Haraam Adiya FF OS Pt 1, Mature

I had an idea for a fanfiction / short story ever since the Bharat Nagar episodes but was only able to write it now. It's basically a what if story, with 3 what ifs':

1. What if Adi converted to Islam following Pooja's death to try and control his anger and get structure in his life?

2. What if Yash had allowed Zoya to try getting to know his family and she converted to Hinduism?

3. What if they met after Zoya had been raped? (I consider the situation with Rajveer a sort of almost-rape. Society only really values women in terms of their jisms (the comments Zoya made to Adi towards the end of the show were spot on.

I can never get Indiaforums to format correctly and so have uploaded the story onto a03.

Link here

Further parts to come

Thank you to everyone who commented.

To the lady who PM'd me. Yes. There will be MORE haraam references to come ;)

Hi,

Originally posted by: glorious

Hi,

Hope you have not left the story unfinished.

Pls do continue .😊

Not unfinished. I am planning part 2. Trying to get it just right!

Enjoyed the first part! Please continue

Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

hey i actually had a friend send this to me! and i'm glad you posted on here to...so question...will this be a full on fanfic? or a short story?

its such a heart wrenching topic...and i can't wait to read how aditya will help zoya heal...and if zoya will be able to be intimate with aditya after the trauma...

Hey thanks for the positive feedback. This will be a full fanfic. I tend to write a minimum of 1 thousand words per chapter and so it takes me a while to update my work.

The question re intimacy is a good one. I think they were already quite intimate in part 1 considering what happened to Zoya, and that intimacy will develop slowly with each part.

Originally posted by: SK1509

Not unfinished. I am planning part 2. Trying to get it just right!

I have nearly finished reading the first part and I must say what a story you have put together 👏

It's brilliant! I am loving it 😳

Originally posted by: thelastsuspect

I have nearly finished reading the first part and I must say what a story you have put together 👏

It's brilliant! I am loving it 😳

Thank you. I poured my heart and soul into it