AkshAn OS- 'JE...JE...JEALOUS?'

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Posted: 6 years ago
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AkshAn OS - "JE...JE...JEALOUS? "


PART 1:-


Akshat- "So as per my plan , I will pretend being under PARTIAL AMNESIA . "


Kishore- " But Papa what if we come under suspicion? "


Vardaan -" Yes exactly and by the way what about Guddan Maa? "


Revti-" You guys need not to worry . I'll myself handle Di ."


Akshat-" Fine. Only you 3 know about this plan . Shall I trust you without any loop- holes? "


Ki+Var+Rev - "Sure!"


Akshat-" All right then let's begin"


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Guddan(having overheard the entire convo) -" Ooo ... so this Memory loss was a planned drama of Jindal Saab. Well anyways now let me show you 4 who this Guddan Akshat Jindal actually is."


After some time:-


Guddan- " Angad Jee!!!"


Angad-" Guddan ? You here? What do you want now? You've already got what you wanted . You got Bhai the why are you coming to me?"


Guddan( with purposely loud vocals) -" Ohooo Angad Jee... you really act too innocent . "


Angad-" Wh.. what do you mean? "


Guddan-" I mean why would I be happy after getting your brother back? I ... I am not at all happy ... that was just this family's happiness which made me happy once he arrived. But what about my happiness? "


*Akshat overhearing the entire convo*


Angad-" I didn't get you.."


Guddan ( encircling her arms around Angad's neck) - "Oh my innocent boy... I mean I too want to be happy ... and that happiness lies in .."


Akshat(with rage)-" Lies in? "


Angad + Guddan-" Excuse us? "


Akshat-" I mean there are so many flies here. I will call the pest control "


*And he starts sipping in water*


Angad -" So what were you saying Guddan? Lies in..?"


Guddan-" Lies in you ... Angad Jee"


*SPLASSSHHH*


*And the entire water splashed out of his mouth . Do I need to mention who? ;)*


Guddan( with a grin) -" Yuck! What was this? How can someone be so careless? "


Akshat-" I.. I am sorry.. I went Off-track!"


Angad-" Off-track ? What are you saying? "


Guddan-" Jindal Saab .. I guess you need to rest . Angad Jee , I have some work... will see you later"


*And with this the lady waved a bye with a flying kiss*


*After which the handome hunk immediately churned those apparent FLYING KISSES to BURNING ASHES*


#For reference see the pics below:-#



Angad (confused) -" Bhai any problem? "


Akshat-" Prob..problem? N...No .. No way"


#For reference see the pics below:-#

*GUDDAN *


*AKSHAT*







"JEALOUS MUCH? " uttered AJ's conscience.


Akshat-" Je..Je..Jealous ?"

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So just like most of you guys, I too have been craving to see a Jealous AJ ... so ultimately thought to calm down this hunger via an OS ... how was it?😛

I don't know if I would continue with upcoming parts but as there's no harm in hoping , you guys can expect for some further updates too ;)

But till then do share ur views ;)😉

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Love u yashi jealous akshat ko dekhne ke liye mai to tadap rhi tgi bt itna chota sa update plz dusra part v aj hi update krdo na plz plz plz
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Love u yashi jealous akshat ko dekhne ke liye mai to tadap rhi tgi bt itna chota sa update plz dusra part v aj hi update krdo na plz plz plz


Thnx KAJAL🤗
Jealous AJ is our dream no😉

Kar deti but the response fo rthis part has already disappointed me
Anyways will see
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: DivyankaTD


Thnx KAJAL 🤗
Jealous AJ is our dream no😉

Kar deti but the response fo rthis part has already disappointed me
Anyways will see

Plz update krdo na mre liye plz show me to pta nhi kamse kam yaha pr hi jealous Aj dikhne ko mile
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Gosh, Yashi this is exactly what I was thinking.. that Guddan will try to make her Jindal Saab jealous...and you got the part really to the point. I had been visualizing the part.

You know what the funniest thing is?
Actually by the very mention of AJ churning the kisses to ashes, I had imagined the same scene of Neelu sending off flying kisses and Vijay shooing it away...and then there were the very images 😲😕...you see even I got the mixed emotions.And I could feel AJ
This was really funny and the most realistic
Would love to read the next part.
Do continue...
Edited by Anonymousaa - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing one👍🏼
U fulfilled my wish of seeing a jealous Aj
Update soon
Update a longer part next time plz
Waiting for the next part

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thankyou so much 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Plz update krdo na mre liye plz show me to pta nhi kamse kam yaha pr hi jealous Aj dikhne ko mile


Are my dear u need not request me like that 🤗
I am working on the next part Kajal but can't say when it will be completed 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hahahaha Jindal Saab jal Gaye...
BTW maja as Gaya...guddu is giving nehle pr dehla...
Loves it...
Plz continue
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anonymousaa

Gosh, Yashi this is exactly what I was thinking.. that Guddan will try to make her Jindal Saab jealous...and you got the part really to the point. I had been visualizing the part.


You know what the funniest thing is?
Actually by the very mention of AJ churning the kisses to ashes, I had imagined the same scene of Neelu sending off flying kisses and Vijay shooing it away...and then there were the very images 😲😕...you see even I got the mixed emotions.And I could feel AJ
This was really funny and the most realistic
Would love to read the next part.
Do continue...



And let me tell you this reply of urs made me so happy

Ah .. that satisfaction to find one's thoughts twinning urs without much of a newscasting ryt 😉😆


I am working on the next part but unsure as to when 😛


Thankyou Bibe 😃
Edited by DivyankaTD - 6 years ago

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