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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Aww is maan jealous of his son. Love how bossy dhruv is with his dad. So adorable withbpaets of geet in him. Babaji!!! God help geet now.

Waiting to see what dhruv does with his mom

I still have one huge question. How come no one recognizes dhruv. Does he not look even a little bit like maan ???

Maan wake up and figure about about your wife. Dhruv keeps saying dad and you seem yo have bought it. So start thinking dude


It's still one day
Regarding looks you will see how things will proceed
We still have deadline of 6 months
Maan ka Abhi wake up hona hi Hoga
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Posted: 6 years ago


Hey,

I am new reader to your story and this is first time I am reading your story. Truth is the title caught my interest. I guessed from the title it will be time travel story and I am crazy for time travel romance.

Read the first three parts and I am hooked.

Would like to read further and join the reader list. I do hope I will get the pleasure to read this beautiful story.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hi, just came across this story. It's a very interesting concept and at the same time hilarious as well. I can imagine the kind of trouble Maan would be in because of his son. And I am looking forward to read the story. Can you provide me access to your story?
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Posted: 6 years ago

Let me try typing then
M listening to dukh bhare songs
I don't know how this comedy will come up 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana


Let me try typing then
M listening to dukh bhare songs
I don't know how this comedy will come up 😳

Kyun kyun kyun ...
Jiyo khush raho muskorao Kya pata kal ho na ho😳 sad song choro... bas ab acchi si update de doo...
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Kyun kyun kyun ...
Jiyo khush raho muskorao Kya pata kal ho na ho 😳 sad song choro... bas ab acchi si update de doo...


Pata nai aaj Sanam Bewafaa sunne ka man h
I can't stop after hearing this song 😆
90's and Salman are my love ❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana


Pata nai aaj Sanam Bewafaa sunne ka man h
I can't stop after hearing this song 😆
90's and Salman are my love ❤️

Here I'm stuck to Coca-Cola tuuuooo 😆⭐️
But I do agree 90s songs are best ... be Salman or others 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
A SURPRISE FROM THE FUTURE

Part 5

How could you... How could you shout at her.. dont you feel bad.. bechari..m.. Dhruv halted with his words as he saw Maan was not paying attention to him it was like he was having a date with the boring files. Dhruv looked at his father angrily.. he didn't knew why but he felt that he should question him how could he treat geet like that. He shouted on his love. Dhruv couldn't believe but now seeing his father all engrossed in his work, Dhruv was getting mad.


He was shocked.. what was happening.. he never thought that he will see things like this.. he never thought that he will see his parents like this.. like so much not much in love. He looked up and complaint to his babaji just like had seen his mother doing whenever she was worried or angry.


Babaji.. how can they be like this.. dad shouted on mom and mom I don't even know how is she.. if this is like this.. then my future is at stake.. babaji ye toh ek dusre se theek se baat bhi nahi karte how I am to conceive, this is definitely a danger to my being. All engrossed in his complaining Maan found his son looking at the ceiling and engrossed in self talks.


Even though he had thought of many times in the past three days of not accepting this Stranger as his son but when he opened his deep secrets Maan knew that it could be a possibility. Even he had heard of the portal that could take you through time, but finding a stranger claiming to be his son has left him in a deep thinking and on top of that he was ready to prove it through the DNA test.. not finding any other solution he complied to dhruv's demand but right now his decision was proving to be a big headache. Looking at Dhruv Maan finally opened his mouth.


Where should I leave you.. tell me.. Maan said folding his hands and stood infront of him and asked him getting irritated. Dhruv looked at his father who was looking kind of agitated.


Ye dekho babaji , here I am concerned about my being and he is giving me those MSK looks.. thought Dhruv but Maan's words confused him.. his father was thinking to leave him.. but where.


Where should you leave me.. you can't deny me that I am your.. before Dhruv could continue maan stopped him.


