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hi how you... I am so happy... thanks... you made my day! 😃


Glad that I could make you happy...

I am well, what about you?? Missed you so much...
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Chapter 5 : In His Arms



Geet's smile expunged in vapor witnessing such a livid Maan. She didn't really understand what was happening or why Maan voluntarily dragging her with him!! So she wriggled a little, stopping Maan exactly at the center while Aayan was coming towards them with an apologetic expression.

Just as she was about to open her mouth she noticed an unknown pretty lady stopped Aayan and whispered something inside his ears!! Geet didn't pay much heed until Aayan's expression changed drastically!

The most interesting thing is when Maan followed Geet's gaze and noticed that lady!! More than Aayan, Maan's face went pale!! All white!! And that was vividly noticed by an intoxicated yet curious Geet!!

Both of them saw that lady dragging Aayan's hand and taking him to some other corner, Aayan also seems to hurriedly follow that female and they soon vanished outside the party hall!!

Sweat was forming up on Maan's forehead...

Why is he so tensed all of a sudden??

Scrunching her eyebrows Geet was observing Maan and thought to question him after giving much thought to this!!

"Maaan!! Due to heavy music, she had to shout but that didn't work so a curious Geet tapped her index finger at Maan's shoulder!!

"Haannh?? She marked Maan getting startled tremendously and even when looking at her there is nervousness playing inside his eyes!!

"Woh ladki kaun thi?? Kyun... Aayan ko aiss...Aise leke gayi bahar?? Aur aapko kiya huwa hain?? Her eyebrows furrowed amidst the sudden confusion!!

"Umm...Woh kuch nahin... Maan evaded her query without a blink!!

"Why are you dodging my questions?? Do you know her?? Who is she?? And why did you hit that creepo... But she too is tactful and showered him with direct questions!!

"Geet...Ye sawal tumhe Aayan se puchna chahiye...Tum bhi wahi ho main jaha hoon, so mujhe kaise pata hoga?? He sounded quite cold and dusty!!

"Aapne meri glass bhi le liya...Mujhe abhi...chahiye... drink...Aur uff aapka gussa kitna darawani hain... She said something more but he couldn't hear due to the loudness taking lead, "Kiyaaa??? Can't hear it...You need what??? water?? As he screamed offering his ears towards her, an innocent Geet neared even closer, increasing his body heat!!

All his anger, irritation, apprehension melted away immediately. But when and how??? What is this girl doing to him exactly!!! When did he enjoy someone's company that much??

Grabbing Maan's biceps Geet moved her lips near his earlobes, "I wanna eat stars...Bhukh lagi hain...Yahan se...Nikal na hain... Maan felt every bit of tingle she caused!!

"Kiya khana hain??? Turning his head he gawked at the tipsy Geet thinking he might have misheard and she flashed her pearls gesturing him towards the roof, "Stars...Woh dekho na...Upar...So bright...So yummy...Mom ne cook ki hain...woh bhi toh stars ke sath rehti hain naa... Those disco balls were definitely not stars. And that cursed spotlight flashed exactly on them!!!!!

"Oh, God... Maan chuckled at her plight while she cutely mumbled in his ears, "God nahin Geet...Abhi dooo naa...Mujhe bhukh lag rahi hain...Aur kitna garmi bhi...
Main ye utar doon... His eyes widened with shock as she literally started pulling her outfit!! Please don't start striping now!!!

"Jala mujhe rahi ho aur tumhe garmi lag rahi hain...Kiya karoon main iss pagal ladki ka...Pata nahin maa kaha hain...I need to take Geet somewhere safe before she is fully out of her wits...Adhe ghante mein meri jo halat ki hain iske baad main khud girne lagunga!!! His eyes wandered everywhere desperately as the irritation due to the spotlight being of them increased.

And there, that crazy cuteness was searching for buttons on her outfit near her bosom. Gathering some courage a shy Maan slapped her hands and placed them back on his shoulder.

Marking all her madness Maan closed his eyes briefly and then obstructing Geet's drunk movements, he lifted her up in the air at the excuse of dance and tried to find for a quick exit before the effects of intoxicants intensify with time.

As they were headed outside both Maaneet saw Aayan was rushing back inside in search of someone, horror was playing inside his face!!

Why won't that be?? His whole world just turned upside down now with the recent disclosure!! He has to talk with Savitri now!! Only she can solve this whole thing!!

