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Posted: 6 years ago
Geet is so stubborn
Thnx for pm
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very nice update
maan trying to make geet understand in all ways but she is not ready to understand
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awsome update waiting for next part
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Hi all beautiful readers:
I am so excited to share with you that I have received my paperback version of the book. Its such a dream come true. And it wouldn't have been possible without you all. Thats why it would be my honor if every one of you will read and review my book on:

Amazon India

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Originally posted by: mkd.70

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Thanks dear. Hope u have ordered your copy. Eagerly waiting for your review
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Posted: 6 years ago
Another Fabulous Chapter

Maan this time shows Geet that her thinking is wrong and he says truth
she is intelligent , she can make friends has family too so she needs
to concentrate on other factors in life instead of been miserable not
having Ahkil by her side
Maan just has his sister and grandfather though he has his parents but it
seems they living their own lives
and it almost feels as if he telling Geet about her family he craves to have
a family all living together and not separated
Maan has plans already for the weekend so is he going to see Antara again
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Posted: 6 years ago
I will surely read your book
over one of the weekends
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Originally posted by: taahir004

I will surely read your book
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Yayyy. You have ordered the eBook or paperback version?
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Posted: 6 years ago
Poor Maan. How much more to convince Geet! They get along so well and she's on one track. Waiting to see how you will make her stay back...really curious.
Congratulations for your book and many more to come!
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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 37

G-You don't understand how complicated all of it is

M-Its complicated coz you want it to be! Coz you want to dwell in your pathetic misery! You don't even know C of the word complicated!

Her eyes are welling with tears

Maan says and then walks away from her a few steps to take a few deep breaths to calm himself down

His emotional state takes him back to his past where it all started:

Maan was from a simple lower middleclass family

He went to local public school so did his sister

He was always a bit serious kinds because their family was less than middle class, but still he loved having fun coz he learned to enjoy small things

He wasn't angry or miserable that why aren't we rich or have toys and privileges every other kid has

His sister sometimes cribbed but she was tomboy and didn't really care about girly things

But they used to get by. They were happy

He had his parents when he was young till around 13

His dad early because of some disease

So that's why their money condition wasn't always so great

Then when he was 14-15 his mother passed away

His mother was from a rich family; practically aristocrat and she had run away from home, severed her ties from her family to be with her lover

The mother dies coz she had been burning her candle at both ends and was finally too tired and consumed and over worked..

So there they were two kids now on the streets

Maan left his school and education to work and take care of sis.

He didn't want to go to the foster care system

Maan's mom had contacted her father just before dying to come take care of Maan and sis but the kids moved away

So it took the grandfather some time locating them

In the past however, Maan ki mom ghar se bhagi toh thi but not for Maan's dad

She ran from home coz of Akhil's dad and him being an a**hole was using her and playing with her

When he learned that she isn't rich anymore he dumped her on the streets

That's when Maan's dad came to her aid

She wasn't expecting her life to be as luxurious as she left home but better than a 2 room place where she lived with her poor husband

She had big ego too, so she never went back

When Maan & his his sis were growing up, their mom would mutter to herself and complaint to herself and curse Akhil's father

For Akhil's father she was his toy. He thought she was a rich heiress but when she ignored her inheritance he dropped her like a hot plate

After spending 1.5 years on the street fending for their owN; Maan was now 17 and half and his kid sis she was just going to be 13

They were found by the grand father

So he took them away abroad

They were a mess...scrawny rude...dirty

Maan was somewhat a little bit jaded

The sis was fine and the situation was savable

Grandfather sent the sis to a boarding school so she can leave behind her tomboyish and street urchin ways and learn to be a proper lady

The sis cried coz she didn't wanted to be separated from Maan

When grandfather decided to send Maan off to school, Maan took rebellion to whole new level

He felt like charity and ...however bad their conduit had been; their mother had never begged... there had been dignity...which he didn't feel anymore while mooching off and living like a prince with his grandfather

Grandfather also had his own problems but it was lessoned after his daughter aka Maan's mom ran off

So he had a little attitude adjustment

It took three of them several years to have peaceful meal without any shouting, fighting, crockery breaking and table leaving

Maan had refused to go to school so while they were still in adjustment phase Gramps thought to teach Maan a lesson

He sent him off to work in some bad hard labor and tough job conditions

But he forgot that Maan had been surviving on his own and taking care of his sis

So Maan survived the horror job and also made some smart comments about the administrative faults with the place he worked at

So Gramps thought the boy was natural and he knew business

He changed tactics; became politer gentler, more understanding and mostly more patient with Maan's rebellion; to change to accept to adjust

Maan started working and made some deals and talks

Gramps tried to make Maan agree to get a degree in business by correspondence finish school

Maan rebelled but then gramps convinced the sis to beg him; and Maan more or less did almost everything for her only

She Maan had to agree

The gramps and his riches. He was the owner of a hotel chain; they had like about 8-10 very successful top class hotels in major cities of all the major countries

Maan got into business saara dhyan laga kar and he was naturally good and he started fast expansion of it and his gramps told him to slow down

But Maan wanted to be big and best coz deep down he had the insecurity that he will never have enough...coz he had lived through what it felt like to not have enough

He didn't want himself or his family ever going through that again

Plus, getting accepted in society was a bit difficult for him. He did make some friends but very selected few

He also became friends with his gramps too, many years later

He learned a bit about society and a lot about women

He never had time for girls before and they hadn't cared a fig about him

But now... he had to look for 10 seconds at someone and she would throw herself at him

It dazed him amazed him in he beginning

But he soon learned that these girls were just users who wanted to catch a rich guy, just like the loser who had destroyed his mother's life

It was the double standards which got to him and he somewhere along the way swore that he would teach the bas***d a lesson for doing what he did

Granted if his mother wouldn't have run away Maan wouldn't have been born but...she died...coz she wasn't meant for the type of life she lived and she couldn't even ask for help coz he had made her feel so degraded that she didn't want her own father to see how low and undignified and fallen she had become

Somehow he could put the blame of his mother's death on them but it was just anger and resentment simmering the back of his mind

He never made plans...but had this wish

After few years:

The sis is out of school goes to college in some other place

She wants to be there

Maan was handling the business

The sis was intelligent and sweet and beautiful elegant graceful poised and rich and a tiny winy bit spoiled and still a bit of wild tomboy

During her college days the sis met Akhil

It was like father, like son

Akhil found this girl who wasn't half bad looking ... partial to adventure and exploration open minded and uber rich

The sis is just 19-20

So Akhil starts dating her charming her

She tells Maan about this super nice guy who is paying attention to her

She tells him the name

Something rings warning bells too but he can't exactly point out what

Maan tells her to stop seeing him

But she wanted to see Akhil even more just coz she was told not too

Besides she was just dating him, not getting intimate or anything...in her opinion

Maan became strict, ordered her and shouted at her to stop all this

She became more rebellious


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