MG~FF~SAWARIYA|| Part 15 || Pg/31 || 23-10-2019 || - Page 14

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: m32223

Read Parts 1-12.. Beautiful story..😊

Geet and Maan are so different yet similar in many ways
Geet is so sweet and caring so is Maan... both understanding their responsibilities...and they trust their elders with their lives

The intro is fab..its actually like when one is watching a daily soap/series transitions from one scene to another
Sana does give me the creeps lol😆

Engagement on the first meeting itself... 😲Now that was pretty fast lol😆
Loved the way Rajji, Tara and Dev are helping the shy couple😆😆

Ayan is so cute ❤️
Geet and Maan interactions are so sweet...😉
Loved the way you have portrayed their emotions...the care and understanding they have in building their relationship..👏




Thank you 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

maybe 5 mins ... editing😉
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Posted: 6 years ago

PART 14:



He gazed her ... Tumhe kuch dikhana hai, dekhogi? He asked forwarding his hand seeking her permission. Geet smiled and put her hand in his ... Hmmm ... she blushed. Maan felt so good that she trusted him enough with his intentions even when they were alone. That was truly a leap in their relationship. He walked ahead leading her towards a room, while Geet began to look around trying to know where they were going.



The outhouse was almost as big as the mansion in which the Khuranas lived and Geet could not understand why it was an outhouse in the first place.



Her gaze fell over the portraits which Maan began to look at intently ... They're my mom and dad Geet ... I never got a chance to be with them ... Mujhe toh yeh bhi nahi yaad ki woh dikhte kaise the ... I just look at their pictures ... and try to tell myself that they're with me ... If not physically ... I am their reflection, he turned around and continued ... I feel so lost when I try to recollect how my parents left me ... and then I look at you ... Tum toh mere liye apna sab kuch chodke aane wali ho ... Aur yeh meri zimmedari hahi ki main tumhe itna pyar aur saath doon ki tumhe unki kami kabhi mehsoos na ho ... Mujhe toh yeh bhi nahi pata ki main kaise yeh saare rishte nibha paonga ... Lekin kuch hai Geet jo tumse kehna hai ... She put her hand on his mouth ... Mujhe nahi sunna ... Aapko kuch der pehle jo hua uss wajah se bura lag raha hoga ... Please hame chalna chahiye, sab intezaar kar rahe honge



She turned to walk away thinking that the conversation was not needed ... Why don't you want to listen to? Har waqt meri hi baatein nahi ho sakti na? He asked holding her hand ... Tum nahi jaanti ki hum kya soch rahe hai Geet ... Bhai wants us to work together until we get married in the same office and I don't know what you intend to do ... Geet was taken aback. She wanted to be with her parents for the seven months until the marriage at least. She has always been daddy's angel and she just cannot imagine a situation when her parents would have no one to take care of. She did not even discuss this issue with Maan and she heard him say ... I don't want you to feel like you are leaving your parents ... I would want them to shift here ... But if they don't want that then we can visit them every week Geet



Geet's eyes filled with tears ... How could a man be this perfect? she wondered ... She would want to be with him but how can she leave her parents when she can lawfully stay with them till marriage. But the way Maan was asking her it was making her to feel like not wanting to leave him.



Geet kuch der pehle jo hua ... I do not want you to be that weak in front of anyone ... Tumne iss liye jawab nahi diya kyunki Sana is Bhabhi's sister?



Aisa nahi hai Maan ... It's unlike me ... I never yell at anyone ... Papaji hamesha kehte hai ki gusse mein ki hui har baat bematlab hota hai ... She is a kid and she just held my throat ... She did not put pressure ... Woh gusse mein thi lekin usse apna hadh pata tha aur ... She was about to continue when Maan's phone rang. He could not avoid as it was Naintara ... Geet thik hai Maan? She asked worried.



Haan Bhabhi woh thik hai ... Maan replied looking at Geet's face ... Tum log jaldi se aajo, everyone's asking about you



Bhabhi bus five minutes ... He hung up in a rush to talk to Geet about what else he wanted her to know ... Main nahi chahta ki tum koi bhi aisa kaam karo jo tumhe pasand nahi ... I don't want you to work with me if you want to stay with your parents until our marriage ... Although I would feel happy if you would join me ... And Geet I wanted to tell this to you so that I can give him your perspective not letting him to know that it's your decision ... Agar bhai tumse yeh baat karte toh tum mana nahi kar paati ... And let me know as soon as possible because I am afraid bhai would ask you and I know you what you would do after that.