There she is!! With a huge sigh of relief, Aayan paced his feet and reached the second floor to his grandmother!!

"Daadi maa...Mujhe aapse abhi isiwaqt bohot jaroori baat karni hain...Daadaji srif aap dono ke sunege... The urgency inside Aayan's voice startled Savitri a little, "Aayan...Beta...Kiya huwa?? Itna haanf kyun rahe ho...Areh huwa kiya hain?? That soft smile was soon wiped off from Savitri's face by Aayan's desperate hold on her wrist!!

"Aap abhi mere saath chaliye please... Talking in a blazing speed Aayan literally dragged a stunned Savitri with him, "Maa aur Choti Maa...Aap bhi... He took the ladies with him and they disappeared outside!!

Strangely, Maaneet who were observing everything in silence could understand the significance of that moment when the sangeet got wrapped by the nervous announcement by Savitri followed by all the family members of Khurana's and Mohindar were being called for an important meeting at the Khurana Mansion!!

"Maa aap kyun mujhe aise bar bar mafi mangke sharminda kar rahi hain...Aagar itni hi koi complicated wajah hain toh mujhe janna bhi nahin...Par agar Geet se koi galti ho gayi hain toh I am sorry...Bin maa ki bacchi hain naa...Aur shayad aaj usne galti se drink peeli hain, aur isilye thoda zayada dance kar liya warna woh waisi nahin hain...Kiya kisi guest ne kuch kaha hain?? Maan beta ji ne toh acche se mamla sambhal bhi liya...After a string of seeking forgiveness Savitri was still out of words as in how to divulge!!

"Beta..Geet se koi shikayat nahin hain humko...Galati Aayan se huwi hain...Aur humse bhi...
Aaj sangeet mein ek nahin do cheeze saaf ho gayi hain...
Humein Maan ko chunna chahiye tha Geet ke liye...uski ek nahin sunna chahiye tha!! Savitri felt her blood pressure can't rise any further!!

"Shant ho jaiye Maa...Abhi bhi cheezy bigda nahin hain...
Aur Veerji, Aapki koi galti hain aisa soch bhi kaise saktey hain aap .. Darasal...huwa yun, aap toh jante hain ye bacche kaise nadan hote hain...Inse nadani aur galtiya toh hoti rehti hain..." Madhurima paused a little while arranging her words and escaping a quick gaze at the silent Preetika(Aayan's mother).

"Ek saal pehle, Aayan ne bataya woh shaadi karna chahta hain...
Sheela se..Aayan ki college se dost hain, humne socha dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hain toh jald se jald shaadi karwa dete hain...Shaadi tay hone hi wali thi par beech mein thodi si misunderstanding ho gayi thi...Aur Unka rishta tut gaya...
Hum sab toh jaante hi hain aajkal ki generation ki bacche decision breakfast se bhi jaldi karte hain... Impulsive decision lene mein toh mahir hain...Aaj break up toh kal sulah...
Toh abhi,,, woh ladki Aayan se mili hain...Uski halat thodi complicated hain...Aab aise mein ye shaadi hoga toh 3 zindegi barbad ho jayegi... Isiliye...

Veer ji... Aap ko gussa karna ho humko kosna ho toh koslo...Gunah ya Galti magar ye huwa hain humse... Madhuri narrated with patience, sounding very tender and warm!!

She doesn't want any chaos for sure!!

As their tensed situation carried forward, there Geet was clinging into Maan's chest as he was taking her towards his car to drop her home!!

"Puru puru...Ye doori kehti hain, paas merr..ee...aa jaa re...Yunhi... She was making awful bizarre sounds and was now fully tipsy to her wits!!

"Maan...!! Sensing him carrying her into his arms Geet moaned his name!!

Though he didn't want to admit yet his entire existence whispered of how he liked the sound of his name forming into her supple lips! His name feels much adorable coming out of Geet's moans!!

Astonishingly enough he craved to hear her again, placing his orbs at her innocent face finally! Not afraid of being burned anymore!!!

She looked much impeccable than the moonlight. Blameless, as she was gazing deeply towards him with a delicate pout.

"Bolo naaa...Maan... He couldn't keep his gaze intact for long as Geet started to affect him more than his own anticipation!

Tucking her inside the vehicle Maan answered, "Hmm?? Kiya? Looking at her innocent yet drowsy eyes!!

"Tussi mainu chad ke naa jao... She was sounding beyond cute!!

