Akshan os dance pe chance last shot update (31st december)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hii Friends this os is dedicated to yashi
Akshat jindal famous dancer of indore he won many award and many reality shows
He always do stage shows the money he get from it he give half of the money in orphanage

One day he get a invitation that a big reality show going to held in mumbai and if he win he will get a huge money he thought to participate in it but the he required a dance partner as the the show is couple dance show akshat then went to mumbai he thought to search for a dance partner

In Mumbai he meat his college friend rohit both went to cafe talk with each other when akshat told him about his problem he said he have a solution

Rohit said that his sister is also a dancer and she also searching for a partner to participate in the show

Next day akshat is waiting in his hotel room just then he heard knock in the door he open it he literally got lost in the beauty standing next to rohit he welcome them rohit introduce akshat to his sister

Akshat ask her name she said guddan akshat once again get lost in her sweet voice both shook hand

After that both start to rehears with each other akshat always went to rohit house to practice he never call her to his hotel as people will take it wrong

Both start to fall for each other but fearing their friendship will broke

It is final of the show akshat thought to propose guddan after the performance

They win the show suddenly the light get off when it comes guddan was not their all start to search for her but no one find her

Akshat get more worried not seeing her their

To be continued...
Yashi hope you will like it next part jaldi update kardungi
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow Akshan as dancers
Something different...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Interesting concept Sanvi 😳
Can't wait to read more 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you all for your response
And sorry update abhi 2 din baad hi milega

Main 2 din ke liye study tour ja rahi hoon


So yashi and all thoda sabar kijiye ga
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Last shot

Everyone got shocked seeing guddan missing all start to search but no one find her on the auditorium akshat and rohit are very tensed they went to rohit's home thought may she went to home

But their parents say she didn't come without wasting time akshat rohit and rohit's father bhusan ji went to search guddan

After 5 hours of search when they don't find her akshat said they should inform police but bhusan ji said police will not take missing compliant before 24 hours akshat said not to worry he will handle everything

He immediately call the mumbai police commissioner as he is very famous personality commissioner immediately get ready to help him akshat disconnect the phone and told the same to bhusan and rohit

Rohit then thank akshat for his help akshat said not to thank him and confess his love for guddan's bhushan rohit are happy guddan can't get any better person than akshat both hug him just then police arrived then all went to search guddan

It has been 2 days since guddan missing akshat was with the police in the search he can't take rest when his lady love is not safe akshat was in guddan's house rohit and he are discussing who could do it if it is a kidnapping till now no one call for money just then someone through stone inside the house

Rohit took the stone a paper wrapped around it he took the paper and start to read he literally start to shivering in fear akshat take the letter and start to read it

The letter says my would be in laws don't panic your daughter is with her would be hubby as I promise she will be mine

Akshat throw the letter in anger he saw the gupta family was crying akshat ask them if they know who it be rohit say yes and then blame themselves for their carelessness to forget the person who is behind all this

Akshat said rohit to tell him who is it then rohit start to narrat him about the reason guddan's kidnapping

Flash back

Gupta family's home town is shimla bhushan ji was a government officer his wife kaushalya was a house wife his elder son rohit was doing Engineering his daughter guddan is in her junior college

They are leaving happily as guddan is crazy about dance they get her admission in a dance class their she meat perv kapoor her dance teacher perv was attracted to guddan he even propose her but guddan denied she said she want to be a famous dancer don't want to get in a relationship

But perv was a psycho he start to stock guddan if she talk with any boy perv start to beat the boys he even went to her home
Start to threat her family to give guddan's hand to him guddan and her family start to leave in fear

To safe guard guddan from perv her family fix her marriage on engagement day perv come and beat the boy to an extent the boy went to coma

After that gupta family shift to mumbai in order to hide guddan from perv

Flash back end

It has been 2 year they thought perv must forget about them but they are wrong he kidnapped guddan akshat then promise to them he will bring back guddan safely

Akshat went from their he start to gather information about perv he got his address from his source it was in pune he reach their akshat meet perv's mother their he lied to her and take perv's number

He gave the number to police they track his number in a area of many close factories they went their search every factory atlast akshat found the place he have only one constable with him so he call rest of the team their he alone went inside and saw perv try to rape guddan

He immediately go their pull perv away from her and beat him perv get unconscious due to akshat's punch guddan stop akshat other wise he would have kill perv

Guddan hug akshat and say from the day he kidnapped her perv continuesly asking her to marry him but she denied so today in anger he try to rape her akshat hug her tightly she snuggle in his chest

Akshat kiss her forehead and say I love you guddan was overwhelmed she also say I love you just then perv get up he took out a gun point towards them and say if guddan can't be his then she can't be any ones before he can shoot them police came their shoot perv he died their (just like dutta scene but perv in place of dutta)

Guddan akshat went from their they then went to guddan's house her family hug her and thank akshat but he said instead of thanks he like to take their daughter all smile guddan blush at this

After one month both got married akshat request gupta family to leave with them they first deny but when akshat say he don't have a family want to leave with them as a family they said yes

All went to indore within a month gupta family settled completely in indore days start to pass akshan's love increase day by day like akshat guddan also become a famous dancer

They open a dance school named as Akshan dance academy poor students are learning their free of cost
After 3 year they blessed with a baby girl they name her as Antara and leave happily ever after
The end
Left leg aage aage, right leg peeche peeche
Aaja yaar lets start ve
Sar ko ghuma le round, pair zara up down
Itni se yeh bath ve
Woh banda ki kya hai, jo naache na gaaye
Aa hathon mein tu haath tham le
Ooye dance pe chance mar le
Oh soniya dance pe chance mar le
Oh baliye dance pe chance mar le
Oh soniya dance pe chance mar le.. heyyy..

Oh soniye... oh soniye...


Hii friends this is my Last update of 2018 will meet you all next year with new stories and fresh chapters of my ff

Yashi ye os tumhe dedicate hai comment karna kaisa laga
Edited by Angelsanvika08 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow Sanvi loved the last part
Both overcame all odds and finally became one 😳

Thanks yaar😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautiful update dear
Loved it

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Posted: 6 years ago
#8
Awesome update
Love the ending
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Good ending .and nice story

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