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Posted: 6 years ago
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Maan entered in the house with slow steps, careful to not to make any noise. He wanted to give surprise to his family, thats why hadnt told anyone about him coming back.
As he reached in the hall area.. he himself got a very pleasnt & sweet surprise! The sight, that welcomed him was beautiful & instantly brought a smile on his face.


His three babies.. his champ, his gudiya & his lil sis.. were sleeping so peacefully! He moved towards them slowly and settled on the floor, near them. He kept looking at their sleeping forms. Seeing them after whole 5 days, made him realised that how much he has been missing them actually.


He crasses aaru's face who was stuck between the two girls. Then his eyes moved to his princess..his suddenly felt so emotional..he has missed his kids so much! He leaned forward and kissed all the three on their foreheads, one by one.


He sat there, admiring their clam faces. He looked at annie.. Who was looking like a cute baby..like the one she used to be in her childhood...and wondered, is she the same girl who becomes a real devil..troubling him all the time!


He was still busy admiring them..when he heared his mishti's voice, calling him..
"maan.."

geet was really surprised seeing him there..as he had told them that he will be coming late, at night.
Maan gesture her to be quite..so that his babies wont be disturbed.


He moved towards geet and hugged her tightly to himself & kissed her hair. "missed u so much.." ..he mumered softly.
"i missed u too.." ..geet replied, hugging him back even more tightly. Maan pulled back, hearing her emotional voice..and saw her teary eyes..


He wiped her tears before they could flow.. "aye..my cry baby.." ..he teased her to cheer her mood..and that work pretty well..
"am not a cry baby.." geet tried to show her fake anger but there was slight smile on her lips..which gave her way.


"achh..ur not a cry baby.. But u accept that ur my baby..han..?" maan winked at her teasing her again.. That made her blush..before she could deny it..dadima joined them.
After talking to dadima for few minutes..maan went to his room to freshen up!



*****

geet was trying to wake aaru, who wanted to sleep more. Maansi has waken a few minutes before and was in the lawn with dadima..


"aaru.. baby wake up..dekho, aaj toh gudiya bhi aap se pehle uth gai hai.." ..geet said, cressing aaru's hair.
"uhhn..mumma.." ..aaru mumbled, and turned to other side.
"aaru..baby uth jao na.." ..geet tried again..


At that moment maan was coming downstair..and he called aaru while apporching him, " aaru.."
though aaru was in half sleep..still he recognised his papa's voice..
"papa..aur sona hai.." ..aaru mumbled, still in sleep.


Maan smiled hearing his reply..and asked.. "aaru..shona..papa ke sath office nahi chalna ..?"
and that did it! Aaru opened his sleepy eyes and sat up. He looked at maan for moment..who now was sitting in front of him... and then jumped with excitment..
"PAPA.." he shouted..hugging maan tightly around his neck.


Maan responded by pulling him more tightly to him. He ruffled his hair..kissing him..smiling wholeheartedly...he was overwhlemed seeing his champ's excited & happy face..on having his papa back! He had missed this so much in last 5days! This feel & contentment of having his kids & family close to him!


"i missed u sooo much..shona.." ..maan said while showering aaru with kisses..making aaru to gigle as those kisses tickeled him.
"i missed u too..papa.." ..aaru replied and kissed him back.
"but papa missed u more.." ..maan teased him.
"no papa..aaru missed u more..sachhi.." ..aaru told innocently.


"acha toh champ ne papa ko jyada miss kiya..hmm..?" ..maan asked..to which aaru nodded with a smile.
Maan pinched his nose playfully..still hugging him..and asked again..
"toh batao kitna jyada miss kiya.."
"itna jyada.." ..aaru replied straching his both hands to show him..
Maan smiled at his cuteness..and teased him again..


"bas..itna sa.." he made a disappointed face.
"nahi...aur jyada..itna sara...bahut saraaa miss kiya..papa..." ..aaru stood up & strached his hands more wide .. He genuienly tried to convience him..not understanding that his papa was just teasing him.
Maan chuckeled seeing his son's senceier effeorts to convience him.. His cutie was so innocent..he felt truly blessed to have him in his life!


