Knock, Knock! Who's there? Pt 21/22 pg 80, 82 23/04 - Page 53

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Posted: 6 years ago
Part 18 cute update geet was hell nervous meeting masn family though maan support her every way but geet was getting scared maan family liked geet and moreover they were surprised how caring maan was for geet both were shocked with decision his family put on him
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Posted: 6 years ago
Part 19 amazing update geet lost in her world where both talk with possibility of marriage maan was determined he wanted geet and his baby in his life geet couldn't bear to see another woman in maan life both teasing each other finally the tension lifted between them and geet agreed to marry him maan officially ask geet hand making her his fiance
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Posted: 6 years ago
Soph
Why u have to update 2 parts when I am off
U remember I am yet to write second part right (I didn't get any pm I may get my revenge a bit here)
Anita finally paid a visit to geet
Geet was dressed to impress her how much ever she looking beautiful maan don't want to change her
Maan bro are funny and his mom fears gossip ufff
No wonder maan ran away
Anita was impressed with geet he he he marriage



Omg OMG
Maan proposed Geet
Geet agreed
He gave her ring
Which he never gave to Sasha Ho ho
If Dev pops up will Sasha pops up too kya!?
I want literally bashing of Dev
Will b waiting


Ps:u didn't send me PM
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Posted: 6 years ago
Lovely Update Sophie👏..
Geet and Maan both are so sensible and understanding towards each other
Geet was so tensed after what his mother said about marriage but Maan took that in totally unexpected way
He proposed her t marry him.. Though Baby was the main concern for him but he had fallen for Geet too..He could not let go a girl like her..
Though he was little bit tensed for her reaction to his proposal..But I liked the way he proposed her.. they were not lover yet they were the parnets pf their baby even without knowing eachother..But his thoughts were wisely explained thus way their both families would not feel weird oe heart broken after knowing the truth of the baby..He was really very impressive for me.. His word were showing his honesty and sincerity towards Geet..He wasn't marrying her just because of baby but his words made Geet and me that he truly loved her..And Geet too gracefully accepted his proposal..OMG
Maan was having the engagement ring prepared in advance..That soo cool..
Now waiting for next
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thank you for liking and commenting😊, it means alot. You'd probably be able to tell from the next part that we are nearly coming to an end, yippee😃

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Chapter 20

'Weddings date fixed' Maan announced walking into the living room, Geet gasped at the speed of it all; just 2 days ago they got engaged, the following morning she told Sameera and Rana who were shocked but in a pleasant kind of way. Then Maan called her father to officiate the wedding proceedings, and then the pair heard nothing, apparently the elders would deal with the matter, all she and Maan had to do was attend their wedding, or so was imbued by Anita.

'Maid of honour sounds good' Sam carelessly dropped in unmindful of Geet's panicky breaths

'Best man here' Adi added kissing her cheek to which Maan raised an unpleasant brow, things were moving too fast in their lives. Yes Geet and him were engaged yet Sam and Adi were the more apparent couple.

'Isn't that too quick' Geet asked looking down at her protracting belly, the delivery date and the wedding date might as well clash with the way their family were going. 'I don't want to be a fat bride' she cried next, Maan immediately threw away the cordless phone onto the coffee table and sat beside her, running a comforting hand down her back. 'You'll still be beautiful' he encouraged smiling delicately as she sniffed looking at him with pleading eyes, 'Ok whatever you say goes' he instantly threw in the towel giving up just so she could smile and she did while Sam moaned 'Gosh woman you know how to spoil my plans'. That was when they all heard a loud KNOCK, jumping them up.

KNOCK KNCOK THUMP THUMP

The door was violently kicked and pushed alerting all four, Maan was the first to get up and warn Geet not to get out, he then walked out the room with Adi following, soon screams were heard 'GEET' the familiar voice called; 'Geet I know you're in there' he shouted again in despair.

'Please Geet, I was wrong to use you but I'm sorry. I love you' he screamed amidst the violent pushing

'Get lost' Maan breathed calmly though the look of the angry man before him was infuriating; 'Who the hell are you and where's my Geet?' he spoke with attitude and an evil grin appeared soon enough seeing how Geet wobbled into the hallway

'Geet baby' he called softly forwarding his hand for her to take, Maan looked over his shoulder with an angry glare telling her straight that he was annoyed with her entrance, 'I thought I told you to stay put' he voiced next, his hands running through his thick hair in agitation but soon relaxed seeing how Geet pushed closer to his body finding warmth. 'I'm sorry' she whispered when his hands curled around her waist on reflex.

