MG FS : Love happens || LAST PART Page 15 | March 24, 2019 - Page 12

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana


karan you can think of Hiten Tejwani, i loved him as Pratham and his wife Gauri as his partner.


regarding Arjun, there is no actor fixed, as I had read first that Maan's character was actually named as Arjun initially.

mostly i love kritika kamra and karan kundra..
you can consider them as Arjun and Arohi/nidhi/preeti





I love Hiten Tejwani too...he looks too humble and sweet...

@BOLD: Is it? I did not know this...Vaise I think Maan suited the show better...don't know...like all the arrogance and all...reflected from the name itself...hehe...nahi?

oh yaar...I loved Kitni Mohabat hai season 1...nice yaar

nice choices and thanks for replying...
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Posted: 6 years ago
UPDATING LAST PART 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

UPDATING LAST PART 😉


ahh sad that its the last part
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan


ahh sad that its the last part


you won't regret it 😉
it's an old story chetna so my imagination is all dead now 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

UPDATING LAST PART 😉


Waiting 😊
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~LOVE HAPPENS~

FINAL PART


It was three years since they last interacted and her talk about him to establish himself made him start the work that he was supposed to start sometime after his bachelors. Her words that day had reflected her expectation of an ideal life partner, the partner who could love her and nurture her every whims and fantasy. It was the last day of college. Both were graduated, Maan was having the degree of architecture and Geet earned herself a Bachelor of Administration. He had put his five years of hard work in his life so that he can have the most precious relationship in his life, his Geet.

Having not seen formally after that visit to the orphanage where he teased her mercilessly, he had resolved himself not to come in her way, her allure was difficult to resist, and he wasn't someone who would run behind someone without proving himself. The second kiss they shared had cleared him that him having Khurana name tag will not earn the affections of the beautiful lady. They, however, crossed each other many times but both of them ignored or say she ignored, and he never asked her or started any talks with her.


It was last day, it was in the same playground where she had met him, their first interaction occurred. she was sitting alone. today she was leaving for her native Hoshiarpur and was quite sad as the children of the orphanage were gloomy to know that their Geet didi is leaving. Sitting alone in the ground she didn't think that someone could approach her, the party was going in full swing, the whole university was gathered, and the final farewell was being done officially.

Maan came dressed in his formals, he was in a black tux, she too was in black and white combination saree complementing him in every single way. Maan came and sat beside her he knew she was leaving today only he had her every single information.


Maan: so, what are you thinking now. Feeling bad that you are leaving me, so soon...


Geet suddenly found her eyes darted towards him she was in her sandals today and those high heels won't mind beating him black and blue if he didn't keep himself quiet, she thought without a single thought. She found her eyes darting towards his chiseled face, he had a slight stubble and was looking quite handsome. His eyes were having an expression that was not able to read. Finding herself not coming to any conclusion she rebuffed him in her slightly low shivering voice.


Geet: go and enjoy that boring party I am already depressed why are you spoiling my mood.

Finding her really low, he tried to lighten up her mood...


Maan : itne saalon me bhi nahi badli..bas you have grown into more beautiful.. And I am damn sure you must be blackbelt now. Kitno ki dhulaai ki hai... I am sure the list must be pretty long.

Maan said smiling, she was first angered at his comment but finding him trying to open up a conversation she replied with an amused smile.


Geet: tum jaise bahuton ki...


Maan : oh really but they didn't have surrendered themselves to you.. And here I am just offering you myself without any expectations. What do you think of my proposal? Yaad hai na..meri Dulhan..

Maan tried to hint her with his words but she was so innocent that she didn't get the meaning of his underlying words.


Geet : you are crazy Maan... I am getting married in a month, so your chance is off.


Maan composed himself and looked disturbed and he made a saddened face.


Maan : who is the idiot. Who took Maan ki dulhan? I am sure that no one can be better for you than me...


Geet averted her gaze, the truth was she didn't know what she should say but just talked with him and he always make her uncomfortable with his words, and harmless flirting.


Maan: so, I guess you don't know. Don't worry wild cat Dulhan to hum hi lejayenge.. Waise bhi I am eager to have two miniature cats for me exclusively soon.

Maan's teasing made her look away and he realized that she didn't look happy with his words, but she stood up to go. She was confused she feels good around him, but she was not aware of her feelings.


Geet: I am leaving and you better forget me .. I am not of your types kisi Sam jaisi ko dhund lena..


Maan didn't say anything he just let her go.


***** A MONTH LATER IN HOSHIARPUR. A DAY BEFORE THE WEDDING*****

The preparations were going on but today Geet felt like crying she wanted to feel Maan kiss him restless and make him hers. She wants him she was crying hiding her face in the duvet. She feels something for him, and she has to stop this wedding even if it means threatening her groom. There wasn't any day when she didn't remember him, she was felling jitters when she remembers those slow and gentle kisses...


Geet angrily wiped her tears and stood up. She was resolved now to do anything to stop the wedding. She couldn't get married when she loves Maan, the realization was too beautiful but first, she had so much work to complete.


Geet: you won't get anything from crying. Do something Geet... it's high time to get yourself your Maan.

