Bottle of Regrets REPOSTING CHK PF 103 24/3/20

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Chapter 1

Geet was waiting in the hospital for her reports ... since last few days she's feeling nausea, dizziness and her appetite has increased

She was nervous and hoping that what she's doubting should not be true, they're not ready for this big responsibility ...they're not even married yet and MAAN he don't want to get married now he first wants to make his father proud ..for now his only aim is to come in a list of top CEO yes CEO my Maan is a CEO of Khurana enterprises the company his father started but which is still working because of my Maan only

KE was in place of downfall but maan step in his father's place and make it working again and become a CEO at just the age of 21 years my Maan is so smart and intelligent that I know one day he'll come in the list of top 10 na na top 5 CEO


'Miss geet' doctor called her and she come back to the real world from her Maan land

"Your reports are here ... congratulations you are pregnant

She was shocked don't know how to react ... happy that she's carrying her maan's baby his maan's ansh in her womb or sad that she's going to be unwed mother because he's not ready for marriage and forget about child
She gets more tensed after thinking about maan's reaction

Doctor who saw her in Deep thoughts can clearly see the tension written on her face and placed her hand on Geet's shoulder to comfort her

"If you are not ready for this baby and if you want there's still time you can think about the other options"
"You mean abortion"

Doctor nodded and geet placed her hand on her flat stomach like she's protecting her baby

"No no no how can you even suggest that it was unexpected and I was just shocked and anyway my Maan I mean my baby's father love me so much and soon we're going to get married so it's no big deal"

"Okay then congratulations once again and from now onwards you have to be extra cautious"

Geet nodded and take her leave
While coming out from the hospital

"Doctor Ko toh bol diya Maan mujhse pyaar karta hai aur jaldi shaddi ho jayegi but don't know wo kaise react karega ...waise bhi kuch time se weird behave kar rha yeah still love me but he's not my old Maan now he has become the Maan Singh Khurana ...my Maan was simple and easy going guy who gets happiness in small small things and who never gets angry but MSK likes expensive things and shower me with expensive gifts even those which was of no use and if I say something he gets offended and angry...so don't know how he's going to react now...babaji bacha lena"

One hour later
Khurana enterprises,Maan's cabin

Geet's eyes were red and tears were flowing freely and she's waiting for Maan's reaction

"WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU ARE PREGNANT"

"I am pregnant we were going to have a baby" she tried to sound normal but still her lips quivered as she was very scared

Again silence

"Hum ye kar sakte hai na maan...we can manage aur ab hum akele bhi nahi mere parents hai tumhari mom hai aur ab toh tumhare dad bhi hai"
She tried to comfort her with her words thinking that he must be worried for how they're going to take care of baby without knowing that her words are doing a opposite reaction

"Dad Dad " he laughed sarcastically "now I know why all this drama ...the moment you know I am not some middle class boy but the heir of Khurana enterprises you want to tie me with you ... isiliye jab Maine shaddi k liye mana kar diya you came with a new plan... brilliant"

"How can you say that Maan this is our baby we made this together "

AND I DON'T WANT ANYTHING TO DO WITH YOU AND THAT ... THAT THING"

geet shivered after hearing so much venom in his voice and thought how can he changed so much the moment his father come back in his life ...it does not matter if he's rich or poor ...since childhood her dream was to become her maan's bride

They were childhood buddies turned sweetheart ...his father left his mom for some young girl and she had seen the yearning for father's love in his eyes and finally when his father come back in his life when he was eighteen he changed this is not the Maan she grew up with

'how can he think about me like that ' 'bas yahi pyaar tha'

Geet was already devastated after hearing all the wrong accusations and was going to say something but before she said anything Maan threw some cash on her face
"Get rid of that thing which is in your stomach "

And that time she never felt so much degraded in her life and without saying anything she just left ...left from his office and his life

I was reading some story when this idea came in my mind...So how's it yeah I said I'll post it after writing a last chapter but before writing an end I need your feedback...so now quickly give me your comments ...next chapter is going to be on blog or not it depends on your comments and one words comments are prohibited


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Posted: 6 years ago
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👉Index👈

Chapter 1 - page 1

Chapter 2 - page 23

Chapter 3 - page 46

Chapter 4 - page 63

Chapter 5 - page 76

Edited by Grey-licious - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Congrats
Excited to read something from you again
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Great congrats on Ur new story waiting for next
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Posted: 6 years ago
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^i want some real comments or you guys not getting password for chapter 2😛
Edited by Grey-licious - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very nice concept of the story
Loved it.
Geet is pregnant . Maan is change .
She decided to left from his life.
Starting me twist!
Superb .
Update soon.
Thanx for pm.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice starting
Geet is pregnant with Maan baby
She is scare for his reaction
And when she tell him about baby
He had hurt her feeling
Poor Geet
Thanks for PM
Update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: pallavimn

Very nice concept of the story

Loved it.
Geet is pregnant . Maan is change .
She decided to left from his life.
Starting me twist!
Superb .
Update soon.
Thanx for pm.


Thank you for your comment
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: T.Peru

Nice starting

Geet is pregnant with Maan baby
She is scare for his reaction
And when she tell him about baby
He had hurt her feeling
Poor Geet
Thanks for PM
Update soon


Thank you for your comment
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi thank you so much for sharing this beautiful creation of yours with me:):):)

From the first sentence it gripped my attention. And as I read further it consumed me. Super engrossed in reading:):):) A beautiful concept of a story. From childhood sweethearts to now becoming estranged...All due to the way Maan construed the whole reality of Geet's pregnancy. How can he even think of her in that way? Is that how much he knows of the girl he grew up & fell in love with? Right from the beginning she has been there with him especially when his nalayak dad left him & his mum...How has things changed now that he is back? So what if he is back? Here she is sad that her simple, sweet & loving Maan has changed so much & doesn't like it...but Maan is thinking otherwise? Shows how much he has failed to know, understand and trust the girl who has been with him in his life so far...

A very gripping & intense story dearie & I am so excited to read on:):):)

All the best:):):)

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