#Samaina poem-Tree beloved of mountain stream

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi,Guys.This is another poem i had written for samaina.I was little apprehensive of posting this poem because i wrote it in metaphysical set of mind.It is a little bit complex and metaphorical.Do read it and tell how it is through the comments.😊

TREE BELOVED OF MOUNTAIN STREAM

HE was harsh and untethered,
Scouring through the music of the lost domain,
He bickered on nameless mountain ranges,
in search of calmness and serenity,
lurking in soul of unhinged fringes

SHE was the not so beautiful tree,
In the forest of ivory,
Covered with unseen injuries,
Seamlessly ravished with painful memories

But she never stopped smiling,
Threw uncountable paintings of bright sun,
And homely warmth like a nun,
Upon her loved ones

But yet she desired for more,
Flawless in her pursuit,
Yet desired to be flawed,
She wanted something more passionate,
Wanted something more raw

In a petite brawl of fate,
they found each other slayed,
by the purple haze,
of uncouth charm,
of their reflected states

And now her broken twigs,
and pollen leaves,
Swims in the branches,
Of his desire,
they tether his flow,
leaving him frenzied with fire

And while I narrate their love story,
My eyes glisten with tears of joy,
tainted with eternal sadness and truth,
the tree beloved melodiously crooned,
to the sweet music of the mountain stream

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lovely. It's deep n very artistic. Loved it. You have so beautifully narrated Naina and Sameer's character using metaphors. Awesome! 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I gotta take some lessons from you 😆
It's beautiful. Loved it. ❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
#4
A very beautiful poem
Depicts samaina beautifully
Thanks for sharing
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Posted: 6 years ago
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What beautiful personifications!!!
Hats off to you !!!
I read somewhere he had travelled from Nainital to Ahmedabad and she was adarling of her Chachaji.
When i write its always shayaris in Urdu and Hindi.I rever people who can write poems in english since I am unable to do the same
Applause and loads of accolades to you for these wonderful personifications...
Loads of love and may you flourish with your words,
Ria
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow!! How could I miss this! Superb work Abhi! Brilliant!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Such a beautiful poem.
Each and every word were beautifully describing their emotion.
I can find anymore words as nothing can match your poem...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow what a beautiful poem
portrayed their emotions perfectly
loved it Abhi

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