REVENGE- Part 75 (Page 159) - Page 56

Originally posted by: NilzStorywriter

Jaded prince is my own personal.favorite...then comes "Feeling"and Vampire & Angel"

Your Mystic connection n Blind dating very emotional .. I cried many times 

Anxiously waiting for the next part please 

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

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Edited by NilzStorywriter - 5 years ago

Part 34

 

Subah hui

 

Maan aaya bahar room se coffee peene, raat ke kapdon mein -tracks and baniyan

 

Maan leke baitha newspaper

 

Kuch paani ki cheethon ne Maan ke chehre ko gila kar diya

 

He looks up from the paper...a bit annoyed but already starting to smile

 

Geet looks at him

 

G-oh you are up...good morning

 

She smiles back

 

M-Good morning

 

G-Excuse me...

 

Geet bolke room mein chali gai

 

Maan ko bhi Geet ka reaction kaafi weird laga but he brushes it away

 

He quickly skims through the paper and finishes his cup of coffee and goes to his room to get ready

 

Bahar aata hai toh dekhta hai the breakfast is laid

 

Maan baith jaata hai nashta karne

 

M-You know you don't have to cook breakfast so early I can help myself

 

G-I was hungry

 

Geet bhi khaane lagti hai

 

He isn't a fan of cornflakes, so he gets up makes some toast and omlete

 

 

G-Kya hua?

 

M- I am hungry. You want omelet?

 

He asks as he cuts some veggies and whips the eggs

 

Geet looks at him quizzically

 

She snatches the eggs from him

 

G-Go and sit

 

M-I am making it. What's your problem?

 

G-Nahi khana tha toh batana chahie tha naa

 

M-Kya nahi khana?

 

He takes the bowl back and pours it on the pan

 

G-Cornflakes nahi pasand hai ye batana chahie tha naa jab laa rahe the

 

M- M...m..mujhe laga tumhe khana hai to le aaya

 

G-Toh bolna nahi aata? Hato naaa

 

She pushes him

 

M- I am making it Geet... go and eat your breakfast before it gets too mushy

 

He pushes her back

 

G-Ouch! Dhakka kyun maar rahe ho? Hato! Mujhe aur bhi kaam hain!

 

M-Tumne pehle maara. Besides how am I supposed to cook if you stand in the way?

 

G-Toh? Main tumhe marungi toh tum bhi mujhpe haath uthaoge?

 

M-To get even with you I don't have to slap you back. I am sure there would be other things which would hurt you more

 

Geet storms out

 

G-Slab ke paas tiffin hai le lena aur fruits bhi kaate hain

 

M-Fine!

 

He shouts after her

 

He doesn't even get the whole point...bhook lagi thi to bana liya...does she want to be annoyed and pulled into doing his stuff for him. It's like if you don't make her do your work for you, she is unhappy

 

Geet sits and starts having her corn-flakes

 

Maan bhi bana kar takes t back to the table and starts eating it

 

M-Look I am not used to people making breakfast for me or serving me anything. I eat what I feel like eating on the spur of the moment and I don't see how disturbing you when you are eating, a good sense or nice manners. So I made what I wanted to eat for myself. I don't want to fight with you first thing in the morning

 

G-Did I say anything? I am sorry...its better I should just leave

 

M-You are upset over my behavior...you don't have to leave. I am not used to living with anyone and so aren't u and it'll take time to adjust...doesn't mean you have to leave

 

G-No...what I am doing here...living with a stranger...Its all crazy!

 

M-You want to go to Africa, die...go to the stars and meet him again... living with me for few days is the least crazy thing

 

Geet looks away

 

G-What I do is my problem...my life and I have a family...I am just an escapist

 

M-You are taking a break from a tough life. Everyone deserves a break and some days of rest and peace

 

G-Go...Its late

 

He nods

 

He gets up puts his plate in the sink

 

He is too late to wash them

 

M-Hey you wanna go see a movie tonight?

 

G-I'll let you knw

 

M-ok

 

Maan keh kar picks up his bag and leaves waving good bye to her

 

She waves back

 

Maan pohoncha office

 

Akhil doesn't look like he got any sleep last night

 

Uska office bhi pura bikhra hua hai

 

Geet nahi hai naa organize karne ke liye...

 

Aur ye sara kaam kaun karega issi tension mein Akhil bhi pareshaan hai

 

Maan ko office mein harassed Akhil ko dekhkar bohot shaanti mili

 

Maan ne lunch time mein tiffin khola jo Geet ne pack kiya tha, also snacks ke liye fruits bhi kaat diye the

 

Sab office walon ne poocha

 

Arre kya baat hai aaj lunch banake laaye ho aur fruits bhi kaate hain!'

 

M-I've got some house guests

 

 

Shaam ko ghatiya si gadi ko wapas kiya apni achchi bike uthai aur ghar chala gaya

 

He brought her a tub of ice cream

 

Geet ne door khola...lips mein dangling pen aur lips pe zara si ink and gets back to her phone and copy pen

 

M-Hi, I got ice cream!

 

He looks at her

 

M-What are you doing?

 

She looks up searching the internet for some info

 

M- You can use my laptop if you want

 

G-No its fine, I got what I needed

 

M-What were yiu looking for?

 

G-Africa...of course

 

M-On the net? You don't know where it is?

 

G-Arre other things

 

M-Like what?

 

G-City...weather

 

He nods at her reply

 

M-By the way, I spoke to my friend today about your job today. He wants you to mail your CV to him

 

G-Thanks...but no thanks

 

M-Why not? It's not like I am pulling any strings for you... he said he would interview you. If he likes the CV and if that goes well then you can get the job

 

G-I will find it

 

M-But not just the one my friend can offer, purely based on your merit just coz he is my friend?

 

G-I will manage

 

M-You are avoiding the question

Cute part 

Oh God why do they have to be so complicated all the time???? Why can't they justsort things out? Why does Geet have to behave in a weird way? 🤔

Nice update..

Why won't they ever be in sync anytime? Always one goes east the other west. Now suddently why does she again want to goto Africa? He has been kind to her looking after her, she shd be happy there's someone wanting to care fr her.. instead of running away, she needs to give a thought to taking the interview here

thanks for the pm!