"Main yehi hoon...Hum ghar jaa rahe hain... As Maan was petting a wild Geet in order to tame her but making him more smitten she clutched on his right hand which was caressing her tender cheek!!

"Mujhe ghar nahinnn janaaa...Mujhe aapke paas rehna hain...Purr puruu...Gana sunao...? Saying so in an intoxicated voice Geet dragged Maan closer to her, gazing at him with her dilated pupils!

"Areh woh dekho suraj...Haww...Aaj kha ke nahin nikla naa ye suraj!! He followed her gaze to find out the pale sun she was talking about, "Kiyaah!!

"Haan dekho na kaisa tim tim kar raha hain...Unhealthy sun!! Phik phik phik... She smiled endearingly!!

Is that more offending to the moon or the sun, he wondered with his lips curved as well!!

"Geet...Haan dekho bahar...chand kaha hain mujhe dhoond ke batao?? Seeking this opportunity he tucked her in the seatbelt, "Main seat belt nahin... She threw her hands like a stubborn child as Maan patted her head lovingly, "Ssshhh... And he started driving while she was leaning on him, playing with his shirt's sleeve!!

"Maan...Mujhse kitna percent nafrat hain aapko?? Suddenly her random question popped, startling him inevitably!! He stopped the car sideways and looked back at her hair falling on his chest.

"Geet.. After staring at her innocent beautiful face Maan touched her chin, made her look at him, "Tum itni pyaari ho...Koi tumse nafrat kyun karega?? Hmm?? Zara bhi nahin hain...Chalo abhi sone ki kaushish karo... He was consoling her like a fragile child but meant each of his words!!

"Chal feku...jhootey...Isliye shaadi se inkar kiya tha na?? Aur mujhe uss joker ke throat pe infection... And the bomb was dropped, guilt overwhelmed Maan all over again!!

"I am sorry...I am really sorry about that!! Actually, just because of my profession I got a bit apprehensive... He had no faintest of an idea if even inadvertently this rejection matter has made her upset. She must never think there is any problem with her!!!

"Kiya...Profession...CA ke toh chal hi alag hain...Tabhi itna sadu ho naa aap... Maan noticed how adorable her pout is!!

Each of her expressions is filled with so much innocence it just amazed him how there is a whole another persona behind her headstrong nature!!

"CA?!! As he was about to say something, Geet shook his arm softly, "Mujhe bhookh lagi hain...

"Kiyah?? His expression was too priceless as Geet laughed loudly, "Aap na sachi mein Dhakkan ho...My...Tummy hurting... Can't you hear the gud gud...Aise mein neend kaise aati hain... She indicated towards her stomach in the cutest way he witnessed, "Umm...Just 5 minutes aur, samne hi ek restaurant hain... His face was beaming in a full heartfelt smile by then but that cute kid in Geet got all grumpy, "Mainu restaurant da khana ni khana...Mainu golgappe...khan..ee hain...Woh bhi roadside...

"Roadside?? Never...Bimar padh jaogi...Phir tumhare papa mujhe marange na... It was hard for him to put his stern voice back!!

"Papa bohot acche hain and he loves you a lottt so kabhi nahin marenge...But you would be all happy happy if I get sick...Since you hate me...woh kiya bulaya tha mujhe?? Haan brat... All of a sudden her chirpiness got shadowed behind the clouds brewing inside her hazels.

"Oops you heard that too...Geet...I am so so sooo sorry...See kaan pakad ke sorry... As her tears started spilling Maan panicked a little, "I don't hate you at all...How do I make you believe that...Please maaf kardo mujhe I might have been a bit off with you earlier...
I will find roadside golgappe for you, please don't cry... He couldn't think anything else rather than apologizing!!!

"Sorry ka spelling...Maan hates me...Mumma hates me... That's why she left me...And my nanny, Sushma...She too left...Everyone hates Geet... Her watery eyes were pricking him insanely as he took her in his warmth, wiping her endless tears!!

"Ssshhh...Never...say that again...And aise nahin rote naa... He understood one more thing that night, there is endless pain buried inside that little girl, "I miss mumma...She doesn't even come to my dreams anymore...I search for her every night...In all my memories...Why mumma...doesn't come back???

And he craved to wipe all her pain away if that's possible!!

"Please don't you leave me like her... Don't stop coming into my dreams like her...I like this dream...It feels so real... She was hugging Maan tightly and whispering endless things which made him feel sad as always guiltiest!!