She knew where the groom and his family were residing it was pitch dark four in the morning, she knew how to threaten the groom and then he won't be able to do anything. She will punch him. And threw him out of Hoshiarpur if he didn't listen to her.


Maan was feeling cold in the cool wind he was there just because of her he knew the day she is getting married and he will make her his. He walked down the farms it was looking so green he stretched his hands and looked at a barn where he saw her sitting while he could hear her sniffle...


Maan let her cry and smile while he pulled her down making her fall on the hay. She looked perplexed and seeing him she just returned his gestured by kissing him softly.


Geet : the teacher taught me so well.. But did I pass?


Maan pulled her closer and more kissed her tears.


Maan: there is more to teach then will take your exam fully. She melted in his touches and he flipped her on him covering her with his arms.


Geet looked into his eyes they were mad and looked like made for each other.


Geet : I need to call off the marriage ..


Maan : why I don't think there is any need ... I will marry you in the same mandap on the same day...


Geet : no... You are mad. How is it possible...


Maan : just wait and watch .. Now let me enjoy my would-be bride in my arms.


Geet : tumhari dulhan ko koi aur le jayega

she teased him and he in his sheer anger answered her back.


maan : dulhan toh hum hi le jayenge...


Geet : nahi aaye toh..


Maan : ghode pe bhagakar le jaunga..


His words were no less his actions as he will do what he is saying.

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It was the time of the pheras and she knew that he lied, he was not there and she was counting on him and hadn't even said anything to the groom, at least you can say that now his life will be hell for some days till she will cool down her anger after all poor guy was not at fault..


Maan looked at his Geet looking ravishing in her bridal attire but the smile was missing just a frown was there adorning her beautiful face.


Maan st: just an hour more baby then your wait will be over, it's your punishment for leaving me without even acknowledging my love. He had supposed to not to wear any sehra but to hide his face he had wear and she was with many efforts not able to look at him.

They were in their farmhouse alone. Maan knew that his Lioness will pounce on him if she knew that he had planned this all but least he knew that Geet will cut him into small pieces and would fry him alive if he dared to lie to her again. She had looked at his hands and knew that this wouldn't be possible she had seen Maan's hands and seeing the same hands were filling her Maang, it was their engagement ring that flashed which was sent by her family since they didn't have an engagement. She knew now why he was cool, and this was now making her head spin.


Geet st : so my dear hubby you knew this all the while .. Maan you are gone, honey...


Maan came to her side and tried to hold her hands but found her snapping his hands. But he was quick and scooped her in his arms throwing those flowers from his face.


Geet glared at him and he knew that this will be the start of his new life...


Maan and Geet were settled on the bed she was pouting and was harshly pulling off the attire. First, her jewels were off. Now it was the turn of his smile to wipe off.


Geet : Maan don't run now... You know what you have done. You lied... you knew we were getting married all along...

Wait she suddenly found his smile too suspicious.

Geet: It was you who approached my family. You knew that we will be getting married even before that farewell, you git... she said with a frown and Maan made an innocent face to pacify his then angry wifey...


Maan : but baby I did what you wanted..


Geet : yes you wanted me and you were marrying me. And Didn't even told me...I am not going to talk to you.

she was thinking when she found Maan closing the distance between them and pulling her in his arms settling on the bed..


Maan : aur...

He asked slowly pulling off the pins off her hair he looked at the red mark of heavy jewelry and kissed if. Licking the portion. Geet was hypnotized... And was not able to say anything. The night was passionate and melting. Maan looked at her. This was the spark at she had created and today it was ignited into wire burning them in passion...


Geet stirred in sleep and he pulled her in sleep whispering in her ear knowing she isn't sleeping...


Maan : kaha tha na that you will be my bride... And I proved myself...


Geet softly kissing him on his bare chest.


Geet: hmm. Par on the first day I thought you as the jerk and you still the same...


Maan : kya karun i am having a sherni with me na.. I have to tame her wilderness...

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So, readers, this was the final part this was one of my stories i had written somewhere in 2013...

i hope you all enjoyed it.

initially, it was named as dulhan hum le jayenge...

I have reposted one more of my fiction

TWIN TELEPATHY-- if interested you people can check out

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/5078012/mg-ts-twin-telepathy-discontinued



Edited by suhaaana - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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absolutely loved the story...
especially how he tried to fit in the category of her dream man...he loved her yet for her, he stayed far...that was too cute...

loved how he was so calm because it was all his plan to make her his dulhan...

nice one...Geet is smart too and recognized him and his hands...


lovely story dear
Edited by sahibasharma - 6 years ago
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It was amazing. So it was all maan's plan. He wanted to prove himself and he did and after that, he made geet his dulhan. He hid all these things from geet. Geet realised her love latter on and she told maan her fear. Maan was calm all the time as he was the mind master behind everything. But eventually geet comes to know everything. She was angry initially but then she also got lost in their love. It was amazing.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Interesting ...
Beautiful ending ..

Maan approached geet's family n their marriage got fixed...

Geet realised her love for him n wanted to scare her groom ...

Geet didn't know anything till he was filling her maang...

She was hell angry...

He melted her anger with his love n passion...
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What an ending Maan been planning all along. That was cute and mean of him but glad she became maan ki dulhan :)

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