REVENGE- Part 75 (Page 159) - Page 62

Posted: 5 years ago
Another Fabulous Chapter 

Maan this time shows Geet that her thinking is wrong and he says truth 
she is intelligent , she can make friends has family too so she needs 
to concentrate on other factors in life instead of been miserable not
having Ahkil by her side 
Maan just has his sister and grandfather though he has his parents but it 
seems they living their own lives 
and it almost feels as if he telling Geet about her family he craves to have 
a family all living together and not separated 
Maan has plans already for the weekend so is he going to see Antara again 
Posted: 5 years ago
I will surely read your book 
over one of the weekends 
Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by taahir004


I will surely read your book 
over one of the weekends 

Yayyy. You have ordered the eBook or paperback version?
Posted: 5 years ago
Poor Maan. How much more to convince Geet! They get along so well and she's on  one track. Waiting to see how you will make her stay back...really curious.  
Congratulations for your book and many more to come!
Edited by raibdrop2 - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago

Part 37

 

G-You don't understand how complicated all of it is

 

M-Its complicated coz you want it to be! Coz you want to dwell in your pathetic misery! You don't even know C of the word complicated!

 

Her eyes are welling with tears

 

Maan says and then walks away from her a few steps to take a few deep breaths to calm himself down

 

His emotional state takes him back to his past where it all started:

 

Maan was from a simple lower middleclass family

 

He went to local public school so did his sister

 

He was always a bit serious kinds because their family was less than middle class, but still he loved having fun coz he learned to enjoy small things

 

He wasn't angry or miserable that why aren't we rich or have toys and privileges every other kid has

 

His sister sometimes cribbed but she was tomboy and didn't really care about girly things

 

But they used to get by. They were happy

 

He had his parents when he was young till around 13

 

His dad early because of some disease

 

So that's why their money condition wasn't always so great

 

Then when he was 14-15 his mother passed away

 

His mother was from a rich family; practically aristocrat and she had run away from home, severed her ties from her family to be with her lover

 

The mother dies coz she had been burning her candle at both ends and was finally too tired and consumed and over worked..

 

So there they were two kids now on the streets

 

Maan left his school and education to work and take care of sis.

 

He didn't want to go to the foster care system

 

Maan's mom had contacted her father just before dying to come take care of Maan and sis but the kids moved away

 

So it took the grandfather some time locating them

 

In the past however, Maan ki mom ghar se bhagi toh thi but not for Maan's dad

 

She ran from home coz of Akhil's dad and him being an a**hole was using her and playing with her

 

When he learned that she isn't rich anymore he dumped her on the streets

 

That's when Maan's dad came to her aid

 

She wasn't expecting her life to be as luxurious as she left home but better than a 2 room place where she lived with her poor husband

 

She had big ego too, so she never went back

 

When Maan & his his sis were growing up, their mom would mutter to herself and complaint to herself and curse Akhil's father

 

For Akhil's father she was his toy.  He thought she was a rich heiress but when she ignored her inheritance he dropped her like a hot plate

 

After spending 1.5 years on the street fending for their owN; Maan was now 17 and half and his kid sis she was just going to be 13

 

They were found by the grand father

 

So he took them away abroad

 

They were a mess...scrawny rude...dirty

 

Maan was somewhat a little bit jaded

 

The sis was fine and the situation was savable

 

Grandfather sent the sis to a boarding school so she can leave behind her tomboyish and street urchin ways and learn to be a proper lady

 

The sis cried coz she didn't wanted to be separated from Maan

 

When grandfather decided to send Maan off to school, Maan took rebellion to whole new level

 

He felt like charity and ...however bad their conduit had been; their mother had never begged... there had been dignity...which he didn't feel anymore while mooching off and living like a prince with his grandfather

 

Grandfather also had his own problems but it was lessoned after his daughter aka Maan's mom ran off

 

So he had a little attitude adjustment

 

