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Posted: 6 years ago
#61
Hmm have to say Maan is brave ..he didn't run away or called police lol so nice person
But dhruv did disclose some unknown facts which making Maan more confused
How will he deal with all these now
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Movie ... Akshay + Ash
But but but yours story totally different 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#63
Loved the teaser
Curious will dhruv give same shock to Geet or not
Edited by Keepdreaming - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hopefully Updating in some time..
Anyone waiting
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Posted: 6 years ago
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A SURPRISE FROM THE FUTURE..


Part 3

Maan came back after changing and saw Dhruv still lying on his bed and looking at each and every thing with very much interest. Maan was in his usual vest and tracks and asked his newly found son to get changed.

"Get up and get changed, or you will stay like this whole night, aren't you uncomfortable Dhruv?" Asked Maan , looked who was looking at the big picture of Maan holding his graduation degree and smiling tilted his head and looked at his father.

"I don't know if I will still look so handsome like dad when I will be in twenty three, but one thing is sure that I want a picture like this in my room too after graduation." He thought and got up.

What should I wear dad? Asked Dhruv. And looked at the young man infront of him frowning with the word dad.

First stop calling me dad and didn't you brought a change of clothes before coming to this time travel excursion. Maan taunted and saw that Dhruv pouted looking at his dad.

What should I call you, if not dad ? You know i may have traveled three more years back in past but I can't deny that you are my dad. So I have to think a new name for my father now. Dhruv's words were out of Maan's reach and he didn't even indulge himself in knowing what his son was saying. Maan was already tired and wanted to have his dinner and then have a good night sleep. So he went towards his cupboard and brought a new night dress, a pair of silk pyjamas that was black in colour and gave Dhruv to change.

Get changed , I am waiting.. he said and looked that his son had discarded his cloak and rushed towards the bathroom.

Dhruv came and looked like reply of Maan, though there was some differences but those eyes colour he had inherited from Maan and that prominent jaw. Maan asked him to follow and Dhruv had no idea where his dearest dad was taking him. Soon his confusion was cleared when he saw both of them in the kitchen, it was not the present kitchen of his time but it was not less. Maan took out the food and he was heating the food for both of them. Meanwhile was all confused he couldn't fathom that Maan had brought him to have dinner. He couldn't help but to notice his father's swift movements in the kitchen like he knew each and every thing. Soon he found a plate placed in front of him and Maan settled on the chair beside him having his plate. Dhruv was all confused and didn't even touched his plate when Maan gestured him to eat but he was asked a question.

You brought me here to have food ? Dhruv was suddenly emotional. This was his dad , he never let him sleep empty stomach, it was his old habit since Dhruv was always a spoilt child when it comes to dinner and it was Maan's responsibility to feed Dhruv when he was a baby and now too he checks on his wayward son.

Dhruv was touched , no he was having so many feelings that couldn't be explained.

Did you wished to sleep stomach Dhruv? Or do you think I wouldn't even offer you food. Maan asked amused and again gestured Dhruv to eat and Dhruv started eating and both father and son had their dinner silently. Maan was still in a shock and he couldn't help to notice dhruv's gestures, he was lefty just like him and he couldn't stand spice just like his dad.

Maan stop thinking like that, Maan chided his mind who was still reeling with the fact that he had a teenager son at his disposal now.

Maan think like that it's not any toddler otherwise you won't even know what would have happened. Maan shuddered with the thought and saw that his son had already finished the dinner and Maan completed his and both of them went to the room. Maan arranged dhruv's sleeping arrangements in the adjacent room to his, though he wanted Dhruv to have his study where there was a bed and necessary privacy but he thought otherwise. Dhruv didn't said anything he quietly settled in the room and Maan in his still contemplating the fact that he had a son in the next room to his without having known his mother.

Next day, KM

Maan Khurana was sleeping without any disturbances when his son came without disturbing him, and woke up his father.

Dad get up, it's already morning.. Maan who was sleeping just turned the other side keeping one pillow over his head and Dhruv chuckled knowing from where he got this habit of his. It was not so long when Maan was called for breakfast, not having known the whereabouts of his son last night, Naina asked a servant to call Maan and that time dhruv' was in Maan's study looking around so no one knew who was there in the room along with Maan but when Maan came downstairs in his vest and tracks Naina saw a young man trailing behind her son and she had never seen him before so she asked..

Maan who is he? Asked Naina as she saw a handsome young man coming downstairs with her son. Maan was still in half asleep and with his sleep laden eyes he whispered..

My son.. the voice was so soft that Naina felt that she couldn't make out meanwhile Dhruv felt the need to introduce himself.

Hi, I am Dhruv, ... Dhruv... Before he could complete it was Maan who completed

Dhruv' Singh, my college friend.. Maan had found his sleep leaving his eyes as Dhruv opened his mouth. While Dhruv looked at his father and made a face asking him,

"Why couldn't you say the truth"...


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That's all for now.


Next part : Dhruv : Arjun uncle.. said Dhruv and Maan looked at his son with wide eyes and then his friend.
How do you know Arjun? Asked Maan
Wo.. he is piya's dad.. replied Dhruv with a red tint on his cheeks.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#66
hi thanks for the update!

Part 3

terrific update! well written!

liked Dhruv's thoughts!

great seeing Maan's care for Dhruv! its hard for Maan to digest when Dhruv calls him dad!

of cos Maan would notice the similarities between Dhruv and himself!

Dhruv is awed when Maan arranges dinner for him!

at least Maan is thinking who is Dhruv's mom!

Maan cannot tell his mom that Dhruv is his son! she will think he is crazy! Maan had no choice but to lie!

Dhruv should understand this!



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Posted: 6 years ago
#67
lovely precap! update soon! thanks suhana!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Aww..Suhi Di..ur update made my day!!Thank you!!
Maan is really caring...
And that dinner scene was really emotional..Maan bilkul nahi badla...
Dhruv is total replica of Maan!!
Will Dhurv's presence here will bring chnage in the future too..and why Did he want to time travel and come..is he interested in this ya he came with a motive to change smthing in the past?
Bechara what he would call Maan if not as Dad😆
Yeh lo..future sasur ji se bhi mil liya😆
Loved the update di!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#69
great update
enjoyed reading very much
poor maan very much confuse
dhruv think what to call maan as he ask not to call dad
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Posted: 6 years ago
#70
Lovely story
Maan is in no position to deny his son but can't tell his parents

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