A Cursed Up Love T4 Complete (Extra 1/2) pg 37 14/02 - Page 25

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Posted: 6 years ago



Maaneet's journey from strangers to lovers was wonderful
Curse is replaced by affection n admiration
Beautiful ending of an awesome story
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Posted: 6 years ago



Thanks for this lovely story dear 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago



Will be waiting for extra chapters
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Posted: 6 years ago
soph how about you kill maan with adisease and made rana geet unite
dont blame me
u did ask for suggestios
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Posted: 6 years ago
geet joined uni
wow fashion desining
i love the way maan ran behind her from choosing clothes to making her bag ready
but I DONT AGREE WITH BEST HUSBAND IN ENTIRE WORLD thing
obviously there is another one soph the bestest and goodest
u knew that dont you
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Posted: 6 years ago
b
wow meer works with vicky preciesly maan
maan was j as meer was with vicky but geet wasnt with him
our princess lost intrest in fashion now doing social seems geet was exploring herself
haww i dont like saying this but maan is a bit good in looking after geet
yet i feel geet deserves the best
*snif* *snif*
sam had a baby and baby boy was good
dadi keeps track of sam
hmm soph dont u forget a imp person
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: IMA9167

soph how about you kill maan with adisease and made rana geet unite

dont blame me
u did ask for suggestios



🤣 I didnt ask for suggestions that are potentially dangerous 😆

anyway no disease lol, i like this Maan now
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Sophie thank you for sharing such a beautiful story with us

take your break but do come back



You are welcome Tahir

I wont say i'll not come back because the last time i tried, i only managed to stay away for a few months but hopefully lets see (hope on my side would hopefully be despair on yours lol)
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thank you one and all for COMMENTING and LIKING. Recently, I have grown conscious of the silent readers, something which has started to nag me alot over time; so for the sake of myself I think its best I stay away from writing. I dont like this new me, or the new writer in me who actually becomes frustrated seeing the views shooting up but the response being so desolate. So if i can help it, after Knock Knock I have no palns of writing again becasue opening a blog is too much work (it seems). But i wont say 'Never', because i an a believer of 'Never say never' theory.

Anyway, today marks the end of A Cursed Up Love with the 2 Extra chapters

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Goodbye to this story and the readers the solely read this. it was fun and at times hard to write this, but thank you for the patience and love.

Goodbye 😊
Edited by Twenty1st - 6 years ago
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Extra 1 Adeel/ Sam and Baby Ayan


'Adeel' Sameera whispered tugging at his hand, feeling anxious and nervous.

'Everything would be ok, wouldn't it?' she asked in a small voice looking over at Ayan who slept peacefully in Adeel's arm. He hadn't said anything but looked at the little boy holding firmly onto his thumb with all of his small fingers. It's all my fault' she cried soon after stopping just before the Paediatrician's cabin, he looked at his rending wife and then at the baby boy smiling against his chest.

'Nothing is your fault, we wouldn't have had him hadn't it been for you so don't blame yourself. If there's one to blame then it's me' he said in flat tone, reigning in the pain; the tension; the love into an expressionless face. He hadn't yet learned to wear his face with emotion but just when he was about to turn to his wife again, Ayan smirked in his sleep and Adeel couldn't help smiling down, maybe he would soon learn with his new son.

'He'll be fine' he assured a minute before entering the doctor's cubicle, Sameera held firmly onto his elbow struggling to keep it together. The nanny walked behind with the baby's essentials.

'So how is Ayaan doing?' The doctor asked looking at the couple who he grew in acquaintance in the last 6 months, to which Adeel nodded softly trying to move minimal not wanting his son to wake up and Sameera only signalled fine, words being hard to pronounce

'Well Mr and Mrs Rana we have the result' the doctor announced grapping a thick file, which contained every little detail related to Ayan Rana, from the alcohol overdose when he was still a foetus to the minor surgery when he was 3 weeks, to the more recent ECG scan; it basically contained Ayan's hard facts. While the doctor flipped to the last pages with a concentrated look, Sameera fretted biting her nail and Adeel sat impatiently trying his might not to scream out orders. It took a total 10 minutes in anxious wait before the doctor finally looked up at the nervous couple with an endearing smile.

'Well everything seems well, his organs are developing well. Sensory movements match the expectation of normal 6 month year olds and his weight and height are healthy considering he was premature by 1 and half months' the doctor informed and Sameera broke into a happy whimper, Adeel remained straight faced however a gentle thump stroked the back of Sameera's hand in ease and serene tear afloated in his eyes while looking down at the angel in his lap.

'But' the 3 letter word stopped the tear from descending down his face and halted his beating heart

'It'll be a lie if I say everything is normal, Ayan seems to have heart murmur' the doctor deduced looking between the couple stopping at Sameera who broke into questions, crying more openly.

'There's nothing to worry about Mrs Rana, heart murmur isn't a condition to worry about. The normal heart makes a lup-dup sound however Ayan's makes a swooshing sound, technically not something to worry about as patient tend to outgrow the condition. By adolescent he should be normal as other individuals however we would prefer to keep a close eye since I know Mr Rana would prefer that and for general medical awareness' the doctor informed further, breaking down the medical condition so the worried parent's would understand.

'It's really nothing to worry about' Sameera asked, tears catching at the end of her lash and her eyes carrying a new hope, Adeel remained straight and upright as usual.

'Yeah nothing to worry about' the doctor assured with a gentle smaile

'We would look for secondary opinion' Adeel ended getting up and looked at the doctor in genuine gratefulness, he then held onto Ayan and Sameera and escorted them out; the nanny followed closely behind knowing fully well she was unrequired and paid for doing nothing really, since Ayan was born Adeel personally handled everything related to his son and wife however he was inexperienced hence the nanny was there for advice and guidance.

'Dadima everything's fine, he is absolutely healthy' Sameera breathed resting onto Adeel's shoulder, he then heard her speak further but all his attention was on his little son still sleeping on his chest, in between he'd stretch his hands but eventually his little fingers looked for his thump and Adeel would happily follow his hand and place it close enough so the Ayan could easily catch it with a smile.


Edited by Twenty1st - 6 years ago


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