Before Geet could say anything, Ayan ran inside ... Chachu chachi, dadima aapko bula rahi hai, he stood cutely. Maaneet smiled and walked out along with the little monster.


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After the party, Mohinder wanted to go back home but Maan's family was not ready to let go off them. Finally, they had to stay for the night at least. Maaneet and DevTara were attending Maan's friend's marriage so they would drop Geet's family at their place and would go ahead.



That night,


Geet couldn't sleep thinking about what Maan told her. She began to toss on the bed when her phone buzzed ... She looked at the message ... Good night ... She smiled and replied good night to Maan.



She sat on the bed after a long inner fight. She didn't even know when she accepted him so much that she trusted him ... She did not feel intimidated to be with him all alone for that long time. What amazed her was he did not try to get close to her. She began to idolize him without even knowing ... Her hands began to turn cold ... Main papaji ko kaise itne din chod sakti hoon? Mandir ki dekh bhal kaun karega? What about my dance classes ... Kids will miss me



After sometime, her papaji appeared ... Kya hua Gudiya? He asked sitting beside Geet. She did not know if she was supposed to discuss her inner turmoil but had to because she needed her father to know her dilemma. She told him everything that Maan has asked her for ... Mujhe samajh mein nahi aaraha papaji ... Main kya karon? Mujhe nahi lagta ki main aapse dur ho kar kaam kar paongi ... She cried holding her papaji knowing that even he wouldn't want her to be with him for him or for any issue. He would want her to have a life and be happy.



Just then Rajji joined the conversation ... Di meri bhi kuch zimmedari hai ... Aren't you supposed to give me some of the responsibilities of yours?



Geet hum chahte hai ki aapko jo acha lage woh kariye ... lekin ek baat yaad rakhna, you will always be my best daughter ... Mohinder and Rajji left making Geet to lay on the bed again ... Aap nahi jaante papaji yeh mere liye kitni mushkil baat hai, she slipped into deep sleep eventually giving up.



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Maan aaj jo hua hai ... Usse bhool jayiye Bhabhi please I don't want to discuss about it and I don't want you to feel guilty about it, Maan adamantly replied.



Maan please I don't want you to take stress about work at this point ... Jo jaise hoga waise hoga ... I will speak to Dev if you do not want to work with Satya Aunty, Naintara was not liking the way things were moulding. She wanted Maaneet to enjoy this phase of life ... And she was getting worried with the turn of events.



No Bhabhi ... Please I don't want you to be worrying ... Geet ke saath mera itna rishta hai ki hum baat karke kuch soch lenge ... It's not about me ... It's about her choice and please don't ask her anything ... Kal hume khushi se jaana hai aur Khushi se wapas aana hai ... Naintara smiled and left.



Precap: A bond of love!😳

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamyharika



maybe 5 mins ... editing 😉

It's here ⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 6 years ago
Great update..
Maan is really lovely.. he is considering geet's wish above all.. their budding relationship is really cute.. I think the trip is going to make them closer.. waiting for Geet's decision... continue soon..😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
Lovely part
Maaneet talking so nice
Maan not pressuring her
Even her parents are so nice
Tough decision for Geet
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Posted: 6 years ago
Beautiful!!!!
Maan's unreal,he is beyond perfect!!!
I think Geet should stay with her family until their wedding
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update waiting for next update
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Posted: 6 years ago
geet is very much surprise that how maan know what she think n wants
maan happy with trust geet showing on him to be alone with him



waiting to read more
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Posted: 6 years ago
superb update
Like maaneets moments as always.
Bith r trying to understand each other.
Before maariage period is very full emitions. Geet is facing it right now.
She is happy and sad too.
Sometimes its complicated .
Its very difficult to give preference between parents and would be husaband.
Its good that maan is enjoying this period.
Update soon.

Edited by pallavimn - 6 years ago

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