With hazy eyes he was stroking Geet's face lovingly as she was murmuring and revealing all her heart to him, her eyes were getting heavier with the effects of the drug and slowly slumber was calling her!!

Amidst all the bizarrity were the unspoken confession of a heavy heart which made Maan reconsider a lot of the equation.
Every dynamics he ever knew had to be changed after this. Looking at Geet's innocent sleeping face he reckoned things can't be the same anymore!!!

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Chapter 6 : The First teasing!!





Part 1

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Next day. Evening.

Geet is sitting on her bed with her hand rubbing her head due to that throbbing headache!! She has slept the entire day.

But more than headache her whole world was spinning reminiscing about the conversion she had with Benu!!

Benu is Geet's little detective cousin who just reported everything what happened yesterday night to Geet in an animated way!!

"Phir kiya...Didi tumne tali bajaya, khi khi karke haanse bhi aur kaha...Yee chutti ho gayi.. Chalo Maan Sangeet ka drama khatam...Ghar chalte hain!! Benu's voice echoed in Geet's mind as she curled her toes remembering the rest of it!!!

"Maine aisa kaha?? Tu jhoot keh rahi hain naa??

"Aapko jhut bolke mujhe kiya milega didi? Haan...

"Thik hain, thik hain, drama mat kar...Waise, Waha kaun kaun tha??

"Sab thhey...I mean dono families ke sab thhey..

"Shoots!! Maan ne kiya kiya phir?? Aur maine kuch galat shalat nahin bola na??

"Umm kaise batau...bas uncle ne jab bola tumko ke unke saath chalo toh tumne saaf saaf inkaar kar diya...Bola ke, sab bas Maan bhaiya se tumhe alag karne pe tuley huwe hain...Neend mein bhi chain nahin hain...Aur Maan bhaiya ko dekh ke fus fusa ke kuch bola sunai nahin diya woh...Par sab ek dusre ko ghoor rahe thhey...

"Please say ye sab jhoot bol rahi hain tu...Phir Maan ne kiya kiya?? Zaroor mujhe jhatak diya hoga...Sadu kahika...Waise accha torture kiya hoga kaal usko...hahaha...

"Maan bhaiya ne tumhare mathe pe bohot pyaar se haat ghumaya, tumhe chup karaya jaise baccho mummy papa ke paas jaake chup ho jaate hain waise..Phir unhone sabko kaha ke tumhari tabiyet bigad rahi hain...

"Impossible...Maan ne sabke saamne aisa kiya??? Aur woh itney pyaar se baat karega mujhse ke main chup ho jau??
Ho hi nahin sakta aisa.. Nope...Tu jhoot bol rahi hain
Aur usne mere balo ko chua bhi kaise omg...mill jaye ekbaar mujhe wo..!!

"Kisi se bhi puch lo hamare ghar ke...Baas kuch hi log thhey aur sab ek dusre ko ghoor rahe thhey isiliye toh mujhe ye pakka yaad hain didi...
Aur baal kaunsi badi baat hain, tum toh unke paas hi thi naa...Tumne bhi toh unki shirt pakad ke rakha tha...

"Haye rabba aab main un logo ke samne kaise jaungi...
Babaji aab woh attitude ki dukan toh aur bhao khayega...Geet you stupid stupid girl what did you do!!!...I should slap myself..Bad girl...Aab mera kiya hoga...Huhuhu..!! aur woh Aayan mujhe dekh ke aur khi khi karke hasega!!!

"Didi par mujhe samajh nahin aata tumhari shaadi Aayan jijaji se kyun ho rahi hain...

"Woh toh mujhe bhi nahin pata Benu...Papa na andhe ho gaye hain...

"Nahin mera matlab tha ke Maan bhaiya se hoti tumhari shaadi toh kitna cute dikhte...Kaal tum dono sath mein bohot ache lag rahe thhey...Ekdum filmy couples ke tarha!!! One pair!!

"Baas baas...Tu hain itni si tujhe couples ke bare mein kiya pata...Aab aage ka bata...Aur kiya kiya siyappa ki hain maine??"

"Aur toh kuch khas yaad nahin aa raha...Sab waise hi tension mein thhey aur udhar tum chor nahin rahi thi Maan bhaiya ko so Madhu aunty ne kaha ki tumhe ghar pe le jaye...Aur Maan bhaiya tumhe leke chale gaye...Phir baado ke beech khub sari batein aur discussion huwi!!