Aaru told him all the happenings of past 5days..including his fights with annie. And he didnt forgot to mention about him winning over her..most of the time.
"papa..bua ko na.. sach me kuch bhi nahi aata..haina mumma.." ..aaru said with so much seriousness.. making maan & geet to laugh loudly!


*****


Maan was busy listening aaru's talks..when dadi came back from the lawn with maansi in her arms. She looked at their happy faces and smile with contentment.


"dekho..gudiya..kaun aaya hai..?" ..she told maansi.. gesturing towards maan & aaru..who were unawaer of their presence yet.
And maansi who till now was busy in playing with daadi's neckless..stoped playing & looked in the direction, daadi pointed.


And next moment, maansi's sudden loud cry startled everyone! Big fat tears rolled downed from her beautiful eyes..
All panicked seeing her cry like that. Geet who was about to move to kichen..immediately rushed towards..and tried taking her from daadi..but maansi didnt let her. She kept crying..struggling & pushing geets hands away.. She kept looking at maan..pointing at him..who was already coming toward her only!


As soon as maan reached near her..she opened her arms.. raising them..telling him that she wanted to come to him. Maan instantly took her in his arms and tried comferting her. But maansi was no where to stop..she kept crying..touching maan's face with her little hands..complaining him that how much she had missed him..!!!


Maan understood her unsaid words and kept kissing her whole face to monify his gudiya..
"gudiya..dont cry na sweety..see papa is here na..hmm.." maan said wiping her tears.
But soon fresh tears rolled downed her eyes..as she kept crying..clutching maan tightly..clinging to him, fearing that her papa may leave her again.


Maan was already feeling miesrable seeing his daughter crying so much..and to add to it.. Seeing his maani crying..aaru's eyes too started getting teary.
"mumma..maani kyun ro rahi hai..?? Usse chot lagi hai..??" ..he asked geet..cluching her hand tightly..he was on the verge of crying.
"nahi baby...ur maani was missing papa so much na..bas isliye.." ..geet replied..and hugged him..assuring him.


Maansi was still crying..though it wasnt that loud now. Maan thought to distract her..
"gudiya..chalo hum bahar ghumne chalte hai..maani ko bahar jaana achha lagta haina...haina champ.." maan looked at maansi then aaru who nodded.
"Come on shona.." ..maan called aaru forwarding his one hand to him..while holding maansi in other.


Maan took them to the lawn where he & aaru both tried to cheer her up..and make their princess simle. They kept showing her something or other to distract her.. And it worked..as soon the smile returned on her face... Which automatically brought smile on everyone's face too!



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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sorry.. I am stuck in some personal stuff so couldn't update... Really sorry for making you people wait. .. Hope to update "blank call" Soon. .
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Posted: 6 years ago
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thanks for posting!

tremendous emotional OS!

finally Maan is back home!

he missed his family so much! can understand Maan's feelings!

Aaru is too cute! Maansi was crying for her dad!

nice end!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shonameet

Sorry.. I am stuck in some personal stuff so couldn't update... Really sorry for making you people wait. .. Hope to update "blank call" Soon. .


hi Shona, no need to apologise!

will wait for updates


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shonameet

Sorry.. I am stuck in some personal stuff so couldn't update... Really sorry for making you people wait. .. Hope to update "blank call" Soon. .

Don't say sorry 😊
Happy to see you again
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Posted: 6 years ago
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OS
That was lovely...such a sweet and warm welcome for Maan...
Maan adoring Annie and kids sleeping was too cute :)

Aaru is a cutie...woke up in seconds after hearing Maan's voice...and the way he tried to depict his love for his dad was oh so lovely...

Maansi is no less...felt bad for the poor kid who could only express herself through her tears...

There's is a nice happy family:)

Lovely OS
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shonameet

Sorry.. I am stuck in some personal stuff so couldn't update... Really sorry for making you people wait. .. Hope to update "blank call" Soon. .


No Problem, sweety...
Take your time and update whenever it is fine with you...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sweet update.maan came home after five days and want a give to give asurprise them but he get surprise seeing his cute family sleeping.maansi start cry seeing maan after many days maan make her calm and finaly aru and maan make mansi smile.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Congrats on your story
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Aww such sweet welcome ... seeing his family sleeping peacefully ... not less than heaven
Home sweet home welcome Maan
Aaru super cute and mansi too
Poor girl must have missed Maan so much

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