'WHAT THE HECK?' they both looked at the appalled man in front, he wore a suit that had several creases as if he'd returned from a tussle, his usual gelled hair stood unidirectional, in total he looked like a mess.

'Dev?' Maan asked looking down at Geet and she nodded firmly looking back at him, both wore dim expressions. Just when they thought Dev wouldn't make a scene, maybe he did indeed have a backbone considering how the case was filed yet no Dev came about. But no he had act out his part, the part of a lying deceiving swindler.

'Geet' Dev started stepping forward with a look of shame but Maan placed a hand out stopping his movement

'I suppose you've received the court orders, Geet would fight till the end for the firm and the apartment. So if there's no more to say, please leave' Maan's voice was soft and controlled as if dealing with an impatient patient irritating Dev all the more

'WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU ARE?' Dev shouted moving closer so the men were toe to toe, with Dev's sudden movement Maan pushed Geet behind him seeing how Dev seemed slightly tipsy

'Geet's fiance' Maan introduced smugly from behind Geet lay on his back, her hands circling around his waist as her face popped over his shoulder time and again looking at the past that deceived her once

'YOU ... is this some kind of joke?' Dev stammered before directing his gaze to Geet who smiled happily looking unfazed by the drama

'Well you must know that she's pregnant with my baby then' Dev tried fooling, though Maan spoke none however he looked disturbed pleasing Dev, he assumed the nail hit the coffin, soon Geet would be back with him and again he'd scam off her like in the past.

'No Dev you've got it wrong, you can't be the father; remember you got a vasectomy done so I can't mother you're child. Well I'm happy you did that, actually I should thank you, had it not been for the sperm donation, I would have never met my fianc, Maan, who is also the ACTUAL father of our baby' Geet spoke clearly looking at Maan when she repeated 'OUR' for like the hundredth time, in an instant Maan's angry vibes dissipated and he smiled despite the lurking shadow.

'Now get out of my property before I call the police' these words hit Dev more than the previous words because he immediately slurred into vicious name calling; screaming and shouting out Geet's infinity which finally broke Maan's control and out came a punch right to the fouled Dev's nose, then another across the other cheek throwing him off balance.

'Maan' Geet screamed stopping his violent streak, Adi too stepped in clutching onto him so he couldn't move forward and hit Dev again. Soon after sirens could be heard, two police officers stepped out the car and looked at the scene; Geet holding onto Maan, Adi beside him, Sameera on the phone and Dev on the floor, hurt.

'Officers I called you' Sameera ran forward and immediately explained the behaviour, an abusive ex misbehaving under the effects of alcohol. Since all four stories matched, and Dev failed the alcohol test, he was immediately handcuffed and taken away in a police vehicle. When the vehicle exited the street, the four went back into the house looking somewhat normal as if Dev hadn't just stepped into their perfect life and caused a fiasco. Although Maan's brow was scrunched in annoyance and Geet's hands were balled in tension..

'When do you guys leave then for your sister's wedding?' Sameera asked handing out glasses of water, she smiled at Maan knowingly as if hinting the change of conversation to help elevate the distress written clearly on Geet's face. 'Tonight, we need to pack Geet' Maan added ushering Geet upstairs, Natasha's wedding was in a week and the Sangeet ceremony was to officially start from tomorrow. So Anita had finally forced her way into them accepting to stay with the Khuranna's for one and a half week's, in between Geet's parents would arrive, probably during that time the elders had arranged the wedding date but of course Maan's wasn't going to be bullied into marrying if Geet wasn't happy, instead he'd wait until the baby was born next month and then slowly settle for a date.

'Maan shall we have a court marriage on the arranged date and then afterwards have a proper wedding with reception and all' Geet asked as they walked up the stairs hand in hand, he hadn't said anything but smiled in agreement.

Edited by Twenty1st - 6 years ago


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Posted: 6 years ago
Updated, sorry guys im in a rush ATM so will return and sort our the than you message and the page numberings etc
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Posted: 6 years ago
Well, I am the first one to comment today...
and I must say it feels great...
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Will wait till you return and sort this as per your wish and then read and comment...
for now, I am just glad you updated...
Edited by sahibasharma - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

Well, I am the first one to comment today...

and I must say it feels great...


You're on a spree lol
2nd first comment in a row👏😃
Thank you lol

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