"Then how come they decided to take this marriage forward with Aayan?? I am not going to marry him!!

"Par Daarji ne vachan diya hain naa senior Khurana ji ko...Shaadi toh khurana khandan mein hi hogi...Aayan nahin toh aur sahi...Bohot bada khandan hain na...

"Woh sab mujhe nahin pata..Jisne vachan diya woh samjhe...main in sab mein bali ka bakhra nahin banungi...
Mere drinks spike kiss child kuttey ne ki hain..Woh pata chala hain??

"Aayan Jiju ke dost ne ki hain.. Sagar..

"Ek rakh ke chaped doongi agar uss chuhey ko jiju wiju kaha tuney...
Aur ye mujhe thoda thoda yaad aa raha hain, tu sach keh rahi thi... par Maan achanak itna acche se baat kyun kar raha hain mujhse any idea??

"Sorry didi...Nahin maloom..

"Kiya yaar...Kaisi jasoos hain tu?? Adhi batein maloom nahin tereko...Khair...Abhi jaa aur dekh bade log kaun sa naya sazish rach rahe hain...

"Ji didi...

"Sunn...Kisiko kano kaan khabar...

"Nahin hogi didi...Mujhe aapke haat se keema thodi banna hain!!!

"Phew!! Aab kisi bhi tarha koi naya plan dhoondna padega...Ye Sheela wali plan flop ho gaya uss Aayan ke dost ke wajah se...Warna agar main hosh mein hoti toh aisi scene create karti..Hayyee kiya kiya soch ke rakha tha...Sara plan choupat hi gaya...Upar se Meri aisi shahi wali beizzati huwi woh alag...Chorungi nahin uss kamine ko...Sagar beta tujhe agar nadi nahin...Gandi nali na banaya naa main bhi Geet nahin...Phir kabhi kisi ki drink spike nahin karneki sochoge!..Kaise kaise nikamme log hain duniya mein!!! She was talking to herself, reflecting on her futi kismat(misfortune) and all the mishaps then her phone caught her attention!!

She received the call with a frown!!

"Hello..

"Hello Geet...Umm..Finally...Uth gayi?? A soft mellow voice came forward!!

"Who is this?? Geet rechecked the number on her display!!

"Ermm...I am... Maan...? That voice hesitated a little as Geet answered in an absent mind, "Hmm..Maan...

And she shouted with realization when his voice did match, "Kiyaaahh...Tum mujhe call kar rahe ho?? Oh emm Gee...Mere toh bhag khul gaye Mr. Attitude... Her teasing initiated while Maan was at loss of words,
"Ammm..Haan...I mean... Ye kiya keh rahi ho...Waise tumhari tabiyet theek hain naa??.

"Oh hello shaadi off hain pata hain naa...So tehzeeb se baat kijiye janab...Main kiya aapki chachi mausi lagti hoon jo aap mujhse meri tabiyet ka haal puch rahe hain...Mera number kisne diya...Waise bhi Aayan ne jo kiya hain iske baad toh...

"Tehzeeb!!! Hmm??? Maan raised his eyebrows and smirked devilishly, "Fine!! Isi bahane kash aap bhi kuch sikh jaaye...

"Aap sikhaiye na Maan ji... aap ne toh maharat payi huwi hain naa...

"Oh,So you are admitting that aap mein tehzeeb nahin hain...

"Did you call me for all this crap Maan??? Then bye!!

"Hey hey... Phone mat rakho...Geet... I mean Please...

"Point pe aao...Phone kyun kiya hain?? She tapped her restless fingers!!

After last night can't afford to give any chance where Mr attitude can make a joke out of her!! She'll just pretend she doesn't remember a thing!! Which is true as well!!!

"Baas janna tha ke aap kaisi hain aab...Sirdard toh nahin hain?? But there he was, immensely enjoying teasing her with all his 'tehzeeb/mannerisms'!!

"Haan hain sirdard...Maan Singh Khurana naam hain uska...Aab??

Good Geet...keep showing attitude!! Jhukna maat!!!

"Aab matlab?

"Aab sirdard kaise dur karoge??

Ye dekho bolti bandh janab ki!!!

"Jaise aap chaho..Bas kehke toh dekhiye ji... Geet wanted to throw him off some balcony or cliff or something when that emphasis on 'ji' hit her!!

