Making... Love..... Rag--Kor to RagKor. - Page 2

Hi Ayur

very sweet of you to ask, but actually I thought with the winding up of Chakor we will hardly visit IF... and as Uma said it will be curtain down... but if you really want me to I shall try to make you feel happy before I drop pen down forever...

Though I donot have any sketch but will try to...

thank again dear for liking my writing..

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I loved your thoughts & it's execution through your http://writing.You have beautifully described about Chakor's dilemma, the sultry situation.Indeed she was constantly battling with her heart & mind.I think this story is truly the journey from Maidam to Chakor & Raghav to Chakor's Budhha.I'm happy you showed the journey in such a way. Loved the balcony scene, his cough to get her attention, her startle & teary eyes hearing her name from Raghav reminded her http://Suraj.It 's not easy to forget the person whom you loved even more than yourself, who is your life, your love, everything & love someone else, despite knowing that his love is unconditional, unadulterated. I admire Raghav for how easily he understands her dilemma & how beautifully managed the situation & made her feel comfortable. This is the greatness of his love as he believes love is not always to be physical, it's soulful too. He always gave her time to be comfortable with him. He realized that Chakor loves him but had some hesitation in her mind. Despite trying to do justice to his love, she couldn't surrender herself completely to Raghav. In this case they need such an incident or a situation that can move away the ambivalence. You set up such a beautiful situation which broke all the barriers between them. Their love goes out of control when Raghav was hit by the goons & Chakor's fear of losing him ,then their love reached the high point. I loved the interaction between Girija & her special beta, the morning conversation after Rag-kor marriage & after the D day. The garlanding concept has an uniqueness. Loved the beautiful poetry, superbly written by you with so much care like Raghav loves Chakor with so much care, without hurting her. Raghav gave Chakor the love, the care, the beautiful, peaceful life, which she deserved and you gave us the pleasure, the solace, the peace which we couldn't get from the show.

Thank you.

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