I know , I know who are you and I don't need one more reminder.. I was asking where should I leave you to have a play date. Maan asked seriously. Lately Maan was having a thought what if Dhruv was a little toddler then he could have been pleased easily with some chocolates or Toys but Mr Maan Khurana had completely forgotten that toddlers constantly demand their father and mother and from where he could have brought his wife.


While Maan was now getting amused as he was required to do the parenting before time But poor Dhruv he was confused.


Play date.. why should I go for a play date. I am not some three to go for play dates. said Dhruv Khurana getting confused.


I wish you were three so that I could send you for play dates isn't what parents were supposed to do... Maan's words made Dhruv pout and then he finally grinned knowing that Maan didn't knew how he and Dhruv used to spend the time when geet would leave them alone.


I rarely had play dates MK.. it was also our time.. Dhruv hinted subtly while this time Maan gave him the ultimatum.


Will you let me do the work or not.. believe me if Dad comes here, then you will have to answer him. Maan tried to scare Dhruv with his father's name but Dhruv grinned and answered to his dad.


Dadu won't say anything to me I can even bet on it.. dad..again saying dad that was more of a teasing he exited Maan's cabin to see his next most desired person.


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What does he think of himself.. Dusht danav, dus sir wala ravan.. hmmp.. geet was engrossed in all her cursing when Dhruv entered her cabin.. it was well known to the junior Khurana that his mother worked as his father's assistant just because she had demanded to work and his Nanu had send her to KC. Maan and geet had though known each other form their family relations but they were still poles apart and it was no doubt that there was nothing but a meaningless animosity between the two.


Hey beautiful.. I mean geet.. what are doing.. Dhruv said as he entered and saw that geet was all busy with her work, she was carrying three files when she had that unwanted collision with Maan and as Maan had shouted on her, in her nervousness she had already mixed up the contents of all the three files owning to one more scolding from her boss. Yes, her boss even though Maan was learning the work but one thing was sure that he was now only her boss and that was the thing that irked her more. That Dusht Danav always does things that would make her angry and he knew all about her that was enough for him to know what to do next.


Seeing his mother engrossed in her cursing session he called her again and this time she looked at Dhruv and then her shined just like him, he had helped her.. she thought..


I am sorry I was.. Geet didn't know how to justify her talks her talks to the handsome young man but her son knew how to put her to ease.


Even I like to talk to babaji, you know it makes me light.. he said and she smiled and kind of chuckled...


Really and no one thinks you are mad, you know I never met a person who also loves to talks to babaji... Dhruv could see the why his dad loved his mum.. she was carefree and so pure at heart. He sat on the adjacent chair to geet and started helping her with the piles of paper..


Let me help you beautiful.. I know it was da.. I mean MK's fault too but it's alright let me help you.. his slip of tongue was not thankfully noticed by geet but she frowned and asked him..


Why do you call me Beautiful.. I don't like people who flirt.. she said with a strict voice that was very well known to Dhruv.


Offcourse mum..I know.. thought Dhruv but again a difficult question how to address her... But then she looks 19 or 20.. thought Dhruv and then calculated something in his mind and calculated his mother's age. She is 20.. so there shouldn't be any problem Dhruv and waise bhi dad is already not pleased with me calling him dad and what if mum thinks I am mad too then what.. no take this slow.. he concluded and then he apologized to geet genuinely.


I am sorry , I will not repeat it but believe me I haven't met anyone who looks so beautiful like you.. you know your eyes reminds me of my mum.. he said genuinely and geet didn't said anything as he gave her the sorted papers.


Do I look like your mother.. she asked and then Dhruv genuinely replied introducing himself.


Yes, my mum is like you , between I am Dhruv.. MK's friend.

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Posting on forum as I am sleepy and can't sent PM's right now.
Hope to see some comments and likes..




Edited by suhaaana - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Wow was about to go to sleep
Good to see update
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

Wow was about to go to sleep

Good to see update


I am now going to sleep
Kal Clg h

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