"Chullu bhar pani mein doob jao..Main hi mili hoon bakwas ke liye?

"Sorry can't drown...Phone kharab ho jayega phir baat kaise hoga aapse...Geet ji?? Not again!!!

Iss ji ki bacche ko toh...

"Oye hello...Mujhse baat karne ki kiya afat aan padi aapko Maan ji?? Now time for some mockery!!

"Kaise naa baat kare aapse? Aapne kaal jo kiya..Ufff...Uske baad toh meri neend chain sab aapke sahare pe hain!!! And this was the moment when you spit the water out hearing the impossible outlandish stuff!!

"Kiyyaahh!! Oye...Kaun ho tum?? Kaun ye Maan ke naam pe mere saath prank kar raha hain?? Police mein de doongi bata rahi hoon par usse pehle naa kisi cliff se fek dungi bohot khatarnak hoon hain dubara phone maat karna chalo aab rakho...Bye.. As Geet said in one breath his voice hovered right on the atmosphere,
"Areh areh suniye toh sahi...prank kyun lag raha hain ji aapko?? Main Maan hi hoon...Darwaje pe dekhiye...Aur jaha fekna hain fek bhi dijiye... Terrified like a deer caught in headlights Geet froze as he was standing there with his arms crossed, smiling nah more like grinning profusely!!

"Whattt the actual fcukkk... Obviously, his eardrums would be welcomed with profanities!!

"Sshhh...Bad words...Aise swear nahin kartey... Raising his right index finger, Maan shook his head while approaching closer as a statued Geet was just gawking at him with her wide-stretched eyes!!

"Maann!! Hawww... Tum toh sach mein Maan ho...Tumhe sir pe chot wot lagi hain kiya?? Ye dekho kitney ungli hain?? Batao? The fingers she swirled those were Immediately stagnant as Maan forwarded the glass he had in his hand, "Yes yes. You will be a good doc...But Jeez Geet..Stop it...
Ye nimbu pani jald se jald khatam karo...Aur golgappe bhi leke aaya hoon... She didn't look directly at Maan as her radar already informed how handsome he must be looking!! And that is unacceptable!!

"That's it...Geet tu kamli ho gayi hain... Touching both her cheeks she sat flat on the bed, "All this is hallucination...Pata nahin uss sagar ke bacche ne kaun si sasti narcotic milaya hoga jiska shayad side effect... He tittered hearing her mumblings and then projected a straight face, "Geet...Stop overreacting and have the lemonade...

"Nahin..pehle...Sach sach batao...Maan ka judwa bhai bai hain kiya?? Now she had to look at him in the excuse of inspecting!!


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Chapter 6 : The First teasing!!




Part 2


"Nahin..pehle...Sach sach batao...Maan ka judwa bhai bai hain kiya?? Now she had to look at him in the excuse of inspecting!!

"Geettt!! Instantly she heard his growl, eyes firing up in impatience!

"Parrr...par Aap toh mujhe bilkul pasand nahin kartey hain..Phir?? Sidhe mu baat bhi nahin karte thhey?? Jaha main hoti thi bhag jaate thhey.. Aur...Aab full on flirting chalu hain... As she was counting all the new highlights on her fingers, Maan patiently watched all her cute antics, "Upar se aapki boring personality mein ye 360 turn woh alag se.. Pata toh hain naa meri shaadi abhi tak Aayan se hi fixed hain?? Ya phir ye koi naya khandani riwaaz hain Khurana's ke, hone wali bhabhi ke sath prank karne ka??
Wait...Aapko flirting aati bhi kaise hain...Maine aapko bohot kam bolte huwe suna hain!!! The captivation of Geet's hazel lamps did its wonder and Maan abruptly put his long index finger on her moving petals, "Ssshhh...Kitna bolti ho tum...I don't flirt..
But if this is flirting then You will witness plenty...in upcoming days...I guess??? This must be his husky voice, damn it tickles right inside the belly!!

Geet, who was silent and almost melted by his proximity finally gathered her lost senses followed by running her mouth in full speed as he removed his finger from her lips, "Chi chi...Toh ye hain tumhari asliyat haan...Dekhte itne bhole types ho aur aise bhabis ke sath gandi gandi baatein karte ho...Bechari Madhu aunty...Kitni acchi acche baatein karti thi woh tumhare bare mein...Aur tum aise nikle...Kitna garv tha aunty ko...

