REVENGE- Part 75 (Page 159) - Page 60

Posted: 5 years ago
Fabulous Chapter 

Geet calls Maan Ahkil and that made him angry 
she may have known Ahkil for many years but can she not 
see he has never been polite or respectable towards her 
while at this moment the person that is doing for is Maan 
and he is right all that Ahkil dishes out to her in form of slavery 
is disrespect , harshness and he even got physically violent 
can Geet not see this 
Posted: 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
Congrats on the book! 

Part 35

lovely update! amazingly written! 

Maan's anger is justified! how can Geet call Akhil after all what happened?

Maan was correct about Akhil!! 

will Geet realise this?

update soon 
Posted: 5 years ago
GEET REJECT MAAN'S OFFER OF JOB IN HIS FRIEND'S OFFICE 
MAAN BECOME ANGRY WHEN GEET CALLED HIM AKHIL 
GEET IS STILL IN THE WORLD OF AKHIL NOT READY TO COME OUT 
Posted: 5 years ago
Geet so stubborn 
She will go that's it 
Now jogging hope they won't fight again 
Posted: 5 years ago
Geet missing akhil and Maan not liking she not wanting his help in finding job so he get bit hurtbut still talking to hr 
Posted: 5 years ago
geet still had feelings for that akhil
even feels sad for him
why cant she let her feelings go
thanks for pm
will bw waiting
Posted: 5 years ago
Geet shouldn't think about akhil now 
She needs to move on
Posted: 5 years ago
Part 35
Maan's irritation is understandable. Akhil is not worth the adulation. ...will take time for Geet to give it up. I know for sure😉when Geet does give up Akhil and want Maan she will be all out for him ...waiting for the passionate emotional Geet! 
Posted: 5 years ago

Part 36

 

G-You don't know him for 21 yrs ...I do

 

M-Yeah... he pushes you around, hurts you physically, emotionally...could have been doing that for the past 21yrs...I don't know I haven't known you two that long...and you are still sweet on him... you are right, I never can understand and truthfully I don't want to either

 

G-Khair chodo...tumhare ghar mein kan kaun hai?

 

M-My sister and my my granddad from mother's side

 

G-Aur?

 

M-That's all

 

G-oh...mumma papa?

 

M-They ...don't live together...or with us

 

G-Hmm?

 

M-They shouldn't have got married... it was an accident and they thought having another one can solve their problem...things didn't work out...so they live their separate lives..

 

G-oh...I am sorry

 

M-You don't have to be. They are happy and we don't care less. What needs to be done; needs to be done

 

She places her reassuring hand on his

 

He looks at her hand and the sympathy in her eyes

 

G-emm...behen kitni badi hai?

 

M-26

 

G-Chotti behen hai?

 

He nods

 

G-oh...kya karti hai?

 

M-Sabko irritate

 

Geet chuckles

 

G-Hatt! aisa nahi kehte

 

She hits his arm playfully

 

G-Tum sabko irritate karte ho

 

M-I've learnt from the best

 

G-Bolo naa seriously! Is she married? Kahan rehti hai?

 

M-With my grandpa, she can't find a guy who she wants to spend the rest of her life with

 

G-hmm...join the club! Achche ladke to extinct species hain sahi mein

 

M-Achha bankar kisi ko kuch nahi milta

 

G-Haan tum toh bhagwan ho, tumhe sab pata hai

 

M-Mil raha hota toh extinct nahi hote

 

G-Arre ye bhi hai naa aajkal achi ladkiya bhi to nahi hain; bass mujhe aur tumhari behen ko chodkar. Kyun hai naa?

 

She nudges him with elbow

 

M-You don't know my sister

 

G-I am sure wo bohot achi hai, buri kyun hogi?

 

M-You didn't call me about the movie. I was expecting your call

 

G-Abhi toh weekend bohot door hai

 

M-We could have gone for the night show. Mere weekend ke already plan hain. I am not free then

 

G-Oh, kahan jaa rahe ho?

 

M-Ghar

 

G-Oh acha...mujhe laga akhri din mere saath...koi baat nahi...ek din kam hi sahi

 

Maan looks at her

 

M-Its better this way...we won't have to say goodbyes

 

G-Hmm

 

She isn't looking at him

 

M-You are dead set on going there and nothing I can say or do will change your mind

 

Geet ne kuch nahi kaha...chup thi

 

She just sighed

 

M-Why can't you just go to the next city...that's far enough

 

She sighs again and shakes her head

 

G-You know Maan...some people are meant to be together

 

M-And some aren't, so?Who are you meant to be with?

 

She shakes her head

 

G-And, some people are meant be alone

 

M-That a**hole u think even if you go to Africa he'll come after you and you'll be together?

 

She shakes her head

 

G-I don't wish or hope for any such thing

 

M-And you know what? Some people even having everything just throw it all away, coz they can't see the truth, coz they have set their minds that they aren't good enough!

 

G-And some people should just stop being so caring...

 

She looks at him and says with a smile]

 

M- I am not being caring, damn it!! Its its...

 

She is looking at him with her innocent blinks

 

M-You are throwing it all away!!! You don't even know what you have! How much you have!

 

Geet looks at him with question in her eyes

 

M- You arr intelligent young, beautiful, charming likable and you have perfectly good body; and you have set your mind to be alone and waste all of it in Africa!!

 

She widens her eyes as if he just said ' Geet you have two antennas on your head and your color is green'

 

M-I mean...ok fine...you can love another person but is that all there is? Just that kind of feeling

...you can have friends, companions, family...who mean something and make it worth living...coz some people don't even have that and still make it, you know!

 

Geet shakes her head...

 

G-You don't understand how complicated all of it is

 

M-Its complicated coz you want it to be! Coz you want to dwell in your pathetic misery! You don't even know C of the word complicated!

 

Her eyes are welling with tears

 

Maan says and then walks away from her a few steps to take a few deep breaths to calm himself down


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