SS Tujh Sang Bair Lagaya - Laal Ishq Completed!! Thank you note Pg 91

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Posted: 6 years ago

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I'm really sorry abt ur loss & I'm glad ArShi stories helped u 2 overcome ur grief stay strong 4 u & ur kid keep writing GBU

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yizhihenanjing

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Hi dear, sorry for reading the Epilogue late. I have read the epilogue and your thank-you note. Thank you so much for sharing your writing and your personal story with us. I wish you from the bottom of my heart that everything will be all right for you. I have recently read the book "13 things mentally strong people don't do", the author lost her mother and husband unexpectedly but she overcame it, I hope you read this book and stay as strong as her. You are amazing person w beautiful soul, I love your stories and writing style. Keep writing, smiling and living life to the fullest. Wish you all the best and thank you for everything <3

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redpetals123

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: yizhihenanjing
Hi dear, sorry for reading the Epilogue late. I have read the epilogue and your thank-you note. Thank you so much for sharing your writing and your personal story with us. I wish you from the bottom of my heart that everything will be all right for you. I have recently read the book "13 things mentally strong people don't do", the author lost her mother and husband unexpectedly but she overcame it, I hope you read this book and stay as strong as her. You are amazing person w beautiful soul, I love your stories and writing style. Keep writing, smiling and living life to the fullest. Wish you all the best and thank you for everything <3

Thank you so much dear, your comments always motivate me and bring a smile on my face.

Keep reading my stories and give your support always it means a lot to me.

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redpetals123

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Posted: 6 years ago

#454

Hi all please dont let this story close like my other stories... keep reading

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Shilpa

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Posted: 6 years ago

#455

Good concept. It would be good if you have added links instead of page numbers to other chapters

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Shilpa

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: redpetals123
Hi all please dont let this story close like my other stories... keep reading

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Shilpa

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Posted: 6 years ago

#457

Hey

Started reading this story and done with 10 chaps.

The story presentation is good except for one thing. I noticed that you keep bringing this '10 years' age gap stuff almost every scene and it doesn't apt there.

I understand once or twice but is Khushi really a career oriented girl?

When at the age of 18, she can think of career and acheiving many things, how come she has so much hatred towards the marriage when she was promised that she will get what she dreamt of?

My answer to this - I see is - Khushi's major hurdle is the age gap.

Not only Khushi but each and everyone.

Come on yar, if your r 30, it does not mean you can't marry?

The most annoying is Aman's dialogue. He keep bringing that age gap.

Let me read rest

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redpetals123

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: AlwaysHisGirl
Hey
Started reading this story and done with 10 chaps.

The story presentation is good except for one thing. I noticed that you keep bringing this '10 years' age gap stuff almost every scene and it doesn't apt there.

I understand once or twice but is Khushi really a career oriented girl?

When at the age of 18, she can think of career and acheiving many things, how come she has so much hatred towards the marriage when she was promised that she will get what she dreamt of?

My answer to this - I see is - Khushi's major hurdle is the age gap.

Not only Khushi but each and everyone.

Come on yar, if your r 30, it does not mean you can't marry?

The most annoying is Aman's dialogue. He keep bringing that age gap.

Let me read rest

Hi thanks for giving a chance to this story and provide ur honest comments it helps me improve... Coming back to khushis thoughts.. Khushi is too young to understand the dynamics of marriage for her even though arnav said that she can achieve her dreams she cant avoid the fact that she will be tied up in a relationship she is not ready for as marriage was never in her agenda...