"Gandi batein?? Maan's puzzled voice intruded in, "Excuse me!!! Ye tum mujhe chabi mar rahi ho kiya jhuta ilzam laga ke?? He took one more step forward while Geet gulped hard stammering, "P..ii..peeche jao...aur main aisa kyun karungi haan??

"Woh mujhe kiya Pata...Shayad tum chahti ho gandi batein karna...Ladkia hamesha aise reverse psychology hi toh apnati hain... He put his hands on his hips, intimidiating her a little!!

"Mujhe aisi waisi samajh rakha hain kiya...Aur kaha na peeche jao... This time she took one step forward instead, showing she is not scared!!

"Dekha??? Tum pehle decide karlo chahti kiya ho...Kabhi kehti ho peeche jao kabhi kehti toh kareeb aao..." Maan danced his fingers in front of her pouty face, "Kabhi tumhe shikayet hain ke main kaise bat kar raha hoon tumse. Phir acche se baat karo toh bologi flirting. Lekin chahiye tumko dirty talks...

Abhi decide karlo kareeb aaun ke peeche jaun!!! Aur kisne kaha main pasand nahin karta tumhe?? Maan did his best to push her in dilemma but she already seemed deeply engrossed in recollecting something!!

He was even admiring her pondering face in his head!!! Teasing her is becoming a bigger tease for himself!!

"Haanhhh... She snapped her fingers and Maan projected an amused expression, "MPD... Multiple personality disorder...Yehi hain... Hearing his teasing Geet's mouth went wide open again, "Aapni baat kar rahi ho?? Perfectly suits you... Soon she realized how close they were standing, "Aa..Aap aise ka..kareeb nahin aa saktey kisi ladki ke..I mean aapki hone wali bhabi ke...

"Tum kisi ladki' thodi na ho...Aapni hone wali biwi pe itna haq toh hain hi mera... His smirk burned her and the airhead in her eventually missed the 'hone wali biwi' part and only concentrated on answering him quick, "Kiyyaa...Ek minute...Aab toh confirmed hain..Main ek bohot acche doc ko jaanti hoon, let me call h... This time Maan directly grabbed her petite waist and made her crash against his hard chest, "Sshhh...Listen to me carefully... And that was a bad idea as her flowery fragrance annihilated him mercilessly!!!

She shuddered with his soft touch on her both cheeks while he continued in a loving yet enigmatic tone, "I am going back to pune...2 din ke liye...I know we need time to know each other but once am back I will make it up to you...Please khayal rakhna aapna..Mom kehti hain tum bilkul aapna dhayan nahin rakhti...
Aur abhi kuch kha lo..
Tumhe chodh ke jaane ka mood bilkul nahin hain...But jana padega...Time bohot kam hain na... He sounded a bit shaky at the end!! It was a real tough job to keep himself steady when she is that close to him!!!

"Hainnn?? But that stubborn little thing didn't comprehend a single word he said!!

"Puchogi nahin kyun jaa raha hoon?? Maan didn't even want to blink, He was enjoying all the torment!!

Knowing how his dark browns are fixed at Geet, her beautiful face was becoming red with shyness as she answered with her downgaze, "Nahin!!? That sounded like a question instead!!

"Main transfer lee raha hoon...Aab main yehi rahoonga...!Hesitant yet he eventually ended up touching her long curls which were teasing him from a long period, "Tumhare paas... More he poured his raw emotions inside his voice, more she tried to dodge, "Nahin...Maat raho...Mere paas Aayan hain... Last excuse to not give up!!

"Uske paas Sheela hain...She is pregnant!! He traced his feathery touches on her silky curl for one last time!!

"Ooo... She didn't process timely and when she grasped the meaning that scream was inevitable, "Kiyahhh...You are lyinggg!!! Maan smiled at her wide opened mouth which she covered with her own palms, "Wow my plan worked kaal sheela...I mean...
Oops...Kuch nahin!!!

She is such an animated character!!

"So cute..." Lovingly he pinched the bridge of her nose while shaking his head seeing her ample expression changes, "Don't worry...Shaadi tak I will maintain distance with you...so I hope you won't misunderstand me just as you have in last few days...I can't wait to know everything about you...But whatever I have known consider me a gone case...

