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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 34

Subah hui

Maan aaya bahar room se coffee peene, raat ke kapdon mein -tracks and baniyan

Maan leke baitha newspaper

Kuch paani ki cheethon ne Maan ke chehre ko gila kar diya

He looks up from the paper...a bit annoyed but already starting to smile

Geet looks at him

G-oh you are up...good morning

She smiles back

M-Good morning

G-Excuse me...

Geet bolke room mein chali gai

Maan ko bhi Geet ka reaction kaafi weird laga but he brushes it away

He quickly skims through the paper and finishes his cup of coffee and goes to his room to get ready

Bahar aata hai toh dekhta hai the breakfast is laid

Maan baith jaata hai nashta karne

M-You know you don't have to cook breakfast so early I can help myself

G-I was hungry

Geet bhi khaane lagti hai

He isn't a fan of cornflakes, so he gets up makes some toast and omlete

G-Kya hua?

M- I am hungry. You want omelet?

He asks as he cuts some veggies and whips the eggs

Geet looks at him quizzically

She snatches the eggs from him

G-Go and sit

M-I am making it. What's your problem?

G-Nahi khana tha toh batana chahie tha naa

M-Kya nahi khana?

He takes the bowl back and pours it on the pan

G-Cornflakes nahi pasand hai ye batana chahie tha naa jab laa rahe the

M- M...m..mujhe laga tumhe khana hai to le aaya

G-Toh bolna nahi aata? Hato naaa

She pushes him

M- I am making it Geet... go and eat your breakfast before it gets too mushy

He pushes her back

G-Ouch! Dhakka kyun maar rahe ho? Hato! Mujhe aur bhi kaam hain!

M-Tumne pehle maara. Besides how am I supposed to cook if you stand in the way?

G-Toh? Main tumhe marungi toh tum bhi mujhpe haath uthaoge?

M-To get even with you I don't have to slap you back. I am sure there would be other things which would hurt you more

Geet storms out

G-Slab ke paas tiffin hai le lena aur fruits bhi kaate hain

M-Fine!

He shouts after her

He doesn't even get the whole point...bhook lagi thi to bana liya...does she want to be annoyed and pulled into doing his stuff for him. It's like if you don't make her do your work for you, she is unhappy

Geet sits and starts having her corn-flakes

Maan bhi bana kar takes t back to the table and starts eating it

M-Look I am not used to people making breakfast for me or serving me anything. I eat what I feel like eating on the spur of the moment and I don't see how disturbing you when you are eating, a good sense or nice manners. So I made what I wanted to eat for myself. I don't want to fight with you first thing in the morning

G-Did I say anything? I am sorry...its better I should just leave

M-You are upset over my behavior...you don't have to leave. I am not used to living with anyone and so aren't u and it'll take time to adjust...doesn't mean you have to leave

G-No...what I am doing here...living with a stranger...Its all crazy!

M-You want to go to Africa, die...go to the stars and meet him again... living with me for few days is the least crazy thing

Geet looks away

G-What I do is my problem...my life and I have a family...I am just an escapist

M-You are taking a break from a tough life. Everyone deserves a break and some days of rest and peace

G-Go...Its late

He nods

He gets up puts his plate in the sink

He is too late to wash them

M-Hey you wanna go see a movie tonight?

G-I'll let you knw

M-ok

Maan keh kar picks up his bag and leaves waving good bye to her

She waves back

Maan pohoncha office

Akhil doesn't look like he got any sleep last night

Uska office bhi pura bikhra hua hai

Geet nahi hai naa organize karne ke liye...

Aur ye sara kaam kaun karega issi tension mein Akhil bhi pareshaan hai

Maan ko office mein harassed Akhil ko dekhkar bohot shaanti mili

Maan ne lunch time mein tiffin khola jo Geet ne pack kiya tha, also snacks ke liye fruits bhi kaat diye the

Sab office walon ne poocha

Arre kya baat hai aaj lunch banake laaye ho aur fruits bhi kaate hain!'

M-I've got some house guests

Shaam ko ghatiya si gadi ko wapas kiya apni achchi bike uthai aur ghar chala gaya

He brought her a tub of ice cream

Geet ne door khola...lips mein dangling pen aur lips pe zara si ink and gets back to her phone and copy pen

M-Hi, I got ice cream!

He looks at her

M-What are you doing?

She looks up searching the internet for some info

M- You can use my laptop if you want

G-No its fine, I got what I needed

M-What were yiu looking for?

G-Africa...of course

M-On the net? You don't know where it is?

G-Arre other things

M-Like what?

G-City...weather

He nods at her reply

M-By the way, I spoke to my friend today about your job today. He wants you to mail your CV to him

G-Thanks...but no thanks

M-Why not? It's not like I am pulling any strings for you... he said he would interview you. If he likes the CV and if that goes well then you can get the job

G-I will find it

M-But not just the one my friend can offer, purely based on your merit just coz he is my friend?

G-I will manage

M-You are avoiding the question

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Posted: 6 years ago
Cute part
Both are adjusting together ...
So Geet still serious about Africa..good as long as she toesnt care for akhil it's best
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Posted: 6 years ago
Oh God why do they have to be so complicated all the time???? Why can't they justsort things out? Why does Geet have to behave in a weird way? 🤔
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update..
Continue soon..
Thank you for pm..
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Why won't they ever be in sync anytime? Always one goes east the other west. Now suddently why does she again want to goto Africa? He has been kind to her looking after her, she shd be happy there's someone wanting to care fr her.. instead of running away, she needs to give a thought to taking the interview here
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Posted: 6 years ago
thanks for the pm!

terrific update! superbly written!

Geet still want to go to Africa!

great that Maan arranged an interview for her!

update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
Thanks for updating

Will read and comment before the weekend
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Jeez she really wants to go to Africa oh Maan has a task on hand and that is if this girl agrees. She is trying to to help herself but is unaware what help is front of her like the msk is offering.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: anmirza

Oh God why do they have to be so complicated all the time???? Why can't they justsort things out? Why does Geet have to behave in a weird way? 🤔


Maybe she is afraid of breaking her heart again...like it happened last time she expected something (the movie theatre event)
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