo yahan se. Dekh kya rahi ho unhe, CHALO!

Edited by Chahat_A_Doshi - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
Teaser uff!  
Loved it! 
Waiting for your update!