It took three of them several years to have peaceful meal without any shouting, fighting, crockery breaking and table leaving

 

Maan had refused to go to school so while they were still in adjustment phase Gramps thought to teach Maan a lesson

 

He sent him off to work in some bad hard labor and tough job conditions

 

But he forgot that Maan had been surviving on his own and taking care of his sis

 

So Maan survived the horror job and also made some smart comments about the administrative faults with the place he worked at

 

So Gramps thought the boy was natural and he knew business

 

He changed tactics; became politer gentler, more understanding and mostly more patient with Maan's rebellion; to change to accept to adjust

 

Maan started working and made some deals and talks

 

Gramps tried to make Maan agree to get a degree in business by correspondence finish school

 

Maan rebelled but then gramps convinced the sis to beg him; and Maan more or less did almost everything for her only

 

She Maan had to agree

 

The gramps and his riches. He was the owner of a hotel chain; they had like about 8-10 very successful top class hotels in major cities of all the major countries

 

Maan got into business saara dhyan laga kar and he was naturally good and he started fast expansion of it and his gramps told him to slow down

 

But Maan wanted to be big and best coz deep down he had the insecurity that he will never have enough...coz he had lived through what it felt like to not have enough

 

He didn't want himself or his family ever going through that again

 

Plus, getting accepted in society was a bit difficult for him. He did make some friends but very selected few

 

He also became friends with his gramps too, many years later

 

He learned a bit about society and a lot about women

 

He never had time for girls before and they hadn't cared a fig about him

 

But now... he had to look for 10 seconds at someone and she would throw herself at him

 

It dazed him amazed him in he beginning

 

But he soon learned that these girls were just users who wanted to catch a rich guy, just like the loser who had destroyed his mother's life

 

It was the double standards which got to him and he somewhere along the way swore that he would teach the bas***d a lesson for doing what he did

 

Granted if his mother wouldn't have run away Maan wouldn't have been born but...she died...coz she wasn't meant for the type of life she lived and she couldn't even ask for help coz he had made her feel so degraded that she didn't want her own father to see how low and undignified and fallen she had become

 

Somehow he could put the blame of his mother's death on them but it was just anger and resentment simmering the back of his mind

 

He never made plans...but had this wish

 

After few years:

 

The sis is out of school goes to college in some other place

 

She wants to be there

 

Maan was handling the business

 

The sis was intelligent and sweet and beautiful elegant graceful poised and rich and a tiny winy bit spoiled and still a bit of wild tomboy

 

During her college days the sis met Akhil

 

It was like father, like son

 

Akhil found this girl who wasn't half bad looking ... partial to adventure and exploration open minded and uber rich

 

The sis is just 19-20

 

So Akhil starts dating her charming her

 

She tells Maan about this super nice guy who is paying attention to her

 

She tells him the name

 

Something rings warning bells too but he can't exactly point out what

 

Maan tells her to stop seeing him

 

But she wanted to see Akhil even more just coz she was told not too

 

Besides she was just dating him, not getting intimate or anything...in her opinion

 

Maan became strict, ordered her and shouted at her to stop all this

 

She became more rebellious


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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by raibdrop2


Poor Maan. How much more to convince Geet! They get along so well and she's on  one track. Waiting to see how you will make her stay back...really curious.  
Congratulations for your book and many more to come!

Thanks dear. But many more will only come if this book gets good response. That's why request you to please order the book, share the word and also please review on sites like Amazon and Goodreads. Really need your help and support in this
Posted: 5 years ago
Nice update..
Thank you for pm..
Continue soon..
Posted: 5 years ago
Geet not understanding what Maan trying to convey hr Maan remember his past how his mom suffered bz of Akil father and what happens to his sis 
Posted: 5 years ago
His past connected to Akhil n his father 
His life was very bad but he did best 
No doubt he doesn't understand women emotion 
But that akhil he too did bad to his sis??
Posted: 5 years ago
Sad past 
No doubt he hates akhil so much 


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