We'll be surrounded with a lot people and time is very less so if you find me distant or sadu in your language, please kabhi ye mat samajhna that there is anything else from my side rather than ample love and respect for you, this relationship!!" She got frozen inside his shield as he touched his lips softly on her forehead, increasing the pressure of his lips gradually, "For now iss forehead kiss se kaam chala lo...Till then we will have our clandestine relation...Kinda like yesterday...Hmm...Too much fun!!" And for some endless moments, he silently stayed in that position with his lips lingering on her forehead !!

"Take care sweetheart...Buhbye.. The airhead in her was still in denial who grabbed his shirt to stop him, "Pata nahin ye sab kiya keh rahe ho...Oye main koi extramarital nahin karne tumhare sath Mr. Sadu...Main bohot shareef ladki hoon... And she couldn't speak another word when their eyes met!!

"Aww... Tum pehle kyun nahin mili...Chalo tum Chahti ho toh woh bhi kar lenge... Maan gazed at her fist on his shirt to which she instantly let go, "Aur tumhari sharafat toh maine kaal acche se dekh liye...I mean who kisses like that!! Turning around he showed his back, walking towards her balcony not showing his face!!

"Kisss!!! Where??? Ye kiya Matlab huwa iska... And there she started, first her screams and then strings of mumblings while following him like a kitten, "Hawww...Don't tell me you have stolen my first kiss...haso maat Maan...Dekho I am serious...Did you uthao fayda in my not so sober state??" She touched her own lips in horror and later stared at his which were curved in a mysterious smile, "Maan answer me...
Oh no...I need to check myself...Kahin woh...chi chi babaji... With confusion and amusement, Maan saw she looked up at the ceiling, slapping her own cheeks lightly!!

"Majak kar raha hoon...My god, you have such an imagination...
And no, our first kiss... won't be stolen... The more he sees her liveliness, all his inhibitions just vanishes away hence gather a little courage he did utter the words he would never imagine himself being able to say, "It will be special just like our wedding night...And all the upcoming new moments...With that she saw him going outside, leaving her in a pool of confusion!!

"Wedding?? Kiski shaadi? Ye kiya kehke gaya?? I am so confused...If this is a joke then what kind of sick joke is this?? Aarrghhh he infuriates me so much!!
Omg Was he blushing as well??? Do guys blush too??? She murmured to herself being annoyed and perplexed at the same time, still looking at the open hallway where he disappeared flashing his 1000watt grin!!!

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PRECAP : "Sach batao...Ye kiya naya game hain?? Maan was pinned down to the wall while that sharp edge of the knife was a few centimeters away from his throat as Geet was pressing her right hand on his collarbone!!

"Umm...Aise pagalpan nahin kartey...Neechey rakhdo chot laag jayegi tumhe..." And there was a war scene started where Geet was scrutinizing Maan without blinking and he was trying to get a good hold on both her hand and waist, "Areh aise kiya dekh rahi ho...Haan tumko hi lagegi chot...Main toh fisal ke nikal jaunga...
And ye ye surgical knife hain kiya? Omg!!
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Nice updates..
Thank you for pm..
Waiting for next update..
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welcome back... thanks for updating!

Chapter 4

excellent VM!!

tremendous update! wonderfully written!

looks like Maan is attracted to Geet! like that Maan is there for Geet! he is a wonderful person!

she indeed tests his control!

Poor Maan has a tough time controlling Geet! Gosh she demands a kiss!

adore Maan's thoughts!

why is Aayan not worried about Geet?

Geet was right that Maan is a sadu!

hmm Geet is also attracted to Maan!

feeling for Maan! glad that Maan does not trust Aayan!

Aayan gave Geet drinks again!! Maan's anger is justified! Aayan's friends were wrong!

Sagar is disgusting!

glad that Maan hit Sagar! he deserved it!

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Chapter 5

beautiful gif!

superb update! excellently written!

can understand Geet's confusion! why did Maan's face turn pale seeing that lady? who is that lady with Aayan?

Geet's curiosity was reasonable! at least she was determined to know that lady is? Maan tells her to ask Aayan!

Sagar is defn a creepo! is that lady Aayan's gf?

hated that Maan was a bit rude to Geet!

Liked that Maan can do anything for Geet!

I agree with that he needs to take Geet somewhere safe!

glad that he managed to handle Geet!

so that girl was engaged to Aayan!

Geet is really out of control! not surprised that Maan is admiring her! awesome moments!

Maan cannot see her sad! Geet really emotional!

Maan has fallen in love with Geet!

Edited by khwaishfan - 6 years ago

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